Hey,
like I said, first tease... so inform me about bugs, errors or spelling mistakes.
And of course your opinion, if you like.
Thanks!
FB - Poolside
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Random2586
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Re: FB - Poolside
Good tease overall.
I reckon there should be a way to skip the 10 min break, but really my biggest complaint is most of the not so good answers ended the tease.
There was one part where she asked how badly I wanted to see her pussy, and I clicked "not so bad". I expected more teasing, but the tease ended instead. :( There are a few other areas where the tease ends if you click a button and it's a little annoying.
But don't get me wrong either -I wouldnt give the feed back if I hadn't liked it :)
So yeah, a few rough edges but a good effort ^^
I reckon there should be a way to skip the 10 min break, but really my biggest complaint is most of the not so good answers ended the tease.
There was one part where she asked how badly I wanted to see her pussy, and I clicked "not so bad". I expected more teasing, but the tease ended instead. :( There are a few other areas where the tease ends if you click a button and it's a little annoying.
But don't get me wrong either -I wouldnt give the feed back if I hadn't liked it :)
So yeah, a few rough edges but a good effort ^^
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2OI2
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Re: FB - Poolside
Thanks. Though it would be easier to write a tease - harder than I expected.
Have a look at "new" version. I think it has less "edges", as you mentioned.
Have a look at "new" version. I think it has less "edges", as you mentioned.
Re: FB - Poolside
I really like this tease. I can't wait to see the sequel.
