xman911 wrote: Thu Mar 09, 2017 1:15 am
flash1338 wrote: Wed Mar 08, 2017 7:40 pm
Hey Milovana-Community,
I released my second tease "Plumber's Life 2" yesterday, just to find out that it's not showing up on the "webtease" tab of the page today. When I checked, around 4:00am CET (shortly after I published it), it was visable on the site. But ever since this evening, 8:00pm CET, it's just not showing up...
I published it from the Flash-Tease editor ("Nyx"?) and even tried republishing it just a minute ago. Yet I still can't find it on the page.
What's happening here?

Is it just on my end, or can anyone of you see "Plumber's Life 2"?
Edit: Wow, I just found it by using the ID... It's at suuuper low rating (around 1 star)... Wtf is wrong with that tease?

Are pictures not loading for you guys or what? Link:
https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=34681
Your second tease is much better than the first one (I didn't find any bugs in it). I also don't understand why the low ratings (too low for any meaningful tease, even some non teases are getting higher ratings). Maybe you should change the title, maybe some real Plumbers find it offensive and just rate it lowest without even looking at it. Overall your tease should be at least 3 - 3,5 stars, maybe even 4 stars.
Maybe I can give you some advise. If you don't need a timer don't use it. There should be a reason for "?" timers, all your timers are "?" without any reason. You can use normal timers or hide the timer. Also if you insist on using that much timers you should integrate metronome sounds. The right way to use timers without metronome is to give number of strokes to be completed for a limited time. For example 30 strokes with a 60 seconds timer. I think you should not use too much edge holding in the beginning. When you want someone to hold an edge you should make it clear that he is holding an edge, not just give a timer, and expecting him to know this is an edge hold time.
For good example of a tease without metronome you can look at "Married to Caprice by Android71" .
For an example of a nice short tease you can look at my tease "Short Warm Up Tease".
Also you may look at "Are You Man Enough" series by pc91.
Don't look at the stories of these teases, just look at how logical and clear are their commands. You can also look at some flash teases above 4 stars.
Your teases are good but sometimes is not clear what is happening, is this timer "?" a "rest time" or "edge time"... or "stroking time".
By the way it was good idea to use Caprice.
Hey xman,
thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate that a lot. I've already seen almost all nominees for TotM on Milovana, but I'll definetly have a look at "Married to Caprice", as long as it features Little Caprice, because DAMN she's hot!
Did you ever try any of "1885"'s teases? I copied his style of making flash teases, which is: you have to read the text and just stroke as you like, getting horny by how the story/ pictures envelope. If you are supposed to get to the edge and let it fade right after, the button says: "Edged". If you're supposed to ride it, it says: "On the edge". I thought this was the consent of flash teases, since "1885" achieved many TotM nominees and even won many (not sure about that though). Still, this style of "edging orders" achieved 4,5 ratings back to back.
I really don't want to cry about being treated unfair, I know my story isn't even close to being perfect, neither the stroking/edging, so I wouldn't mind getting a low rating (let's say 3.0, which would be pretty much the lowest for a story based tease I've ever seen. (considering only teases, which took more than a few seconds of effort)).
The problem I see is rather, that it would've been stuck at 1.5 rating if I didn't spam the forum with all of this mess
I've been lurking for much longer, than I'm registered and I don't think I've ever seen a "searching for domme" post at that low rating, with let's say just 1 pic of a random hentai furry porn
Pretty sure that there is MORE behind the courtain... Maybe bots? Maybe Plumbers around the world united to downvote? Who knows?
