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[RELEASE] Cock Hero: Descent Episode 1

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I am proud to present my first full length Cock Hero video. Coming in at just over 46 minutes, Descent Episode 1 is a mostly-softcore video designed with progression in mind.

If your definition of a challenge is ultra-hardcore content with never ending machine gun beats, this is not the video for you. If you like mostly softcore teases and progression into hardcore, you will probably like this video.

This video descends from videos like Audition, Edging vs Twerking, Redlight/Greenlight, ZART/HART, Earn Your Release, Crescendo, and others I can't remember right now. I took my favorite elements of these videos and emulsified them into a tease that will lead you through a descent into harder content.

Lastly, I would like to thank all of the creators who helped me get here. I have been lurking since 2013 and I've always wanted to make a Cock Hero. It wouldn't have been possible without the help and inspiration of the creators who came before me. A big shoutout to pl3b for the After Effects beatmeter plugin, to kerkersklave for the java beatmeter layout tool, and to Pseudonym for the moral support, suggestions, and feedback.

As of June 4th, 2019, I've uploaded the final version of the video. Thanks to all the early viewers for their comments and suggestions. I've tried to take everyone into account with the changes and additions to the video.

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This is an incredibly strong first showing; I'm impressed! As you mentioned, there's a few places where the editing could be tightened up, but the artistic design and direction is really good.

In an effort to provide some constructive criticism, here's a few super tiny nitpicks on the editing:
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  • In the beginning, the audible beats aligned to the lyrics "focus on my love" feel like they're lagging very slightly behind the lyrics. When the other beats come in alongside them (synced to the instruments), those other beats feel in sync, but the lyric beats still feel like they're lagging. I'm not sure exactly why. It's the only place in the video that feels out of sync to me, but it's unfortunate to open with that -- less charitable viewers might judge the video by its cover, so to speak.
  • Some of the not-quite-reveal cuts feel almost like they were cut too late. I don't really know how to quantify that -- I can't think of any reason why cutting at the last possible frame shouldn't work just fine. It could very well be down to some weird perception thing on my part, so unless other viewers report the same thing (or if you experiment and like something else better), my word on this isn't strong enough to justify changing things.
  • 31:40 changes from a fast beat (xxxx) to a slower beat (x-x-), but has a slight gap between them (xxxx--x-x-). Maybe you intended this, but it felt a little odd to me.
Again, these are pretty small nitpicks for a prerelease, but there's not a lot that jumps out at me for me to criticize. I'm looking forward to the final release. Great work, keep at it!
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Really great work, especially for your first cockhero.
How did you combine the Beatmeter-Generator with the After Effects plugin, do you use the exported beat times? Just curious on how my program is used.

