Cruel Intentions part 2 - ideas?

Achab1851 · Post by **Achab1851** » Sat Mar 16, 2019 5:27 pm

Hi everybody,

given the decent rating of "Cruel Intentions", I was thinking of some ideas to start writing the second chapter and improve the series.

Unfortunately I have not received feedback on the topic, so I would like to take this opportunity to understand:

- what you liked and could insert again;
- what you did not like and which I should correct;
- new challenges you would like to find;

Although Adrienn Levai is one of my favorite models, for this new chapter I would like to change the protagonist but remain in the same style. I was thinking about other busty girls like Dana Harem, Paige Phillips or Candace Leilani. Any other suggestions?

Thanks in advance to everyone!

onlytropics · Post by **onlytropics** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 1:39 am

I did like the tease, and nearly voted for it ... but then I didn't

but that tease was a close second choice on the vote for me.
The pacing was really good, iirc. And the girl is so hot, great choice. I just did not like the degradation (I'm not into that) and the fact that I should call her Goddess. That title is a bit too much for my taste.
But that's only me

Achab1851 · Post by **Achab1851** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 3:21 am

onlytropics wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 1:39 am I did like the tease, and nearly voted for it ... but then I didn't but that tease was a close second choice on the vote for me.
The pacing was really good, iirc. And the girl is so hot, great choice. I just did not like the degradation (I'm not into that) and the fact that I should call her Goddess. That title is a bit too much for my taste.
But that's only me

Ok this is important, thanks for your opinion!
As I said Adrienn is one of my favorite models. If the series goes on I could think of inserting it again.

FATALES · Post by **FATALES** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 7:51 am

More similar models. Write names.

tckt78 · Post by **tckt78** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 2:37 pm

I know people are back and forth on it, but I really like a beat meter to set my stroking to. It's especially good for those super slow strokes you have in there (which are highly underrated in most teases). The other option if you're really opposed to an audio stroke sound is to simply put the number of strokes to complete in the time allowed.

Toys would also be interesting to incorporate. Something like imtoosexy's Arouse & Obey tease did with a butt plug. Looking forward to it!!

Achab1851 · Post by **Achab1851** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 3:50 pm

FATALES wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 7:51 am More similar models. Write names.

Sure! I was thinking for example:

Shelby Chesnes
Taylor Seinturier
Dana Harem
Paige Phillips
Candace Leilani
Jessie Cabanne
Emma Glover
Yesenia Bustillo (not so busty but very hot imho)

Unfortunately some photoshoots are quite difficult to find, so I will need some time.

Achab1851 · Post by **Achab1851** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 3:53 pm

tckt78 wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 2:37 pm I know people are back and forth on it, but I really like a beat meter to set my stroking to. It's especially good for those super slow strokes you have in there (which are highly underrated in most teases). The other option if you're really opposed to an audio stroke sound is to simply put the number of strokes to complete in the time allowed.

Toys would also be interesting to incorporate. Something like imtoosexy's Arouse & Obey tease did with a butt plug. Looking forward to it!!

Yes the beat meter was part of the original project, unfortunately I can't understand how to insert it. As you rightly said, you make it better in slow strokes sessions, adding that touch of frustration that I love very much. If I could insert it I could edit the tease with this new option and maybe something more. A 2.0 version to understand us.
I don't know much about toys, I'll try to figure it out.
Thank you.

FATALES · Post by **FATALES** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 4:01 pm

Achab1851 wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 3:50 pm
FATALES wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 7:51 am More similar models. Write names.
Sure! I was thinking for example:

Shelby Chesnes
Taylor Seinturier
Dana Harem
Paige Phillips
Candace Leilani
Jessie Cabanne
Emma Glover
Yesenia Bustillo (not so busty but very hot imho)

Unfortunately some photoshoots are quite difficult to find, so I will need some time.

THX very deluxe hot girls. I believe that such models are hard to find.

Achab1851 · Post by **Achab1851** » Sun Mar 17, 2019 4:12 pm

FATALES wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 4:01 pm
Achab1851 wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 3:50 pm
FATALES wrote: Sun Mar 17, 2019 7:51 am More similar models. Write names.
Sure! I was thinking for example:

Shelby Chesnes
Taylor Seinturier
Dana Harem
Paige Phillips
Candace Leilani
Jessie Cabanne
Emma Glover
Yesenia Bustillo (not so busty but very hot imho)

Unfortunately some photoshoots are quite difficult to find, so I will need some time.
THX very deluxe hot girls. I believe that such models are hard to find.

I do my best. I'm sure there are many others I don't know. Therefore suggestions are welcome!

Achab1851 · Post by **Achab1851** » Thu Apr 04, 2019 2:53 pm

Guys,

The tease is 90% complete, I'm writing the last passages. Once completed I will open a dedicated feedback topic.

However I still can't insert the audio files for the metronome.

I created and saved the files with this program: http://metronomer.com/ and I uploaded them to Nyx like I do with images.

You confirm to me that the correct line to insert in the scripts is: hidden:sound('nameofthefile.mp3'). I have tried many times but without success.

Thanks in advance.

onlytropics · Post by **onlytropics** » Thu Apr 04, 2019 5:41 pm

Achab1851 wrote: Thu Apr 04, 2019 2:53 pm You confirm to me that the correct line to insert in the scripts is: hidden:sound('nameofthefile.mp3'). I have tried many times but without success.

You have to separate commands with commas, so it is more like
,hidden:sound('file.mp3')
but it has definitely been some time till I played with those things.
Searching the forum for 'hidden sound' brings up some posts which should be helpful.

Apart from that, I can only encourage you to try the EOS editor. You can't convert Nyx into EOS though, so you would have to copy and paste all your texts. Sound is really easy to do there though. Link: https://milovana.com/eos/editor/teases

Achab1851 · Post by **Achab1851** » Thu Apr 04, 2019 5:47 pm

onlytropics wrote: Thu Apr 04, 2019 5:41 pm
Achab1851 wrote: Thu Apr 04, 2019 2:53 pm You confirm to me that the correct line to insert in the scripts is: hidden:sound('nameofthefile.mp3'). I have tried many times but without success.
You have to separate commands with commas, so it is more like
,hidden:sound('file.mp3')
but it has definitely been some time till I played with those things.
Searching the forum for 'hidden sound' brings up some posts which should be helpful.

Apart from that, I can only encourage you to try the EOS editor. You can't convert Nyx into EOS though, so you would have to copy and paste all your texts. Sound is really easy to do there though. Link: https://milovana.com/eos/editor/teases

You're great, it works! It was that comma that was missing!
Thanks for the advice, for the next tease I'll see just using EOS.

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