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Caius Prepus wrote: Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:47 pm Cum Hero Reborn - Cum Back 1 Pre release

I would like to get a couple of beta tester for this one.

Checking for :

- spelling errors
- Comprehensiveness
- feasability
- Any comment on beat, beatmeter, visual, music, etc...

You can put your name in this tread if you are interrested.
It is a + if you are a more than a 1 cumshot guy.

Thanks in advance
I'm interested :-)
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Ok guys, thanks for participation,


I will send you a torrent file in private message so you can download it.

Don't worry it is a low quality version, around 200 mbits only. Should not be long to download. Obviously the final version will have a high quality render.

Just put your comments back in the tread so everybody that beta test it can see them and we will try to figure out what to improve/change in this new beta Cum Hero.

Just to clarify, I may change some things, and others not... it depends on the comments, but also on how much work it is to change them or how much it will alter the game itself.
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On it. Do you have a word doc or text file of the text used throughout the vid?

It might be easier to send corrections or reference them using that.
Not sure, never have done this before.
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I suggest making the following edits to the text on the screen:
00:37
- Follow the stroke meter, get the foreskin off your glans, put on some lube, and scrub it to ecstasy!
- Every time you cum, take a 15 minute break and start over again a the beginning of the round. Try to last to the end of the video!
- Earn 10 points if you finish the video while following the beat.
- Earn 5 points by surviving cumshots.
- Calculate your score a the end to see ho wmuch of a Cum Hero you are...

00:56
- Earn these titles based on your final score:

01:08
To prepare for the first round, start edging and ride it as long as you can...
Have Fun!

08:29
If you came, take a 15 minute break and start over again a the beginning of the round. Try to last to the end of the video!
I only really included lines that should be changed to clarify wording or make the terminology more in line with what's common for these vids or common vernacular.
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Caius Prepus wrote: Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:47 pm Cum Hero Reborn - Cum Back 1 Pre release

I would like to get a couple of beta tester for this one.

Checking for :

- spelling errors
- Comprehensiveness
- feasability
- Any comment on beat, beatmeter, visual, music, etc...

You can put your name in this tread if you are interrested.
It is a + if you are a more than a 1 cumshot guy.

Thanks in advance
I didn't know what you meant by "more than a 1 cumshot guy" but now I think i get it. This kinda vid is not for me, but that's ok. I'll help out where I can. The super fast meters aren't really how I like to approach things myself.
I'll let others judge the music (which I thought worked well) and the other criteria... It looked like a decent vid and some of the clips were great. It's just a bit too much pounding-it for my tastes. I feel like I'd survive the whole thing with a really sad and sore dick. lol.
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I had a great time playing with this and have many comments to offer. Please know I think this is great work and please take these comments as constructive suggestions without any negativity. I really did enjoy this :w00t:

And now for my notes
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- I really hope you will be getting the actual 20th Century Fox recording instead of the recorder in the foreground which seems very cheesy and lacking the professionalism of the rest of the project

- "Multiple Cumshots Challenge" should actually be "Multiple Cumshot Challenge" since the word "multiple" already sets the "cumshot" as a plural noun.

Rules screen text
-not everyone has a foreskin but that is just a choice regarding your text and how you would like to introduce the video, so I will chalk that up to artistic freedom for you :)
-"ecstasy" is the dictionary spelling instead of "extasy"
- "Every time you ejaculate, take a 15 minute break then resume at the beginning of the last round you completed, until you make it to the end."
- "5 points per cumshot"

Performance screen text
-should be "Stroke to the end to win the following performance-based titles:"

Warm-up screen text
-"Play with yourself until you are about to ejaculate"
-"Ride the edge as long as you can... then you will be ready for the first round."

I think the video frame may have unnecessarily wide top and bottom borders.

I love the way you did transitions in the warmup round!

Warmup summary comment
- some people prefer the word "cum" over "ejaculate" in this type of video since "ejaculate" sounds more clinical. This is just an opinion you may wish to consider.

Round 1
- The music selection seems interesting but may not be as widely accepted/appreciated just due to the genre. I personally think it is an interesting choice and seems to lend itself well to the beat patterns presented but the audience that appreciates this type of music may be smaller than you had in mind.
- at 05:25, the beat pattern text shows "1-0" You may wish to say something else such as "Fast" since 1-0 does not seem to capture what is happening.
- at 06:12 the 2-6 beat sound is relatively quiet and therefore more difficult to hear compared to the music and sound effects that are playing. Also you may wish to present it as "2 (x6)" since "2-6" suggests a "2 then 6" repeating pattern.
- at 06:20, the beat pattern of 3-6-3 again suggests "3 then 6 then 3" however it is really "3-6 (x3)"
- at 06:38, the beat pattern 7-1 may be better represented as "7-7"
- at 07:24, again the "1-0" may be better described as "1-1" or "Fast".
- at 07:35, the 2-7-1-0 pattern may be a bit much for someone to track while our "little brain" is doing the thinking lol =P but has a great rhythm to it. I also suggest the pattern be described as "2-7-1".
- wow that max speed gives the arm a real workout!