With respect to the video, I have a few points that mostly reflect my personal tastes:
  • I like the red/green-light and edging sequences a lot, but I would like a beatmeter for all the stroking sequences. In the last round it almost perfect. (An edge/hold timer and a edging/holding beat would be a further improvement, but it is nothing that I really miss.)
  • Some of the breaks are too long for my taste (when the red bar appears for a extended period of time).
  • I like the more unusual beat patterns in the beginning and the end.
  • The base speed of the beats is good, keeps me properly horny. But the long sequences of steady beats are a bit monotonous, that could be interrupted my faster and more complex beat patterns.
  • I like the content. I enjoy hard-core cock-heros as well, but I like that there is a large variety of different content. Keeps it interesting.
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Wow. What an impressive debut, congratulations @fragrant Emulsion! I really enjoyed this one,
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especially the part with the Tits was very good and Miss Noir made my mind go :w00t: and the final part with Uma Jolie was brilliant too. What a ride! Very nice how you did the editing to the flow of the music, especially in the final round with the refrain. Made my day. I found some lost images in between the rounds but I dont remember where. The combination of CH and red/green was fun too. Especially when the music you chose for green had a clear beat pattern to follow. Thank you for making this. A++
Another impressive example that shows that you don´t need hardcore to light the flame. Keep up the good work
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Great work fragrentEmulsion. Fantastic scene selection. I hadn't seen 95% of the video you used and I've seen almost everything, or so I thought. That was a HUGE treat. Fantastic music selection as well. Really cool music that I hadn't heard before and it went really well with the video. (Where did you find the music?) I thought this was really great...especially for a first video.
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This doesn't need much polish at all. There are some very slight sync problems as already mentioned in a few areas. I like the use of the RedLightGreenLight bar and the beatmeter. I personally feel like they should be kept separate though and not try to blend them together. For me, I need the text prompts to go slower and stay on screen longer. My eyes go look at the pretty girls...hey wait there is text, my brain goes hey I need to read that...switch from looking into reading mode...stop starring at the pretty girls and turn on reading mode...hey dumb-ass you need to read that...hey wait, what did that say...I didn't finish that. The first section, for me, needs a little tweaking. I personally like to start with a nice slow, long warm up. I LOVE your music and video selection for the first section, but the beat pattern is so random that I have to spend all my time concentrating on the beatmeter and I miss looking at the pretty girls in the video and with all that concentrating it's hard for me to get hard. I'd rather see a really simple stroke pattern or start off with a green bar for the first section. Next, I really liked the "boob drop" section although I wish it went on a little longer and I actually got to see all the boobs drop in the end...I felt a little cheated rather then denied because you didn't show them all drop in the end. I LOVED the BDSM section. You achieved the elusive "dreamlike state" that I've been looking for. The way it draws you in is sublime and the content is right on point. I love the Uma section, she is a favorite of mine. I love the continuation of that section, I just about lost there. Great work!!!
Please enjoy my other creations:
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CH-Little Caprice
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CH-Night & Day
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RLGL-Featuring Lesbian Lovers
Ultimate Edging Challenge-Blowjob Edition
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Thank you all for the praise and criticism. I will address these things.
zingg2 wrote: Sun May 26, 2019 10:08 am In an effort to provide some constructive criticism, here's a few super tiny nitpicks on the editing:
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  • In the beginning, the audible beats aligned to the lyrics "focus on my love" feel like they're lagging very slightly behind the lyrics. When the other beats come in alongside them (synced to the instruments), those other beats feel in sync, but the lyric beats still feel like they're lagging. I'm not sure exactly why. It's the only place in the video that feels out of sync to me, but it's unfortunate to open with that -- less charitable viewers might judge the video by its cover, so to speak.
  • Some of the not-quite-reveal cuts feel almost like they were cut too late. I don't really know how to quantify that -- I can't think of any reason why cutting at the last possible frame shouldn't work just fine. It could very well be down to some weird perception thing on my part, so unless other viewers report the same thing (or if you experiment and like something else better), my word on this isn't strong enough to justify changing things.
  • 31:40 changes from a fast beat (xxxx) to a slower beat (x-x-), but has a slight gap between them (xxxx--x-x-). Maybe you intended this, but it felt a little odd to me.
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1) I will look at it, it probably needs to be scooted a few frames.
2) I agree with you, stylistically I am torn between nip-slips and not, but I think that the culprit here is that much of that content was taken from gfycat and there may be some kind of weird frame blending shit going on.
3) I've noticed this too, I'll probably re-render the beat meters across the board after checking them all for errors.
kerkersklave wrote: Sun May 26, 2019 11:33 am Really great work, especially for your first cockhero.
How did you combine the Beatmeter-Generator with the After Effects plugin, do you use the exported beat times? Just curious on how my program is used.
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With respect to the video, I have a few points that mostly reflect my personal tastes:
  • I like the red/green-light and edging sequences a lot, but I would like a beatmeter for all the stroking sequences. In the last round it almost perfect. (An edge/hold timer and a edging/holding beat would be a further improvement, but it is nothing that I really miss.)
  • Some of the breaks are too long for my taste (when the red bar appears for a extended period of time).
  • I like the more unusual beat patterns in the beginning and the end.
  • The base speed of the beats is good, keeps me properly horny. But the long sequences of steady beats are a bit monotonous, that could be interrupted my faster and more complex beat patterns.
  • I like the content. I enjoy hard-core cock-heros as well, but I like that there is a large variety of different content. Keeps it interesting.
I use your java tool specifically to generate the .wav beatmap, and then I feed that data into the aftereffects plugin. What I like about your tool is the ability to create a bpm "backbone" and then snap beat patterns to that backbone. All in all, the process of taking a song, breaking it down into chunks, snapping beat patterns to it, and then exporting to a rendered beatmeter takes me about 45 minutes if the song isn't too complicated. I was going to use a few tracks suggested to me in a previous thread (pAntYrAiD - Like That), but trying to align beats to those songs proved almost impossible.
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1) I want to implement a timer, and will probably spend the time to implement some sort of ring counter like in earn your release. (If anyone has pointers here, lmk). To clarify, you like the green/red stuff, but would rather the green sections be a beatmeter? I think the reason I like the green sections is that I can attach to different sounds in the music depending on my mood.
2 & 4) I agree, however the really long break in the middle of the Miss Noir round is intentional. I will see what I can do though. One issue I have is that I don't want to over-step the music, and that track in particular is a techno metronome.
3) I will attribute these patterns to the songs themselves and not my machinations. Every new song that I hear now is analyzed for the best stroking pattern. Stylistically, I prefer to let the music's beat pattern do the work for me rather than force a pattern onto it. But yeah, I'm particularly fond of the beat in the final section.
Mr123 wrote: Sun May 26, 2019 12:20 pm Wow. What an impressive debut, congratulations @fragrant Emulsion! I really enjoyed this one,
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especially the part with the Tits was very good and Miss Noir made my mind go :w00t: and the final part with Uma Jolie was brilliant too. What a ride! Very nice how you did the editing to the flow of the music, especially in the final round with the refrain. Made my day. I found some lost images in between the rounds but I dont remember where. The combination of CH and red/green was fun too. Especially when the music you chose for green had a clear beat pattern to follow. Thank you for making this. A++
Another impressive example that shows that you don´t need hardcore to light the flame. Keep up the good work
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I'll try to get those <redacted> beatmeters for you soon.

