This is my first post on Milovana. Thank you for making this video! I really hope you build on this and continue to deliver awesome CH's in the future.
Reading Goal 32's post above, some parts I almost felt like I was writing it myself. Even though I only found out about CH a few months ago I was starting to grow a bit frustrated with the lack of CH's catering to the hardcore end of things. The whole dance, soft core, lesbian theme is just not my cup of tea but it seems to be the majority of content available. Even some CH's that I really enjoy I usually have to skip most of it and watch only the back end of the video where things start getting more hardcore. This isn't a solution though considering I'm now cutting a one hour CH down to lets say 20 minutes.
Thinking more on it, I did appreciate fully watching some of those for the first time but it felt more like watching a beautiful production to pass time instead of something I was eager to play and fap to. Personally, because of this, these CH's have no replay value to me. They tend to bring out frustration when I stumble onto them over and over on p-hub while looking for hardcore CH content.
With that being said those are only my personal feelings and I'd still like to extend my thanks to ALL our hardworking CH creators. You guys have created some beautiful content and made many people happy with your work.
Below is my list of pros and cons.
-pros:
*Rough sex, including anal, gangbang, double pen.
*Most of the music was good or at least ok. EDM, Electro Trance, House, are choices I love. A very small touch of carefully picked hip hop could work for a round or two, I wouldn't mind the mix. Side note, I normally dislike most dubstep I've heard.
*The pace, fast cuts and general editing, I felt like you did a good job with this. Its the worst feeling when I'm watching a CH and I'm like get to the next scene already. I really liked that you used many girls/scenes per round instead of one. I don't like the same girl/scene for an entire round, it gets boring.
*The girls you picked. For the most part I really enjoyed the choice of girls you made. I know sometimes finding content featuring cute young girls isn't the easiest, especially with the theme you chose.
*LOVED the idea for the first round. You separated it from the rest by making it a BJ only round, yet kept it hardcore enough to keep my attention.
*Scene progress bar at the top, very nice idea. I didn't notice it first go around. I think some appearance tweaking to the progress bar and beat meters could help. Size/color/position, would have to toy with it.
*Credits at the end, always a nice touch.
*The Scene breaks and buildups were nicely done.
-Cons:
*720p. Even though I know finding content is hard but I still have to categorize this as a con. I've had my fingers crossed for a bit now hoping someone would release a full 4k CH. I can dream right? Haha! Seriously though I really hope all CH's from here on out are at least full 1080p and in the near future 4k.
*The beat beats and meter. Alright I have to admit I am extremely musically challenged so maybe this was just me but for the most part, I found it very hard to pick up on the beats and follow along with them. Because of this I found myself often looking at the bar and unable to focus on the scenes. The beats should have been louder, and more pronounced to better differentiate from the music. I also feel like they could have been spaced and transitioned better. As far as the meter I feel a brighter color, and different style of meter can help tremendously (CH Temptations 4).
*Scene variety and story progression. Even though I loved the theme you picked, it felt like it was getting repetitive towards the end.
*Teasing me with the possibility of a Lexi Belle gangbang in the first round yet leaving me hanging! I won't forgive you for this!
Now for some suggestions and CH references that I feel could really make your future CH's AVN worthy.
Voice Acting -
I'll start off with the one that impressed me the most when I first found out about CH's. This has to be the idea (CH Bang Book) introduced. A female voice actor telling a story that develops throughout, including during scenes. The final scene ends with "Do it blow your load for me! Stroke that fucking cock". At that moment I found myself talking back to her out loud and you know the rest. After the last scene the voice actress does an outro and teases about the next Bang Book. Unfortunately that day has never come. To me this was just absolutely brilliant and made it very hard for any future CH to live up to it.
By the way, I believe I read somewhere that the creator of this project found the voice actress from a Reddit dedicated to voice acting.
Beats -
To beat meter or to not. Sometimes I feel like the beat meter takes my concentration away from the scenes and it ends up being a distraction. If a beat meter is used, it is of the utmost importance to make the beats loud and clear enough to easily follow. The meter style in (CH Temptation 4) has dots on it that go away as each beat passes, this might not have been the only thing about it that made it easier to keep up with but I remember I really liked that feature.
(Cock Hero Island 4), (Infernal Canto I), I feel that by not using a beat meter, although that takes a bit away from the whole concept of CH, it has its upside. By giving text queues of upcoming beat changes and using clear, and concise beats you can still have a very enjoyable CH type experience. Using this method adds the benefit of being able to pay closer attention to the amazing content the creator intended for you to focus on. Both ways work, this is obviously personal preference but as you can see what keeps getting brought up here is the attention to detail put into the beats.
Creativity -
Bringing a fresh new creative concept like (CH Island 4) did really helps captivate the audience and keeps them wanting more. This also brings me back to my first example (Voice Acting in CH Bang Book). One concept I can suggest is a "Dear Diary", "Dear Barely Legal" type. These videos always start with a cute girl reading her diary confessions out loud and then it develops into a scene. You can take these bits of voice acting to create a story. Use it as an introduction or in between chapters during "break" to introduce the next chapter. Since you wouldn't necessarily need the video from these it most likely wouldn't be too hard to put together.
