working on a tease

[Quazwierdcev283]

Hello milovana people,
I currently have the barest outline of a tease. Right now all I know is the character(s) and not much else. This tease is going to have a minimum of three "Mistresses" so my question is this.
Should I do three separate teases. They may or may not be a series. Or should I do a "choose your path" type of tease?
Please reply,
thanks in advance.
Quazwierdcev.

You're unique, just like everyone else :D

[reflog1]

yo quad
If it was me i would do a choose path style tease. Anyway you have an intersting milovana tag. (where are you from?) i hope this helps.

[Quazwierdcev283]

Ok Reflog asked about my name. :) I am from the Eastern US, one of the four corners states. The story behind my name probably isn't half as interesting as you thought. I am currently working on a chapter book and the villain's "name" (or lack of one) is Qazwsxedcrfv and eventually I starting (in my head) pronouncing it as Quazwierdcev.
Indigo, you are a very active member on here and always say something if you think you can be of help. I have also seen Vantage Point, however that idea wouldn't work on this tease. Fun idea though.
Thank you both for the input. Keep it coming.

[eteased]

I'd suggest just doing three separate teases. It seems much easier to work with multiple, smaller teases than one sprawling one.

Also, since you mentioned it, what are the "four corners states" in the eastern US? TN/KY/NC/VA? The only 4 corners states I know are out west...

[Cider]

My vote goes for a choose your path type tease.
It maybe a little harder to work with, but once it is done, it's still similar to 3 separate teases because it could be different next time you try if you choose a different path. The best of both worlds!
Good luck!

[Quazwierdcev283]

Ok eteased you asked what the four corner states are they are as follows: Arizona, Colorado, New Mexico and Utah. Now you know.

[Incubo]

Ok, now I'm confused.
If you're from one of the 4 corner states, then you're not from an eastern state like you said before.



...and just so I'm not completely worthless here, I vote for the choose your own path idea as well. Only you don't choose it. Leave it up to chance. I'll let you decide how, but I like chance.

[camel]

If you're doing it in Nyx then I'd recommend something like the House of Tease http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=664, or some tease front-end that asks "Is this your first time here?" and if "No" then ask them if they want to start from the beginning or jump to where they want to go.

If you're doing it in the original format, I'd split them up so that you have separate feedback on each of them unless it's meant to be a single LOOONG tease where you want to keep going without letting the user take a break. I think most good teases have a little bit of seduction in them, so if you want the 2nd or 3rd mistress to start heavy without any warmup, a single tease might be better.

If a series, please be sure to tag your series with your series's name, just to give users another way to find them all.

[str0be]

Why not do something totally different? Ever seen the movie, "Vantage Point"? It has the same story, from several different perspectives. Why not do a tease, where each woman is participating, but you do it from each ones perspective? I know, sounds difficult, and I'm sure it probably is, but hey, it's different!

I may have to try something like that...