I've noticed a few ghost frames myself, my problem is that I usually forget where they are because I'm preoccupied.

My editing style involves listening for musical flows and then dropping a mark whenever there's a pattern, then I snap the scenes in between those marks. It seems almost automatic in this way but I like the results. I am wondering if I can achieve something similar with programming.
digitalparkinglot wrote: Sun May 26, 2019 1:47 pm Great work fragrentEmulsion. Fantastic scene selection. I hadn't seen 95% of the video you used and I've seen almost everything, or so I thought. That was a HUGE treat. Fantastic music selection as well. Really cool music that I hadn't heard before and it went really well with the video. (Where did you find the music?) I thought this was really great...especially for a first video.
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This doesn't need much polish at all. There are some very slight sync problems as already mentioned in a few areas. I like the use of the RedLightGreenLight bar and the beatmeter. I personally feel like they should be kept separate though and not try to blend them together. For me, I need the text prompts to go slower and stay on screen longer. My eyes go look at the pretty girls...hey wait there is text, my brain goes hey I need to read that...switch from looking into reading mode...stop starring at the pretty girls and turn on reading mode...hey dumb-ass you need to read that...hey wait, what did that say...I didn't finish that. The first section, for me, needs a little tweaking. I personally like to start with a nice slow, long warm up. I LOVE your music and video selection for the first section, but the beat pattern is so random that I have to spend all my time concentrating on the beatmeter and I miss looking at the pretty girls in the video and with all that concentrating it's hard for me to get hard. I'd rather see a really simple stroke pattern or start off with a green bar for the first section. Next, I really liked the "boob drop" section although I wish it went on a little longer and I actually got to see all the boobs drop in the end...I felt a little cheated rather then denied because you didn't show them all drop in the end. I LOVED the BDSM section. You achieved the elusive "dreamlike state" that I've been looking for. The way it draws you in is sublime and the content is right on point. I love the Uma section, she is a favorite of mine. I love the continuation of that section, I just about lost there. Great work!!!
A lot of the porn came from amateur and solo girl content. Some of it is in this grey area where the women producing it aren't releasing it on porn platforms (youtube try on videos) but they have to be aware that their audience masturbates to it right? I think Nastya Nass is definitely aware of it, because most of her solo shots are at a high angle that doesn't give you any rearpussy view. Generally I prefer amateur to big studios, though my problem with this is that, often, the video is out of focus or poorly shot.

Some of the music came from producers on deadmau5's label mau5trap (i_o, No Mana, Sara Landry). He knows how to pick good producers, and considering that songs like Hey Baby and Sexslave sort of kickstarted my interest in this genre of porn, I am naturally drawn to the artists on this label.

Some of the music was autosuggested to me via the holy youtube algorithm. Alot of it came from two channels: DJ Smile (this guy has three channels and probably edits PMVs because alot of the video content is from random russian softcore porn), and Miss Hentai Music, a channel that finds relatively dirty music and animates a random hentai/anime girl to react to the music. Though both of these channels edited the music so I had to find the original mix.

Some of the music I just stumbled on randomly via artists I already listen to. Yaeji's Focus remix is an example of this. I really wanted to use Raingurl ever since I heard it, but Crescendo beat me to that song.