Round 2 text
- "take a 15 minute break" instead of "take a 15 minutes break"
- at 08:56, the beat pattern may be better represented as "Fast"
- at 09:40, again the beat pattern may be better represented as "Fast" instead of 1-0.
- at 11:08 through 11:22, even though we just finished up a gruelling "max" segment, it seems like a long time for no beats in a cum video. The screen action is very nice so maybe even slow beats there to give our arms a bit of a break and maybe lube up a bit more after burning it off in that max section lol. This is just a thought to consider.
- I noticed labelling of the beat patterns is not always occurring. For example the section starting at 11:22 seems like it should be labelled as "slow". There were one or two others earlier but I will have to go back to verify where they were.
- at 12:07, perhaps "Fast" instead of "1-0"
- I like that we can hear the ladies in some of these scenes :). That can really add a great deal to the overall experience in my opinion.
- at 12:37, the 2-5-1-0 should be seen as "2-7-1" since it is actually 2-7-1 that is happening instead of 2-5-1
- at 14:03, again the 2-5-1-0 should be seen as "2-7-1" since it is actually 2-7-1 that is happening instead of 2-5-1
- at 14:23, the 1-0 could be represented as "Fast"
- the ladies are very hot and have some steamy action going on, although I am not personally into the spit-swapping scene but this is just personal preference.

Final Round text
- should read "If you have ejaculted: take a 15 minute break then start back at the beginning of round 2 until you can reach this point while stroking without cumming!"
- at 15:19, it sounds like the beats have already started but the beat indicator does not start until 15:20. This may not seem like much but there are a few beats there to help push us to cum faster :-) .
- it is a good strong beat pattern at the beginning of the round. I wonder if it would work better to do a slight video speed-up of the scenes with the sex-swing so the bouncing falls in time with the beat pattern. I would not suggest slowing down the beats to match but when they are in sync, it really helps pull you into the moment with them :-)
- at 16:11, the pattern may be better described as 3-3
- at 16:29, the 1-0 could be represented as "Fast"
- at 17:49, the 1-0 could be represented as "Fast"
- at 18:20, the 3-1 could be represented as "3-3"
- at 18:44, the 1-0 could be represented as "Fast"
- at 19:47, the 1-0 could be represented as "Fast"
- at 21:05, the 1-0 could be represented as "Fast"

Good Job text
- at 21:21, instead of "FREE PACE" you may wish to label it as "Freestyle". Both really mean the same thing in this context so it is more a preference of standards than anything that impacts the actual game-play.
- it would be great to still have some background music during this part while still being able to hear the sounds the ladies are making :-) . The action is very hot so a bit of mood music could really enhance the scene, even just a light piano or classical guitar in the background.

- at 22:19, it should read "Now let's go see the score...". Please note the apostrophe.

Performance text
- "Add 5 points for each cumshot"

Credits
- you may wish to include the dancing and credits as part of the trying to cum again round, then place the performance text screen at the very end. This would work especially for those who may just need a couple extra minutes to tear off that last cumshot :-) . I am not sure what those girls at 25:33 were "dancing" (or prancing) to but they still look cute doing it :lol:.
- at 24:43, the text "Can't wait for your next loads Baby" may better read as "Can't wait for your next load Baby".
- I know "Spermsurection" is a mashup word, but I think it would be closer to a proper spelling with "Spermsurrection" since "insurrection" has that second "R" in it.

General Comments
Most of my comments are regarding the same thing, the notation of the beat pattern. This is just a conformity really to help describe the beats in such a way that has been traditionally used for Cock Hero and Cum Hero videos. That small change, which I admit I repeated often in my comments in the hope it makes it easier for you to find, would make a big difference for me to keep my mind on the action instead of trying to figure out why the beat was described the way it is right now :-) .

Overall opinion
WOW!!!! This is a great piece of work. Gorgeous women, hot action, well crafted transitions, etc.... You do have the touch when it comes to making these videos! :thankyou: :clap: :clap2:

With just a few minor tweaks, it will be an amazing addition to the Cum Hero series!
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Wow thanks a lot for all the great comments, :-D

That is more than expected, this will definitively help making a better video at the end of the day.

English is my second language so right off the bat, I need a check on the writing.

... and everything else is really constructive.

