Feedback: Late to Work

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dicklet
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Feedback: Late to Work

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Amazing pictures, though I thought the story could have been a little better (though having never written a tease of my own, I'm hardly in a position to criticise). Look forward to more along thee lines though.

That model is amazing, and I *love* bitchy office girls.
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Cider
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Re: Feedback: Late to Work

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Honestly, i dont know if i have ever screwed up and came so quickly on any tease.
What the hell?! i cant hold an edge for a minute?
Anyways, i thought the tease was great, if i could have actually made it all the way through i would probably have to say that it was a little short, but what the hell i couldn't even make it through it as it is.......much less if it was longer.

I say good job! :thumbsup:
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