Music selection is more important to me than porn selection. The song is the primary component that sets the production apart from a regular porn compilation.
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2) I agree with you that there should be a better transition between the two and I'm working on coming up with a solution. I'm thinking that I should change from bars to some sort of circle timer that appears over the central beat indicator when it isn't in use. That way the transition would look clean and smooth and not be jarring.
3) I read extremely fast so this wasn't something I was aware of, but I will work on it. Maybe the placement of the text is a problem too. It reads like an error message in an IDE and not like tease text or instructional text. Replacing the bars with some sort of circle timer will probably make it easier for me to position the text in a legible location.
4) I agree with your critique of the first section. I think the confusing part of the beat is that it goes x--xxxxx--x. It would be better as x--xxxxx--- as that last beat doesn't feel natural to hit. Also, i will probably add another slower paced round before it to warm up.
5) Showing all of the boobs drop was actually planned, I just ran out of real estate in the song, so I will look to see what I can possibly do about it. I have some ideas.
6) Your Tracy Lindsay video was a big inspiration for me.
7) The Uma round was a treat to make and it comes from the fact that in Audition 4 I felt like she was the final boss. The music in the last section sort of brings me back to the music that Pseudonym used for the Uma round in A4.
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Great video! What's the name of the first girl (in the Alphalete gymwear)? Thanks!
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allmynaughtythings wrote: Sun May 26, 2019 7:11 pm Great video! What's the name of the first girl (in the Alphalete gymwear)? Thanks!
Natalie Roush. There are no nudes unfortunately.
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Wow what a masterpiece! I don't know about that need for polishing, it's already I'm my top 5 and don't really know where I would start making improvements. I'm an amateur musician and bad beatmeter/music/audio/video syncs annoy me, but I think 97% was so good that I wouldn't touch anything (although, have to take the feedbacks about visual/audio sync with a grain of salt, as different users may have setups that suffer from a huge variety of overall lag in their displays, and why not in their audios as well - for example my 2 displays are like 30 ms and 90 ms overall video lag - for me the amount of 50 ms is noticeable, but I could't really tell which way if I didn't know so I'd need trial and error, for me it takes over 100 ms difference between audio and video before I can tell right away what corrections to make). I didn't make it all the way so I'll try to write more if I get thru.

You have such a great taste in choosing hot things to show and a great touch with challenging and curious amounts of strokes and other things. I Think I had the best time I've had this year playing this, if not more. I think it was fresh, exciting, high quality in everything, and something pretty atmospheric and immersive going on.

If I had to choose just one series of CH or just one author for this night, and all nights to come, it might be this!
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Alright, here we go!

I just quickly scrolled through the video and HOLY DAMN does it look FANTASTIC!

So fantastic in fact that I had to log in and tell ya!

This already looks better than 95% of all the Cock Hero's out there, and im pretty sure i've seen em all.

Great video quality, full 1080p everything looks superb!

And the scenes are looking wonderful too! Love the softcore erotic stuff!

Cant wait to check out the whole video later! Cant wait to see more from you!

This genuinley seems like the perfect video for me.

Fantastic work!
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This was amazing. I generally prefer the more hardcore cock heros, but this was extremely well done.
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That and Uma Jolie is among my favs so that was super fucking hard for an ending.
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thatsprettyhot wrote: Mon May 27, 2019 12:20 am
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Wow what a masterpiece! I don't know about that need for polishing, it's already I'm my top 5 and don't really know where I would start making improvements. I'm an amateur musician and bad beatmeter/music/audio/video syncs annoy me, but I think 97% was so good that I wouldn't touch anything (although, have to take the feedbacks about visual/audio sync with a grain of salt, as different users may have setups that suffer from a huge variety of overall lag in their displays, and why not in their audios as well - for example my 2 displays are like 30 ms and 90 ms overall video lag - for me the amount of 50 ms is noticeable, but I could't really tell which way if I didn't know so I'd need trial and error, for me it takes over 100 ms difference between audio and video before I can tell right away what corrections to make). I didn't make it all the way so I'll try to write more if I get thru.

You have such a great taste in choosing hot things to show and a great touch with challenging and curious amounts of strokes and other things. I Think I had the best time I've had this year playing this, if not more. I think it was fresh, exciting, high quality in everything, and something pretty atmospheric and immersive going on.

