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Tease feedback - Teased by sin

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This is a pseudo standalone tease. It can be played alone just fine, but if you are into chastity/my main series then you can also play it alongside another tease linked below.

Tease link : https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=35736
Accompanying tease link: https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=35396

I welcome any feedback, thoughts, whatever. Tis nice to hear if people have enjoyed the tease.

Guideme version here.
The guideme version is especially...odd, the images didn't go how I expected, so that needs testing. Let me know how it goes, might be alright be consider it potentially has issues. There are a few (smaller) bugs in the guideme version right now, and I'll be updating the guideme version in a week or so.

Also another poll based on how you end this tease if you are doing this as standalone!
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http://www.strawpoll.me/14218523
Also a link to my old teases can be found in my signature if you'd like to do those first. It will be updated to have the new tease soon.

Think that is it. Enjoy!
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can't wait to test it out, please add guideme version soon!
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paswis wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 3:17 pm can't wait to test it out, please add guideme version soon!
I've made one, it has turned out differently than last time and I'm not sure why, so if you want to try feel free and hopefully it won't be broken?
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When choosing a class and you select anything but pervert and it returns you to the selection screen she says "I accept this number" probably you linked to the page accessed by the codes or something like this.
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killer1243 wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:03 pm
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When choosing a class and you select anything but pervert and it returns you to the selection screen she says "I accept this number" probably you linked to the page accessed by the codes or something like this.
Should be fixed now, didn't affect the order just a remnant of an older version of the tease :)
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Clicking on virtues still sends you the the advice page. (the one you get sent to when you click spell) And also the word ruin is not in blue, but it appears it needs to be. And if that is the case you shouldn't be able to skip it. So you should probably remove the choice whether you want the advice and also colour the word ruin.
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Shattered wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 4:19 pm
paswis wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 3:17 pm can't wait to test it out, please add guideme version soon!
I've made one, it has turned out differently than last time and I'm not sure why, so if you want to try feel free and hopefully it won't be broken?
I'll try!
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killer1243 wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:09 pm
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Clicking on virtues still sends you the the advice page. (the one you get sent to when you click spell) And also the word ruin is not in blue, but it appears it needs to be. And if that is the case you shouldn't be able to skip it. So you should probably remove the choice whether you want the advice and also colour the word ruin.
I edited this, so posting this reply so you see the edit if you missed it.
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which tease should I start first? This or the other?
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Typo with Lust. Near the beginning "won't return her" instead of here.
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killer1243 wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:18 pm
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Typo with Lust. Near the beginning "won't return her" instead of here.
Done
paswis wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:18 pm which tease should I start first? This or the other?
The other. This tease is standalone, the other is not :P
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killer1243 wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:09 pm
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Clicking on virtues still sends you the the advice page. (the one you get sent to when you click spell) And also the word ruin is not in blue, but it appears it needs to be. And if that is the case you shouldn't be able to skip it. So you should probably remove the choice whether you want the advice and also colour the word ruin.
I edited this, so posting this reply so you see the edit if you missed it.
Added blue. The two choices are similar (added a slight difference) but that was important information so a bit of a false choice really :P
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Shattered wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:24 pm
killer1243 wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:18 pm
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Typo with Lust. Near the beginning "won't return her" instead of here.
Done
paswis wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:18 pm which tease should I start first? This or the other?
The other. This tease is standalone, the other is not :P
killer1243 wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:17 pm
killer1243 wrote: Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:09 pm
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Clicking on virtues still sends you the the advice page. (the one you get sent to when you click spell) And also the word ruin is not in blue, but it appears it needs to be. And if that is the case you shouldn't be able to skip it. So you should probably remove the choice whether you want the advice and also colour the word ruin.
I edited this, so posting this reply so you see the edit if you missed it.
Added blue. The two choices are similar (added a slight difference) but that was important information so a bit of a false choice really :P
Ah, the old magician's trick :D
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A few typos with Succubus Sho- instead of Sto- and Been instead of Being.
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With Sloth. In the question about the numbers. The second added to the sixth divided by the third. (21+32)/3 is firstly not a whole number and also is about 17-18 the correct answer according to the tease is 21. BTW I am talking about the version you get when you make a mistake.

Later when she is making you stroke while you are balancing, clicking Reset skips as if you completed the task.
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killer1243 wrote: Tue Oct 24, 2017 11:37 pm
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With Sloth. In the question about the numbers. The second added to the sixth divided by the third. (21+32)/3 is firstly not a whole number and also is about 17-18 the correct answer according to the tease is 21. BTW I am talking about the version you get when you make a mistake.

Later when she is making you stroke while you are balancing, clicking Reset skips as if you completed the task.
Ah yeah ment to put 42 not 32, fixed both.
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