Feedback: Asking for bondage

[LynxPaw]

Hi there,

I found a couple of days Milovana and was really surprised that something like this slipped my attention. Its a realy great site, though I found that most webteases are not really centered around bondage, but more about pain and other stuff.

I wanted to give it a try and write my first webtease. I am a bondage addict and I tought I would add a webtease, around that.

I hope to get your feedback. What did you liked, what didnt? I would like to do more and improve them.

Kind regards
LynxPaw

[Borderliner]

True, most teases do not include bondage. There are some, however, which include light bondage whilst it is not in the description
I checked out far from all teases, but the best milovana bondage related teases I already did, were 'bondage games' by Mark696969 and 'try cum 4' by StockingBoy If there are any better to someone's opinion, I am always open to suggestion

I tried your tease, and I like it; certainly as a first. To my opinion, you used good pictures, procured a decent storyline and some nice bondage activity.

Some points of interest for future work - to my opinion - may be about combining several shorter bondage scenarios; adding elements of randomness through which repeated doing of the tease stays interesting. Try to be creative in bondage materials as well, a lot of people on milovana might be interested in trying the occasional bondage tease, but do not have all the proper gear that might be required...

keep up the good work

[martbondage]

Hey,

I really enjoyed this tease.
And i hope there will be more of them.

I added this tease by favorites,

I think too that the only two i also enjoyed with bondage was also Bondage Games, and Try Cum 4.

Nice tease and keep going with it

[LynxPaw]

Hey there,

thank you two for the positive feedback. I originally wanted to add multiple choices, but quickly realized that this would be too complicated for a first tease. So I kept it simple and straight forward.

However, I have a new idea, where I would like to incorporate some decisions on your part. Lets say, your level of feistiness is going to determine, your reward or punishment.

Thanks again for your feedback borderliner and martbondage.

Kind regards,
LynxPaw

[martbondage]

Hey man,

I was wondering, do you make an other tease?
I really enjoyed this one. Can not wait for the next one.

Greetings

[0385]

great tease, Only thing that bothered me a bit was the grammar and typos.