Cock Hero Fail Edition

[waiting]

Wonderful work here. I thought it was a great contribution. I especially appreciated the way you did transitions, tying them in to previous themes. I think that they were the best transitions in any video yet.

I did succeed in completing the video, though it was a challenge. I find changes in beat and complex beats the most challenging, so future videos might incorporate some pace changes. Otherwise, I can't think of much to recommend. Good job.

[dolomite13]

I loved this one and was able to complete it but almost lost it right at the end during the countdown.

I especially love the anal scenes and was hoping there would have been a little more of that but overall this is one of the top CH vids in my opinion. I guess I can heep hoping for an all anal edition of CH someday ;)

=D=

[supermokkori]

x802snow, congratulations on you first video tease release... and you really didn't skimp on length for your first effort!

Overall this is an above-average effort and rather exemplary for your first full video tease.

For myself, I did make it through, though it got pretty damn close when it got to lucky round 13 - slender girls with natural boobs (like April and Victoria Rae) are weaknesses of mine.

Anyway, here's what I noticed you could improve on or stuff I didn't like (which wasn't much from this tease):

- Stroke beat notations are a little weird: like Double +1? I didn't get what that meant and after seeing the first examples, not sure if that's really a good way to describe what you did.

- Volume balance is a little on the loud side: At least on the music side, it was loud - I could hardly hear the video audio when it was playing and had a hard time hearing the stroke beat most of the time

- Transitions from the Break are abrupt: after a break, the beat starts and the stroke meter appears instantly, so you aren't given even a second of a heads-up. not a big deal, but would be nice to have like 3 second warning before it begins.

- Cutting to the music: most of the time, you were on point, but sometimes you edited/cut scenes off rhythm and/or rather abruptly. First time edits, so not a huge deal.

- Several of the same adult performers in many rounds: I'd like to see a greater variety. Nothing wrong with the selections you made at all - all of them natural and pretty (though you clearly are a fan of Abby )

- Stroke beat and music choices weren't always my thing: Seriously, this is a good workout cuz my arm got REALLY TIRED by the end of this video tease because of the amount of fast stroke sequences. Also, not really a fan of your music choices, though that obviously a subjective thing. I think both of these were probably the reasons why I was able to complete this video tease to the end.

Overall, a very fine effort, well done.

[Willy123]

I'm also wondering what you guys think about the words of encouragement along the way. I decided to leave them out so the focus was more on the action, but I'm thinking that an active dialog the entire time might make it a bit better.

Thoughts?

Loving your work Snow
(Admittedly I only survived cos I did CH-Pink earlier and my balls were still filling )

Sometimes the text on some CH reads like a guy giving you encouragement, that kinda puts me off as I like to think it's just me and the girls (but that's just me, even music with a male lead singer puts me off ). Reading it can be distracting too

If you mean adding voice samples from JOE vids then personally I'd absolutely agree
I posted a free text-to-speech app I stumbled on a while back, some (not all) of the voices are incredibly realistic if you want to tailor words specific to a challenge

But also I have to agree with jackal403 here, too many fast clusters can be a distraction, and then repeating the same beats can get monotonous.
Having said that, I think complex broken beats are excellent, something I look forward to particularly after a fast section.
(Anyone else have trouble after surviving a fast thrash and going back to full strokes?
Gets me every time.)

This is an excellent vid, looking forward to your next one
(I'm doing my civic duty and seeding as requested )
Cheers

[Bill McNeal]

A tremendous first effort! Loved the girls, loved the pace. Made it all the way through the first time, but Round 13 almost got me. Echoing mokkori, surviving April and VRB is always a challenge.

Only complaint is the music was a bit harsh sometimes, especially in Round 13.

[jahras]

That was good. I cummed right with the timer.
What else? I had bad day and i've been drunk, maybe this is what made me get through this video easily.
One thing, if the beat is always fast, you beceme to settle in and it's not working (at least for me). But the lazy beats made cock soft, so... everybody must strike a happy medium.
Good job bro, that was good.

P.S. Someone wrote this before in this thread. Ass round was an apogee :)

[faboosh]

I enjoyed the scenes, lots of nie girls doing lots of nice stuff but I found the beats just too unimaginative.

I think a bit more owrk on making it a fun challenge as opposed to making it hard for hards sake would turn this into a classic

[Humblest]

This video was most certainly not a fail. Indeed, I have enjoyed it thoroughly.