Features -
Implementing a blend of ideas into your chapters helps keep things fresh. One good example I can remember is the "Breath Play" I saw in (Island 4). Another is a "Boss Fight" type chapter that can be every so many chapters in your CH. In these Chapters the music stops, you are now focused on the boss. The beat meter follows the rhythm of penetration and video cuts become sparse. This sudden change gave me a sense of connection between myself and the "Boss" which in-turn helped intensify things.
-Scene Diversity
While still staying in the genre of hardcore porn you can diversify the scenes by some of the examples Goal 32 mentioned. I wouldn't be opposed to throwing in some scenes from Blacked in there. Taboo role playing as well, specially with edits where you focus on the actresses voice for a few seconds while she screams or whispers sexy lines. I think this is one of the categories people don't openly admit they enjoy, which is why CH creators have shied away from it. What I can tell you though is that every time I visit tube sites, taboo videos are in the "hot videos list", "most viewed", "currently being watched list". Please do not be afraid to push the envelope, use any legal hardcore material out there that is at your disposal. Well, ok, maybe not ANY. As a personal favor please stay away from scat type material, I'll lose my boner for a month! Also lets keep it humans, no animated stuff.
Possibly mixing in some home made amatures into the scene cuts could be a nice touch as well, but only if you are able to find high quality sources.
-Edits
As I mentioned before I thought you did a good job with this. First go around I didn't remember hearing lines from the actresses. Second time I picked up on it at times but it felt subtle and didn't manage to stand out. I believe this was due to volume adjustments that would need to be made. For example lowering or cutting the music and making the voices louder, at least at those specific moments. I feel this is very important to get right and needs attention to detail in order to really intensify the scenes at the correct moments. Outside of that I did watch this other CH once, I can't remember which it was right now but the creator seemed to primarily focus on adding special effects to the video. It was cool and most of the comments seemed to thoroughly enjoy it and praise it, this can be something to think about. Thing is, I'd imagine this would add a lot of production time to the project. Ultimately it might not be worth it, especially if you have no experience with this sort of thing.
-Final Chapter
Personal preference here is an all creampie round where they are asking to be creamed inside while they are orgasming. I really don't enjoy final chapters ending in cumshots. I think a full final scene countdown with a Double or even triple time beat at the end is a nice way to finish. A good story wrap up/ending should be done if a story was used.
-A list of some sites that offer content you might be interested in for your future project.
Some of these sites belong to the same studio.
*Tushy
*Blacked
*Tiny4k
*PornFidelity
*Vixen
*MomsBangTeens
*Kink
*PunishTeens
*FamilyStrokes
*BrutalCasting
*Exxxtrasmall
*SisLovesMe
*NubileFilms
*BFFS
*IKnowThatGirl
*TeensDoPorn
*TeenPies
*TeamSkeet (multiple sites)
-List, many of my favorite stars in alphabetical order. Hope to see a lot of them in your next CH.
Some of the stars listed may no longer be active and some I was only into during the earlier parts of their career.
May update in the future.
*Abella Danger
*Abigaile Johnson
*Adria Rae
*Adriana Checkik
*Aidra Fox
*Alex Grey
*Alexa Grace
*Alexis Texas
*Allie Haze
*Ami Moretti
*Anya Olsen
*Ashlynn Brooke
*Aspen Ora
*August Ames
*Ava Taylor
*Bailey Brooke
*Belle Knox
*Bree Olsen
*Carter Cruise
*Cherry Crush
*Connie Carter
*Dakota Skye
*Dani Daniels
*Dillion Harper
*Dolly Leigh
*Emily Grey
*Faye Reagan
*Gina Valentina
*Harley Jade
*Jannice Griffith
*Jennifer White
*Jillian Janson
*Jojo Kiss
*Joseline Kelly
*Karla Kush
*Kendra Sunderland
*Kimmy Granger
*Kleio Valentien
*Krystal Boyd
*Kylie Quinn
*Lana Rhoades
*Leah Gotti
*Lexi Belle
*Lily Rader
*Little Caprice
*Lyra Law
*Mandy Flores
*Maria Ozawa
*Megan Sage
*Melissa Moore
*Mia Malkova
*Molly Jane
*Naomi Woods
*Natalia Starr
*Penny Pax
*Remmy Lacroix
*Riley Reid
*Sasha Grey
*Stella Cox
*Stoya
*Sydney Cole
*Tori Black
*Valentina Nappi
Milfs
*Brandi Love
*Cherie Deville
*Corey Chase
*India Summers
*Julia Ann
It's really late so I might have to edit and add some things later.
-In conclusion
You did a great job for your first long CH project and you also helped fill a niche that hasn't received much love.
This was fun to watch, yet I picked up on a lot of things that could be improved. I see a lot of potential, I hope that you dedicate yourself to another CH project.
All in all, I really enjoyed the experience that you created.
This long post was my way of thanking you. Hopefully you had the patience to bare with me and get through it all.
I look forward to your next project!
Thank you again!