Feedback: Halloween Costume on the job

[texturedshroom]

I have to say I was really enjoying this tease but it ended way too quickly. It had potential; I, personally, love some of the more hardcore verbal humiliation (words like "faggot"). But the problem was the lack of very much masturbation instructions until the end, and the general shortness of the tease.

Another problem was I wasn't sure if I was supposed to be dressed in the "costume" during the tease or just the stockings and high heels. A lot of us sissies like to get really into the tease by following the instructions.

I think you can write a good tease if you put more effort into it. I look forward to doing your next one.