If I had to choose just one series of CH or just one author for this night, and all nights to come, it might be this!
Woah woah woah, this is high praise I'm not even done yet, I might completely fuck it up in season 8. Furthermore there are still a whole 6 months for someone else to release something even better.
Haxed11 wrote: Mon May 27, 2019 1:16 am This already looks better than 95% of all the Cock Hero's out there, and im pretty sure i've seen em all.

Great video quality, full 1080p everything looks superb!
Yeah I ran out of new CH videos and decided to make my own. I need to create some sort of rotation list where I give them all like a 3 month cool-down or something. I've also thought about using memory loss drugs to keep the experience fresh but I think that's more a fantasy and less a reality.

To be fair, many of the clips come from 720p sources, or 1080p but shitty encodes, or html5 gfycat gifs, but I rendered it at 1080 to take advantage of the full 1080p clips I did use. Some of the text looks pretty bad, but it was placeholder anyway.
Lanyx wrote: Mon May 27, 2019 2:21 am This was amazing. I generally prefer the more hardcore cock heros, but this was extremely well done.
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That and Uma Jolie is among my favs so that was super fucking hard for an ending.
She is one of my favorites too. I think I have a navel fetish and she has a really nice tummy.
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Note: I didn't have that much time, so I skipped forward quite a bit.

I agree with the general sentiment that your editing is mostly of great quality already. Still I would like to offer a few points of constructive criticism.
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1. The entire video is girl-only and focused on either the viewer or girl on girl(which is great), except for the ending. Suddenly there are cocks of other guys. I found this quite jarring and a big turnoff.
2. The ending/finish only lasts for 15 seconds and doesn't seem suited for a finish. There is no audible orgasm instruction, the cock that's there is neither POV nor ejaculating. Totally unsatisfying.
Given the style of the video having multiple (overlapping?) JOI endings lasting much longer + a cooldown afterwards would have been much better.
3. I'm not a fan of long intros either, but starting the stroking without even a "Get naked and ready to stroke." was a bit much. Also this won't work at all for people unfamiliar with CH videos.
I hope I didn't come over as harsh. I'm just trying to be direct and focus on what can be improved.
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Triple Alfa wrote: Tue May 28, 2019 9:19 am Note: I didn't have that much time, so I skipped forward quite a bit.

I agree with the general sentiment that your editing is mostly of great quality already. Still I would like to offer a few points of constructive criticism.
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1. The entire video is girl-only and focused on either the viewer or girl on girl(which is great), except for the ending. Suddenly there are cocks of other guys. I found this quite jarring and a big turnoff.
2. The ending/finish only lasts for 15 seconds and doesn't seem suited for a finish. There is no audible orgasm instruction, the cock that's there is neither POV nor ejaculating. Totally unsatisfying.
Given the style of the video having multiple (overlapping?) JOI endings lasting much longer + a cooldown afterwards would have been much better.
3. I'm not a fan of long intros either, but starting the stroking without even a "Get naked and ready to stroke." was a bit much. Also this won't work at all for people unfamiliar with CH videos.
I hope I didn't come over as harsh. I'm just trying to be direct and focus on what can be improved.
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1) I understand this sentiment completely, as this is something that I have felt in the past as specifically I get almost kind of jealous when I can turn that cock into a person and not a prop. To be fair, perhaps you skipped it, but there is a specific part that says "Cum now if you don't want to watch Uma suck cock." That I added as a trigger warning for these people. I also thought I said "there's boy girl at the end" in the post but I think I may have deleted that. Furthermore, in the previous two rounds there is very obvious foreshadowing. First I use the same Uma scenes where she is about to go down, and then I use dildo BJ scenes in a later round. My point is that if you are paying attention, it's not a surprise.

2) So you wish that the ending did have POV ejaculation, in spite of your distaste for it? I can understand wanting to have an audible stroke timer etc, however I found that in my play through I was on the edge for that entire round and didn't have difficulty cumming in that short amount of time. You know some Cock Heros, especially the early ones, didn't even have a cum countdown, the video just ended. Perhaps I should go back to that formula? Idk I think that's kind of lame though, I will work on the cum section.

3) I'm working on this, I agree with that point. I didn't want to put the effort in to "normiefy" the video because I knew that most everyone on this forum pretty much knew what to do. I am going to add a section at the beginning that is slower and intended for warmup.
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Great series. All the great stuff has already been said, but I really like your style. I wish someone made something with equally good editing in VR. I love the combination of green/blue/red and beatmeter, and ofcourse the choice of music. We only differ in taste in girls - you like yours too young!
But all in all a GREAT production! Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
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