Feedback- Can't Resist My Beauty, Going To Drain You Dry.

[rbtheservant]

Fellow Milovanians,

I usually do not seek feedback, but I tried a few things different with this latest installment to the "Can't Resist My Beauty" series and I was wondering what your thoughts were?

Too intense, not intense enough?

Mistress not prepared at first, seen in street clothes, was it a plus or minus?

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, good or bad I want to know what you think.

Thank you and...

Happy Teasing,

[blue_down_under]

I haven't done it, just read it. Reading through it I thought I might actually do the tease (something i dont do very often these days), but then I got to the second last page, and she kinda lets you know this is the part where you should swallow whats in the glass, but doesnt really...

That was just too much boy. Now what are you going to do with that glass full of man goo? That's right my loyal pig, you can't resist my beauty so you are willing to swallow that sperm. *giggle*

Being "willing" is not actually doing it, eg, "so you will swallow that sperm". I know it sounds a bit nit picky, but if I had actually done the tease, with the build up to being forced to eat it, and then not actually being told in the moment to do it, I would have been pretty disappointed, maybe even a bit pissed off. The whole tease might have been ruined for me by the choice of one word.

That said, the rest of the tease was great, and the girl, as always, is looking hot as always.

Does anyone else feel the same about the choice of words at the end?

[t&d&cbt4me]

I can see where he's going with that wording, but I might have chosen differently. Instead of "willing" I might have used "willingly". It's a small change, but it would be effective.

That was just too much boy. Now what are you going to do with that glass full of man goo? That's right my loyal pig, you can't resist my beauty so you are willingly going to swallow that sperm. *giggle*

Something like that is subtle, but can make a big difference.

Also, let me say that I also read the tease, and loved what I saw. I'm almost afraid to try it though, as I think I'll be shooting blood and still have to try for 3 more orgasms :)

But, I will gather my courage and try it as this is much like one of Submatt's old teases that we no longer have access to, that was an absolute favorite of mine. Great work.

[rbtheservant]

Blue Down Under and T&D&BCBT4Me,

Thanks guys, I didn't quite catch that when I previewed it. I guess it was implied but not stated. I added a line which covers the issue. I guess I was too caught up in the whole thing.

I appreciate the response...

Happy Teasing,

[wannatasteit]

I must say that i didnt do the tease yet but i am gonna try.It looks like a great tease thank you for that..

I am curious is it possible to orgasm that much, did anyone do that and what did you feel i mean orgasm without a sperm must be too painful.

[blue_down_under]

Blue Down Under and T&D&BCBT4Me,

Thanks guys, I didn't quite catch that when I previewed it. I guess it was implied but not stated. I added a line which covers the issue. I guess I was too caught up in the whole thing.

I appreciate the response...

Happy Teasing,

Thanks RB, gave it a 5.

[BoredOMK17]

I like the IDEA of ruining my orgasms for a mistress, but I don't like actually doing it.
Plus I've never eaten my own cum before, too disgusting for me to do on my own without having a real mistress order me to. I'd feel dumb. However I did ruin a glass for no reason.

[borsalino]

A liked all the teases with Ancilla Tilia – the pictures and the texts are just perfect.
Because I was first visiting the forum I could change the last sentence about swallowing. (Thanks for the suggestion “willingly”!) The start of this tease was great, really great. But Ancilla totally in red I did not en-joy at all. So I looked at other pictures of here were she looks very dominant. I went through all the orgasms – now every muscle hearts from crumbing. Cum eating should be immediately after cum. At the very end I lost all enthusiasm.

Thanks a lot!
borsalino