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Deity Denial feedback thread

Post by Shattered » Sun Apr 15, 2018 12:48 am

Here is the new tease

I wanted to see how much an hour gives me, from conception of an idea to writing it and publishing. So this is a short 40 page tease written in an hour. I briefly checked the pages worked, but I had to fit that in an hour so I hope it's alright!

Fairly straightforward pain, stroking, and denial :)

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Post by chefboyrdee » Sun Apr 15, 2018 5:42 pm

That was great! I really enjoyed it, thanks for the fun.

Who is the model and where did you find those pictures? She's quite gorgeous.

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Re: Deity Denial feedback thread

Post by Philze » Sun Apr 15, 2018 5:45 pm

Short and mean! Loved it
Es kann kein Zufall sein, dass sich Lust auf Frust reimt..

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Re: Deity Denial feedback thread

Post by dragoul » Sun Apr 15, 2018 9:19 pm

I loved it. I'd love to see a longer version of it. Maybe a second part with a chance to cum?

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Re: Deity Denial feedback thread

Post by Shattered » Mon Apr 16, 2018 12:14 am

chefboyrdee wrote:
Sun Apr 15, 2018 5:42 pm
That was great! I really enjoyed it, thanks for the fun.

Who is the model and where did you find those pictures? She's quite gorgeous.
Philze wrote:
Sun Apr 15, 2018 5:45 pm
Short and mean! Loved it
Thanks :) She is Xia Mei Jiang featured in some of my other teases as well. Pictures mostly from Mr. Cong.
dragoul wrote:
Sun Apr 15, 2018 9:19 pm
I loved it. I'd love to see a longer version of it. Maybe a second part with a chance to cum?
Heh, maybe :P This was very spur of the moment, I don't say no but isn't on my radar at the moment :)

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Re: Deity Denial feedback thread

Post by Kaelis » Mon Apr 16, 2018 2:49 am

Short, sweet and I'm on my second day of denial for Godess Xia now.

Should start getting fun once I hit a week... :w00t:

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Re: Deity Denial feedback thread

Post by lala888 » Tue Apr 17, 2018 4:36 pm

I also loved it. For just 1 hour it is a very well written tease!
I`m in denial since day 1. Will see how long I can keep going.
I really hope there will be a sequel. Maybe with a tiny chance to cum to keep the hopes up every day ;-)

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