Feedback: Jessica's Card Tease

[all2true]

Wow

Once Again, I wish I could vote on
Flashteases
Very hot
And um, Painful.

I loved the cards, and the photoes
Random cards, and sound effects!
Well done, and difficult!
(Still wish I knew how to do that, need more expierence playing with scripting)

Only thing, being as I am in the American Midwest
is I would have added (near the beginning) Howdy Cowboy... Or Tex, or something western

Fantastic tease!

[someone43]

GREAT ENDING SONG!!!!

[vor]

Hmmm. I didn't hear any ending song!

This is a really great tease! Though the tease itself surely took a great deal of skill to create (I assume), it's pretty straightforward and has a nice blend of pain and pleasure built in. The uncertainty of what is to come next is tremendous. I think that, in the future, I'm going to tie my balls before beginning in order to make the slapping a bit more painful, but that's just me.

I did notice that, when the metronome was ticking, I found myself counting along, which had the effect of keeping me aware of how many strokes or slaps I still had coming. I began to mentally echo the ticks with arbitrary numbers, letters, words, or, eventually, just the word "tick" with each beat. As a result, I lost my ability to figure out how much more of each activity I had left, which, for me, made the uncertainty element all the more fun.

Great tease! I'll revisit often!

vor

[cumhardy]

hey a card tease that actually works!

I dunno how you managed to get the metronome sound, the timing and everything else all synced up together. Must have taken ages!

[Evals]

Hey everyone! Thanks for all the feedback. A lot of work went into this tease, I wanted to take a simple concept and make it as fun as possible with every effect I could think of so the tease just flowed without you having to think much. Surprisingly it was really only two days of editing from start to finish, which is very untypical of me. Aldorax/Cymerc provided the metronome sounds in an earlier post here to Milovana, and it was excruciating counting out the number of beats for each card. It's still a little off as the sound takes a second or two in cases to begin in Milovana where on my computer it started instantly.

The card graphics were regular playing cards. I superimposed a set of black and white pictures of a model over the card's face, giving them a naughtier edge. That took a good amount of time. The model on the card is the same as Elizabeth, they both have spades on their stomachs which is kind of funny I think. Also for the ending song, I've added in a credits button to get to it. It used to be that you'd have to wait a minute on the last page showing Jessica and Elizabeth.

Since the editor supports very, very large flash teases now, I'll be picking up a couple teases I've left off because of the limitation. One is extremely similar to the card game, one is somewhat. Both involve flash-based games of rewards and punishment.