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[thatsprettyhot]

Is this still available to download? I tried downloading it but it says the file isn't found.

yes , i don't have any problem for download it and i still have it on my "account"

Here's a mega link for all the depositfiles haters ;) Please import then dl from personal account.

link

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https://mega.nz/#!JORExKDb

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-MjCYMzSLQMQZou22a_FJ1NciShANNS6-XRdCh2VPQk

+1 to you for making things happen instead of just whining rudely like some jackasses!

I liked pretty much everything, and it was nice and hard for me! I was going to write more feedback but all that whine from Biggie ruined my mood. Jesus, how about some manners. How you say things makes quite the difference. So I tell him. To improve!

When someone has made an effort to create something for others for free, wouldn't hurt to utilize brains when attacking them for almost no reason. Wasn't my favorite download place either but I'll live, you know, and can mention it kindly.

[shadows]

Took me 4 tries to beat it, but i finally got it. For feedback, I thought the timing of the picture changes was very well paced. While it's clear English is not your first language, pretty much everything was clear and easily understood so I wouldn't worry too much about the grammar. The only thing I had a question on was the timing for edging: whether you had to be on the edge before the text changed from saying 'get on the edge' to 'hold the edge' or if as long as you got on the edge before the hold was over you were good. I played the first way, which made round two the biggest roadblock- every time i passed it i made it to the queen- so maybe a little extra time to get to the edge in the beginning and then shrink it back down as you get further in. I also liked the game at the end of round one and wish there was more stuff like that. The ending seemed to stretch on forever, maybe because i really wanted to cum, so whether thats a good thing or a bad thing depends on the player. All in all, Good Work and Thank You!

[Qiubi]

Took me 4 tries to beat it, but i finally got it. For feedback, I thought the timing of the picture changes was very well paced. While it's clear English is not your first language, pretty much everything was clear and easily understood so I wouldn't worry too much about the grammar. The only thing I had a question on was the timing for edging: whether you had to be on the edge before the text changed from saying 'get on the edge' to 'hold the edge' or if as long as you got on the edge before the hold was over you were good. I played the first way, which made round two the biggest roadblock- every time i passed it i made it to the queen- so maybe a little extra time to get to the edge in the beginning and then shrink it back down as you get further in. I also liked the game at the end of round one and wish there was more stuff like that. The ending seemed to stretch on forever, maybe because i really wanted to cum, so whether thats a good thing or a bad thing depends on the player. All in all, Good Work and Thank You!

The Edge moments are always at a par of the most faster beatsound so when the ultra fast beat sound start = Edge moment
and when stop the ultra fast beat sound = Edge moment finished (anyway for the finish i always say stop or something as a guide)

So...

when i say Edge and hold it = go faster to the Edge and hold it or maybe you will not have time before the "ultra fast beat sound" finish and you will lose.

i hope i explained well enough to understand.

[disgaea]

Is there a stream of this available? I'd be interested in checking it out but not looking to download

[book_guy]

At only 170 MB, the file should be VERY easy to share. But the author's choice to use the Depositfiles website makes the sharing rather poor, at a high degree of user difficulty. The interface there told me that it would be 75 minutes to download. That's just plain stupid. Furthermore, a password is unnecessary for any zipped file, and the file is small enough that zipping it up is unnecessary as well.

I suggest other people upload the thing all over the place in decrypted unzipped form, in order to demonstrate to the original author just how simple it would be to make sharing an easy interaction rather than a Depositfiles-level unreasonably difficult interaction.

So, I haven't downloaded, yet, but I hope to, some day, from a more amenable service, if that option becomes available. Thanks. :)

[mcontrary]

At only 170 MB, the file should be VERY easy to share.
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and the file is small enough that zipping it up is unnecessary as well.

interestingly unrared it came out to 314 MB

I suggest other people upload the thing all over the place in decrypted unzipped form, in order to demonstrate to the original author just how simple it would be to make sharing an easy interaction rather than a Depositfiles-level unreasonably difficult interaction.

easy peasy lemon squeezy ;) Please import then dl from personal account.

link

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https://mega.nz/#!xWhQma6J

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gtUYgmxpbFeXBOg3Tz_cI3TV5dnLCv60ugbm-duwU2c

[book_guy]

interestingly unrared it came out to 314 MB

Sounds like a good compression ratio. But still, 314 MB can be shared very easily these-a-days, so, although RAR-ing it did reduce its size considerably, mostly it (IMO) inserted additional hurdles and barriers.

But then, that's my preference. Other people may want it otherwise. Not to worry, thanks for the new link!

[disgaea]

Well there's my first video, this thread will be only for feedback once you play it, the more feedback i can get, the better my next JOI will be.

Download---> http://depositfiles.com/files/1m02ah7qf
password ---> hentai

Info about this video:
-hentai
-metronome sounds
-Edge and stroke
-around 40 minutes long


Extra info before play it:
-Don't Edge, masturbate, etc... for at least 1 or two days.
-lube


when you make the feedback i really need to know the next, you can add more feedback in adition on this next things:

-duration of video
-transition and duration of each Text
-the breaks was to long or short?? well placed etc...
-the Edges was dificult to do?? need more time for them??
-the instructions was clear??
-the speed of beats was correct? and the duration??
-and your own feedback toughts in general, if i need to add things, or remove... etc...

-and as an extra question---> do you prefer metronome sounds or the tipic things like stroke at "slow pace" "medium pace" "fast as you can" etc......


Well enjoy it!

you guys can do anything with this video, upload anywhere (pornhub, mega,etc...) or even transform to EOS or a tease for this web.

i will wait your feedback before make my next video!!!

Ok here is my feedback:

To start of thank you for taking your time to make this video. It is a good start.

- You need some better sound. There are plenty of hgames you could pull audio from if you wanted to keep it within the hentai realm.

- Also on sound. Some BGM would be good. Your beat sound doesn't need to be drowned out but at least it is

- Personal preference is to have a beat meter vs the ticking sound

- Too much text. I appreciate the context but maybe a little too heavy on the text. Given that English isn't your first language I think you did fairly well in what you wrote

- Instructions are interesting but maybe avoid those making the user pause or rewatch the video. I found those to be a bit of a negative

- Good variety of images. In cases where you use more than one image from a particular h scene I would use a shorter duration before switching images. Personally I'd have more images. I realize that means more work but I think a rapid fire of images can increase difficulty

- I recommend including either video clips or animated gifs into your work. Images are great. Would be nice to see some motion blended into the presentation

- I believe that the length of the video was good. I don't think it needs to be any longer.

- I can't remember if your video featured any ruin sections but that might be interesting to add if you haven't

[doremi]

Thanks for making this available to Mega, mcontrary. I very much appreciate it.

Use of a password on an archive file is quite acceptable in my book. It prevents the file to be scanned while it's on transit. Who know who is tapping on our communication line, right?

I've used Deposit files (a lot) in the past. Never has a problem. Now is a different question as they seem to have browser version identification and configuration features, AND I DON'T LIKE THAT at all. It seemed to ask me for notification, and wouldn't let me download without accepting (and not knowing what would be happening afterward). That's totally unacceptable. Deposit files is dead to me.


That being said, thanks for the work, Qiubi. I'll look into it later. Please consider a different filehost for your next upload. Mega is strongly recommended and it's free. Thanks!

[Qiubi]

Is there a stream of this available? I'd be interested in checking it out but not looking to download

here you have the steam version
https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php? ... d4aa07cc74

seems that this video it's more liked than my second video!!! and i tought that my second video was even better than the first!