Dear Milovanites..
All comments on the tease, "Do you like me?" welcome here.. Good, bad or indifferent..
Tell me what worked for you and also what you'd like to have seen but didn't.
FYI: the pics were sourced here:
http://tgp.superglam.com/tgp4/355422/su ... TY6MTg6MTE
Do you like me? Feedback thread.
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nomeuno
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Re: Do you like me? Feedback thread.
Thank you for this tease. It's a good one, but not a great one. i kinda look at tease and denial and anticipate the Woman uses her sexuality to tease, deny and inevitably control. This tease never takes control and really only asks the same question time and time again. i am not kidding when i say that i appreciate all that you do for this site. i felt your "Panty Hunt" series did just that from the beginning. The tease took control through T&D and maintained it for the duration of the series. Of course my satin panty fetish was also fulfilled many times over in that series as well. That's my 2Cents.
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cumhardy
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Re: Do you like me? Feedback thread.
I thought it was ok, but kinda felt like it was going through the motions.
For example, each page was just "stroke for so long" "edge" "stop for 1 minute" etc etc.
I like to see a bit more dialogue or stuff to get my mind working on the fantasy. Maybe a bit longer taken to set the scene.
Its a good tease but after doing a lot of them on this site I find some teases get repetitive.
Trying to give some constructive critisism because I appreciate anyone who takes the effort to write a tease and I know sometimes their fantasies are different from mine. Just sayin what I would have liked more
For example, each page was just "stroke for so long" "edge" "stop for 1 minute" etc etc.
I like to see a bit more dialogue or stuff to get my mind working on the fantasy. Maybe a bit longer taken to set the scene.
Its a good tease but after doing a lot of them on this site I find some teases get repetitive.
Trying to give some constructive critisism because I appreciate anyone who takes the effort to write a tease and I know sometimes their fantasies are different from mine. Just sayin what I would have liked more
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Makarov
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Re: Do you like me? Feedback thread.
For some reason while going through this tease the klondike bar commercial popped in my head.
What would you do for a klondike bar?
Would you stroke for five minutes?
Would you rest for a minute? (actual instruction in tease, I've got more on this one)
Would you edge for a klondike bar?
Most of the instructions work; except for the, do you like me enough to rest for a minute? You don't have to have every panel have a do you like me in it. She could just tell you to rest. As opposed to, do you like me enough to remain motionless.
What would you do for a klondike bar?
Would you stroke for five minutes?
Would you rest for a minute? (actual instruction in tease, I've got more on this one)
Would you edge for a klondike bar?
Most of the instructions work; except for the, do you like me enough to rest for a minute? You don't have to have every panel have a do you like me in it. She could just tell you to rest. As opposed to, do you like me enough to remain motionless.