Will hit back the worktable to improve it before final release !
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Hey wait for me! So far I agree with CH Hero on all accounts. I am taking a bit different review. Started last night but only got to 12:00 before I went to bed. Should have notes posted by Sun Morning.
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Caius Prepus wrote: Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:47 pm Cum Hero Reborn - Cum Back 1 Pre release

I would like to get a couple of beta tester for this one.

Checking for :

- spelling errors
- Comprehensiveness
- feasability
- Any comment on beat, beatmeter, visual, music, etc...

You can put your name in this tread if you are interrested.
It is a + if you are a more than a 1 cumshot guy.

Thanks in advance
Wow I'm so excited :love:
Too bad I didn't notice this earlier, I've been a big fan of your productions
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Too bad I just see that you had a beta launch. Anyway comment was so nice that I don't think I could had usefull feedback beside them.

Will be happy to play with it when it will be finished, this is the only way I ever be able to cum more than once. So this is one of my preferred series.

Thanks for taking time to make it and take time to improve it with "customer" feedback.
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I enjoyed this CH!
Here is a spoiler for everyone! It is very hot indeed! :-D

Here are my thoughts to polish it.
I don't mind the recorder at the start but it is a bit silly. Mood at start
could be more magnificant.
I am not going to comment on the grammer or spelling as that is well covered already.

I agree with every suggestion from CH Hero. That is all good stuff and more important than what I have for you.

I am crazy that beats, music, and feeling are in sync.

I blocked the top 2/3 of my display during my first play through so I could
concentrate on beats, beatmeter, and music. I must say that the meter and the
beat track are nicely matched. The only issue I had was with some confusing beats.
These include a few beats out of place and a few extra, or a beat change that is
timed different than the meter. You are so nearly perfect, why not fix the few odd beats that remain?
No one is going to look down to follow the visual meter with the scenes you have choosen, so the beat sounds must be right.

Here is a timeline of my comments:

1:32 Picture transion not right. One gets cut off before you can see it.
4:55 Extra beats for a little while not shown on beatmeter.
6:12 Double beats not loud enough maybe?
6:23 You say 3-6-3 but the 6 seems to be 7 beats. Rename 3-7-3 or remove a beat?
Not a big deal.

6:38 to 7:22 beats are perfect.

7:35 Extra beat sound.
8:54 Extra beat sound.
11:52 Extra beat sound.
Extra beats from 12:05 until the next 1-0 beats start. I would quiet the extra beats in that interval.
14:03 Here you announce 2-5-1-0 but I hear 2-6-1-0.
15:18 Beats start ahead of the beat meter. 2 or 3 beats too soon.
16:20 If I am not looking at the beatmeter I might think that the beat goes to 1-0.
The added beats seem to fade away. Then, when you do transition to 1-0 it is great. You
may want to switch to 1-0 sooner.
17:11 Start fast mode here. Beats change but not beatmeter.
18:16 When you switch to 3-0 there is an extra beat several times. There is not
a pause between the groups of 3 beats.
19:05 Same as at 17:11. Start the fast mode sooner.
19:13 Change to even faster!

I would usually comment that the beats are too fast many places but this should achieve your goal in this Cum Hero....

I loved the scenes you have chosen! I feel the scenes have motion that works with the beats real well.
I'm not sure about the music for the credits - but it is light, and it is the credits after all, and
we are leaving (cleaning up) the theater during that time. :yes:

Hope something here helps.
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Caius Prepus wrote: Thu Nov 02, 2017 7:18 pm I will send you a torrent file in private message so you can download it.

Don't worry it is a low quality version, around 200 mbits only. Should not be long to download. Obviously the final version will have a high quality render.
Gee your "low quality" is better than HD on Pornhub!
I am assuming the border will go away with the final encode?
I forgot that I like the actors dialog and moans, well only the women, mixed into the music more often. Just a personal opinion.

Thanks for letting me participate!
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You made some good catches there hosenguy! I think a lot of the nit picky things got covered from all the comments so far. Nice work and good analysis.
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Thank Hosenguy,

I will look at your points. Just read your comment now...

Will make sure that I fix what can be fixed here...

The extra beat sound are incrusted in the audio music I think so It could be a shore to change them... will look at this if it is possible to erase them without too much editing, because editing the beat track is a pain in the ass lol.

You guys did an amazing job at catching the flaws here and there to improve that project.

I think I found my Beta testing team for future projects :-P

I started the Perfect 3 and maybe I will do a round for Chrismas project (see forum).
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Rendering right now, should be available in torrent to download tonight...

I looked at all the comments, did a lot of modifications to make it better.
But some stuff I changed, some other I did not... for technical reason or others... don't get mad if I did not input your suggestion in it please :P

Thanks again for all the help !
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