[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Dreamer

[MetalLife]

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I present to you my first tease:

Dreamer - Where Dreams Might Come True

You find yourself in a deep deep sleep dreaming of what excites you the most....
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=70984

Features:

• Asian/Cosplay
• Focus on stroking and edging
• Tease & Denial
• Replayability due to randomization and customization

A dream consists of 4 consecutive stages, each consisting of a set number of rounds with girls teasing you. With each stage the girls will tease you even more. Which girls you'll be dreaming of and in what order will be randomized in every dream. In the final stage, one randomly chosen girl (depending on the girls who showed up before) will count you down, either resulting in an orgasm or in denial. You can set the number of girls and the chance to cum at the start of your dream.

There are currently 12 girls to discover and I basically got endless possiblities when it comes to new content.

Tell me what you think about it and who your favorite girl is and why :)
I appreciate the feedback!

PS: Even though the idea and the content is very similar, I swear I did not copy "Lust Dream" (https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=70950) by mhand. I was already working on mine when it came out

[boylad]

Just played it and have a few of suggestions. I don't think you lose anything by making the cum chance more customizable. 0% would mean you can play it while under denial, for example. Personally I think 10% increments from 0 to 100 work well. I also think going down to two girls, for a quickie session wouldn't be break the style of the tease. Having a max of more than 6 would also be fun for long edging sessions, although I get not wanting people to be able to see all the girls on a single run.

I only played once so maybe it's already part of it, but something nice would be to have a couple different variations, so even when it is a girl you've seen before, there might be some changes to what you've done before.

This one would be a lot more work, but I really enjoyed the style of this tease and I would love if there were more categories besides Asian/Cosplay. Having something like a category selection screen where you can choose what you want for the session, or random to just get it to choose for you. I get that it would require adding a lot of content, so probably something for if you decide to make a version 2.

But overall it is a great tease Definitely going to be playing it over the next days!

[MetalLife]

I don't think you lose anything by making the cum chance more customizable. 0% would mean you can play it while under denial, for example. Personally I think 10% increments from 0 to 100 work well. I also think going down to two girls, for a quickie session wouldn't be break the style of the tease. Having a max of more than 6 would also be fun for long edging sessions.

Thank you so much for your feedback.
You're totally right. If someone wants to see all of the 12 girls in one playthrough, then so be it. Also, to have the orgasm chance go from 0 to 100 makes totally sense to me, when I think about it now

I've implemented these two suggestions right away

As I've mentioned, I basically have no limit when it comes to content in this tease. So I can totally imagine having more variety and even more than just Asian/Cosplay.

[cyclones11]

Love the tease and adding more or categories would be awesome. I like that each girl has a different personality of sorts and has you jerk differently. Personally I like femdom so more of that would be awesome or a chance they make you ruin it. This would also be a lot of work but I think it would be cool if when they ask you questions you answer them and it changes the tease somehow. If that's changing or orgasm chance or results in more edging or something? For example some of them ask how you are holding up, you could have the option to say fine or struggling not to cum and that results in a slight variation to the session.

[Visitor from Bound Anna]

This is my waking life, not my sleeping one.
My suggestion is to be able to choose the girl line up, and also, who will be in the finale.
Nice work

[ecchi]

This tease instantly became one of my favorites. I have played this 3 times now and still need to see 5 of the girls, I would also like the option to choose the girls you are going to get. But maybe add it behind a password or something after completed game.

Will definitely keep playing until I have seen all the girls and I think I will also come back to this one whenever I'm feeling like it.

Would be interesting seeing more girls with focus on nipple play/torture/CBT/just teasing etc.

[Visitor from Bound Anna]

I would also like the option to choose the girls you are going to get. But maybe add it behind a password or something after completed game.

Definitely implement the finale choice if you have time. I would hate for it to be whats-her-name, the one with the lace robe who basically has no interest in you, thinks she's "all that".

Would be interesting seeing more girls with focus on nipple play/torture/CBT/just teasing etc.

As an option. seems to be very popular as is.

[RuRu_Hyung]

Hi, I liked the webtease, it is simple but effective ,

I already played it two times and i found all the girls be pretty and amazing so far , i must say that girls being random gives some combination that can result in harder experience but im not complaining .

In future i would like adding some girls based on some popular fetish (always if pics allow it) and although i prefer more asian girls i have no problem with the addition of western girls like others have suggest ,just be sure too keep high pictures quality as you did so far , all this could be optional , maybe leaves the user check/uncheck what they like and what not after you select the number of girls .

The only my 'problem' if i have to find one is about the last round , which i find it too fast in the sense that i would like arrive to the countdown gradually , at the moment instead you see the girl and after two pics she give the countdown , but this could be just me , maybe is better not edit the girls you have now (which could be bothersome ) but in future you could implement it if you decide to add more girls .

I think this webtease has plenty of potential to be expanded due to the nature of the webteases itself, for the moment i will enjoy it how it is which is already pretty good.

[MetalLife]

Thank you so much for your feedback so far!

I've just added a new feature to the tease: Lucid Dreams
(I've also added an option for a warm-up before the actual fun begins.)

Lucid dreams let you customize your experience. In simpler words, you can manually select the girls you'll be dreaming of (including the final stage). This also lets you enjoy the scenes of a single girl in their entirety. However, there's a catch of course. Only the girls who have previously finished your dreams (the girls who showed up in the final stage) will be available to choose from .

This should give you some new motivation to play the tease .

Regarding the feedback:
I will look into adding new fetishes/longer sessions/more interactive dreams. Most fetishes that were mentioned are actually not really my cup of tea, so I can't promise anything

[Daragorn]

I have just played it once and i have to say it was really a good tease, i really liked your style of writing and it was really hot.
I gave it a full 5 stars.
I agree it would be even more awesome if someone could decise to focus more on some particular fetish/interest but i can see it becoming a huge task for you to write too many stories eheh.

[Visitor from Bound Anna]

I agree it would be even more awesome if someone could decise to focus more on some particular fetish/interest but i can see it becoming a huge task for you to write too many stories eheh.

That's how you explore new things

[Eagle2909]

Really like it, but the confusing thing is one of the girl want you to put your dick back into the pants. If I use lube, this is the thing wont do.

[MetalLife]

Really like it, but the confusing thing is one of the girl want you to put your dick back into the pants. If I use lube, this is the thing wont do.

I totally get that . I tried to mix things up bit to prevent it from getting boring

[andreas261]

My favourite tease! haha
I love the girls and the replayability.

Suggestion: If possible at some point to add a choise eg. are you a tits or ass guy

keep up the good work and thanks for an awesome tease!

[xVixxix]

Fantastic Webtease! It has been a while I have been on here and I happen to stumble upon this one.
Keep up the work