The music was a great addition, but I felt like it could have been timed better to give the whole thing more impact. Specifically,
- it would have been cool to see the messages displayed when the music did those bass swells. Also,
- the track ended before the title of the upcoming tease was shown, and that killed the momentum you were building throughout. To fix that, I would start a stopwatch from when the music ends until when the title is displayed in order to find out how many seconds need to be shaved off of the "video". Then I would shorten the delay timers for the text images (which lasted on the screen for a bit longer than they needed to) so that the whole "video" lasts that many seconds fewer in total.
It would be pretty difficult to make it have both of those things, but if it is possible I think it would be that much better!
Another thing I would suggest when releasing non-tease teases would be to make clear what your creation is in the description. I think a lot of the negative ratings your tease is getting are from people who click on your creation, expecting to masturbate or something, but only see a trailer for a tease. If people know what they are going to see when they click on the link, they will be kinder with the ratings (which in-turn will lead to more views because the rating of the tease is higher).
Anyways, those were my thoughts on the "New title" tease by Longplay1. Thanks for making this tease and pushing our ideas of what can be made in Eos! I'm sure your unique tease will serve as inspiration for current and future creators!

