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My first tease ---- Lust dream

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Hello, I just made my first webtease
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=70950
The beautiful coser will guided you to edge many times.
If you find any bugs or have any suggestion, please make comment here.
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Nice first tease!

Some small issues: during teasing bits text should be timed, you sometimes have a textual instruction during a teasing section that is untimed and then breaks the flow and allows the reader to wait as long as he wants. Also, instructions right before confirmation buttons should continue immediately. So "Edge!" should not have a delay but the "edge" button should appear immediately. During longer dialog, text should not be timed, so everybody can read at their own speed. These are just minor usability issues.

I liked that the tease gives you the choice not to cum. I would love to see sequels of that tease, maybe even something more complex. I like teases with some world building and exploring. Also, the edging and stroking could be much more intense. I'm thinking of teases like this: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=54028
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Re: My first tease ---- Lust dream

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Unfortunately I hear no beat in Firefox.
Can that be fixed please?
It looks like just my kind of tease,
so I would love to try it 💕
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mhand wrote: Sat Jun 08, 2024 5:13 pm Hello, I just made my first webtease
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=70950
The beautiful coser will guided you to edge many times.
If you find any bugs or have any suggestion, please make comment here.
Hey! Welcome! The usual place for tease topics like this is the "The Art of Webteasing" forum viewforum.php?f=2

You will probably find more feedback there.

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jos_nl_2004 wrote: Sun Jun 09, 2024 7:17 am Unfortunately I hear no beat in Firefox.
Can that be fixed please?
It looks like just my kind of tease,
so I would love to try it 💕
This looks like some strange EOS/Firefox issue. Firefox can play the audio files that are loaded by EOS, but it does not in the tease for some reason.
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Re: My first tease ---- Lust dream

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kerkersklave wrote: Sun Jun 09, 2024 4:33 pm
jos_nl_2004 wrote: Sun Jun 09, 2024 7:17 am Unfortunately I hear no beat in Firefox.
Can that be fixed please?
It looks like just my kind of tease,
so I would love to try it 💕
This looks like some strange EOS/Firefox issue. Firefox can play the audio files that are loaded by EOS, but it does not in the tease for some reason.
Maybe it's the same problem than here:
viewtopic.php?p=361079#p361079
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Re: My first tease ---- Lust dream

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Drool wrote: Sun Jun 09, 2024 5:11 pm Maybe it's the same problem than here:
viewtopic.php?p=361079#p361079
I've checked one of the files, and yes it is the same problem. Interesting that these files can be played by so many programs.
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Re: My first tease ---- Lust dream

Post by tsyogini »

I really liked how you achieved to establish a narrative in a very short time, I get my kicks more from narrative, a whole array of beautiful amazons can keep me cold without it.

But the edge, edge, edge, got a bit predictable over time, it would have blown my mind far more if there were more stroke to the metronome sections in between.

But that said, for a first tease a very laudable effort, and with that in mind 5 stars :)
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