Qiubi wrote: ↑Mon Feb 25, 2019 9:40 am
Well there's my first video, this thread will be only for feedback once you play it, the more feedback i can get, the better my next JOI will be.
Download--->
http://depositfiles.com/files/1m02ah7qf
password ---> hentai
Info about this video:
-hentai
-metronome sounds
-Edge and stroke
-around 40 minutes long
Extra info before play it:
-Don't Edge, masturbate, etc... for at least 1 or two days.
-lube
when you make the feedback i really need to know the next, you can add more feedback in adition on this next things:
-duration of video
-transition and duration of each Text
-the breaks was to long or short?? well placed etc...
-the Edges was dificult to do?? need more time for them??
-the instructions was clear??
-the speed of beats was correct? and the duration??
-and your own feedback toughts in general, if i need to add things, or remove... etc...
-and as an extra question---> do you prefer metronome sounds or the tipic things like stroke at "slow pace" "medium pace" "fast as you can" etc......
Well enjoy it!
you guys can do anything with this video, upload anywhere (pornhub, mega,etc...) or even transform to EOS or a tease for this web.
i will wait your feedback before make my next video!!!
Ok here is my feedback:
To start of thank you for taking your time to make this video. It is a good start.
- You need some better sound. There are plenty of hgames you could pull audio from if you wanted to keep it within the hentai realm.
- Also on sound. Some BGM would be good. Your beat sound doesn't need to be drowned out but at least it is
- Personal preference is to have a beat meter vs the ticking sound
- Too much text. I appreciate the context but maybe a little too heavy on the text. Given that English isn't your first language I think you did fairly well in what you wrote
- Instructions are interesting but maybe avoid those making the user pause or rewatch the video. I found those to be a bit of a negative
- Good variety of images. In cases where you use more than one image from a particular h scene I would use a shorter duration before switching images. Personally I'd have more images. I realize that means more work but I think a rapid fire of images can increase difficulty
- I recommend including either video clips or animated gifs into your work. Images are great. Would be nice to see some motion blended into the presentation
- I believe that the length of the video was good. I don't think it needs to be any longer.
- I can't remember if your video featured any ruin sections but that might be interesting to add if you haven't