[taker285]

Can you please post this to filecloud its easier for me to download from that than torrents.

[x802snow]

Can you please post this to filecloud its easier for me to download from that than torrents.

Dude, it's over 3 gigs. I really just don't have the time to break it up and upload a million different parts. I'm sorry man. Maybe someone else will.

My suggestion is learn how to use torrents effectively. They're a porn lover's best friends.

[jstwolf]

One of the best CH's to date. Loved (and still loving) the faster beats making it a real challenge. I have both failed and made it through. Content and editing were really good too. I appreciate that the young fresh girls are your thing, and with that in mind, it was awesome. Great job! Definitely one I can and will watch many times.

[book_guy]

Awesomeness, really. I enjoyed the selection of females and the selection of beats. All the "typically stupid" choices that might be made by someone who doesn't really think about what they're doing, were NOT done here: the girls and the action fit into a given mold of "usually considered attractive"; the beats were definitely "for real do-able" but challenging and high-stress sometimes, with a good mix of slows and fasts and complicateds and simples; the whole thing was competent and professionally put together over-all. I guess if anyone wanted to have a complaint, it would be that the style is more "vanilla," but that's what it takes to please the "mainstream" of people and I think you thought your vanilla-ness through and presented it well, given its inevitable inherent weakness. I liked it. Time for you to choose a specific "flavor" (kink? machines? S&M? MILFs? a certain race, location, or type of action? etc. etc.) and do something less vanilla, maybe. :)

[lighthammer]

Was awesome. I think you should have some dialogue in there like you mentioned earlier. Who is the blonde in the beginning and latter on? the hostess or whatever.

and the brunette(big tits) at the cabin in 'round the world'

[x802snow]

Was awesome. I think you should have some dialogue in there like you mentioned earlier. Who is the blonde in the beginning and latter on? the hostess or whatever.

and the brunette(big tits) at the cabin in 'round the world'

The blonde is Dream July, or Sabrina. She's fucking fantastic. There's not much out there on her yet though. She's pretty new to the industry.

The brunette is Kaylee and there's even less out there for her. I think that might be her only boy-girl so far. It's the only one I could find.

Awesomeness, really. I enjoyed the selection of females and the selection of beats. All the "typically stupid" choices that might be made by someone who doesn't really think about what they're doing, were NOT done here: the girls and the action fit into a given mold of "usually considered attractive"; the beats were definitely "for real do-able" but challenging and high-stress sometimes, with a good mix of slows and fasts and complicateds and simples; the whole thing was competent and professionally put together over-all. I guess if anyone wanted to have a complaint, it would be that the style is more "vanilla," but that's what it takes to please the "mainstream" of people and I think you thought your vanilla-ness through and presented it well, given its inevitable inherent weakness. I liked it. Time for you to choose a specific "flavor" (kink? machines? S&M? MILFs? a certain race, location, or type of action? etc. etc.) and do something less vanilla, maybe. :)

I'll probably not stray too far from the formula. These are just the things that I'm into. I think if I was to do anything outside of my personal tastes, my heart just wouldn't be in it. I know I'm pretty middle of the road. I like natural beauties having pretty vanilla yet passionate sex. I will be mixing it up a bit though. I'll never go to the extremes that some will, some of the rounds in the other videos turn me off to tell the truth. Not real into the s+m or dudes choking women and dominating too much.

I enjoyed the scenes, lots of nie girls doing lots of nice stuff but I found the beats just too unimaginative.

I think a bit more owrk on making it a fun challenge as opposed to making it hard for hards sake would turn this into a classic

I agree completely. I didn't realize how monotonous the beats had become until playing it back. This was my first real effort and I just created all the music and beat tracks first before mixing everything and didn't give it all much thought as to how it was going to flow as a whole. Won't make that mistake again.

I think I did good in building anticipation during the rounds but didn't think about building it across rounds.

[lighthammer]

The only thing I would change is add more 1-2-3 - 3 beats and more just 1-1, like keep the 4-2, 5-1, 7-7, but add in some more slightly slower ones (that are still decently fast, it's not like going into 'slow mode' or something). I can definitely see what people were saying.. sometimes going too fast will reduce the stimulation instead of increase it, that's why I like a good variation in beats and a build-up to the fast beats so they're that much more impactful.


Also, one thing I don't like in ANY of the CH's produced is double time+, I can't do that, lol. I can never do it, but double time- works great.