[Feedback] Do you like what I'm wearing?

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[Feedback] Do you like what I'm wearing?

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Hello everyone,

this is the feedback thread for my first tease:

Do you like what I'm wearing?
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https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=42265


Please let me know if you encounter any issues or simply share your opinions.

Thanks for playing!


Changelog:
  • Fixed missing speed meter during second Wicked Beat
  • Fixed Wicked Beat stopping after 3 minutes
  • Fixed Emily constantly putting on and off her jacket during first Wicked Beat by showing images sequentially instead of randomly.
Last edited by undeniable_denial on Sat Dec 28, 2019 9:59 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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A very nice tease, thank you as well. Hope there's a continuation in the works!
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Loved it, too!
Hoping for continuation and hopefully a ruined orgasm after all this building up :)
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This was very well written. Personally for me, it's too gentle, way too gentle, but I still enjoyed it. It was hot.
And those outfits were really sexy. The only thing I didn't like was the ...
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Open ending... like what am I supposed to do after that half an hour? :-D (if I just overlooked those instructions, then I am sorry, my bad)
As others have mentioned, I too hope there will be a continuation.
I gave it 4/5
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Hammerkeg wrote: Tue Dec 24, 2019 9:31 pm Hope there's a continuation in the works!
Ruino wrote: Wed Dec 25, 2019 1:38 am Hoping for continuation and hopefully a ruined orgasm after all this building up :)
Pyro wrote: Wed Dec 25, 2019 8:16 am As others have mentioned, I too hope there will be a continuation.
:-D I am currently experimenting with ideas for a part 2. It will likely happen, but it is going to take a while.
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This was very enjoyable!
I think this is a good tease to get people into edging, actually.

How did you program the wicked beat? Is it a loop?
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itslate wrote: Sun Dec 29, 2019 6:14 am How did you program the wicked beat? Is it a loop?
It is a 3-minute mp3. I made it in a music software using a click track and an automation track that modifies bpm.
The page loops, but that is mostly for the gallery. The mp3 just plays across pages in the background (asynchronously as the cool kids say)
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Post by ridinglife9 »

I love the Wicked Beat - Endless mode!!
Its a great idea and i want to keep coming back to it.
my only gripe is the pictures. I know there are better pictures of that model, if she is the one you want to use.
I played your tease honestly, but i got a little bored.
Please do this one again, with her or a different model, or a lot of different models that look like her.
Thank you!
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Unfortunately, I had to take down the "Endless Mode", because of performance issues and a buggy metronome on weaker PCs.
I will think about what to do with the pictures. Thanks for the feedback.
It will be back once the issues are fixed which is hopefully in the next days.
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The seperate bonus tease "Emily's Wicked Beat - Endless Mode" is now visible again! Sorry for the initial problems.

Regarding the poor picture choice, I have decided to release it without any pictures at all this time because it was never my intention for you to keep staring at it but rather to keep it open in another tab or on your phone.
It could not possibly keep you entertained long enough with any pictures.

I hope some of you can have fun with it.

Thank you for rating DylwIw so high. I almost cannot believe my first tease ever has been nominated for TOTM!
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undeniable_denial wrote: Sun Jan 05, 2020 10:35 pm The seperate bonus tease "Emily's Wicked Beat - Endless Mode" is now visible again! Sorry for the initial problems.

Regarding the poor picture choice, I have decided to release it without any pictures at all this time because it was never my intention for you to keep staring at it but rather to keep it open in another tab or on your phone.
It could not possibly keep you entertained long enough with any pictures.
This makes sense now. Love the idea of this. Love the idea of a challenge based on trying to get farther each time, or breaks happening less and less. Very ladder like. :)
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First tease I've played in a while. Enjoyed it.
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Should have seen the ending coming from your name!
Agree with the earlier comment of a good intro to edging. Two simple games and well done.
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Thank you, it means a lot, legendary Shattered! I'm flattered you recommended my tease to a poor denied soul. You're a mean one!
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I'm glad he did! I'd been planning to give it a go, but had different ideas for 'breaking my fast'. This turned out to be petfect. The timing of everything was exactly right. The slow stroke edging (yes I made it each time) and following recovery times were perfect to leave me a dripping mess, dieing for more. I actually think it was ideal for after some denial time as I'm not sure I'd have been able to hit all the edges otherwise. I'm sure I'll revisit it again. I nearly did the very next day. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you.
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undeniable_denial wrote: Wed Jan 15, 2020 3:42 am Thank you, it means a lot, legendary Shattered! I'm flattered you recommended my tease to a poor denied soul. You're a mean one!
Hehe thanks, I couldn't resist after I met the same fate :)
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