Zoltan! Truly a job well done. I'm writing an in-depth review, since I want to meta deep dive into each part of this Cock Hero. Apologies in advance if it seems like I'm rambling:
With our current technology (or at least until someone develops a Cock Hero specific program that we can all agree to make edits for), you can make a Cock Hero that does branching paths that force you to skip around (ala Inferno) or you can tell a very specific story that the viewer has to sit through and hope it entertains them enough to go through the whole thing. For a Branching Path Cock Hero, I think you found an excellent alternative to skipping around. There was only one scene that requires skipping if you lose the challenge, and you definitely kept my curiosity piqued. The overall structure is a bit odd, since you essentially split the Cock Hero in half, but I'd like to talk about that in the next section.
I liked how the video opens with Kenna talking about her career, and how she sets up how she only does certain types of scenes. Great for storytelling purposes. I do find it strange that you open up with this, and only give the payoff at the very VERY end, past 5(ish) release prompts, and that's only if the viewer fails the blind challenge in the middle. I feel that if you introduce the idea of cock entering Kenna James' pussy (a metaphorical Chekhov's Gun), then that should be followed through in the typical play-experience later on. There were so many elements in this Cock Hero (reward girls, audio-only segment, etc) that it's easy to overlook that a hardcore Kenna James scene is missing until it's introduced later, which is both good and bad. Good because viewers are having too much damn fun playing and cumming before the video truly ends (which goes for probably 90% of PornHub viewers). Bad because more particular people would wonder, "Why was that interview included?" and wouldn't know why until the 3rd or 4th viewing, if they replay this Cock Hero enough or edge/skip to the end.
I applaud your bravery, sir. I contemplated doing an ageplay-themed Cock Hero for awhile, but decided to go with the University theme on my latest release. You picked reward girls that were petite and cute enough to make the ageplay convincing, especially with the 3-girl blowjob scene. The audio from GWA and the little audio snippets like "You better get out of here before my parents get home" hit me right in the special taboo spot that makes me cum. I'm curious to see how well-received this would be in the general porn-loving community, since its' taboo nature makes it hard to find outside of soundgasm or clips4sale. I love it, and I hope others receive it as well as I do!
SCENE-BY-SCENE BREAKDOWN (EXTREME spoilers here, please only read after playing through the Cock Hero):
The Intro - Love the skating theme, and it was a perfect way to ease me into an hour-long Cock Hero. This was lovingly done! Choosing the Reward Girls - Your Tove Lo round in 2nd Mix was by far your most popular round, so I can see why you chose to weave in sexy musical artists into your rounds for 3rd Mix. This whole round was very well-executed! Jogging Girl - I know this is subjective, but I love everything about that clip with the workout girl. This is coming from the Prime Fitness guy with a love for sports bras. LOVED. IT. Great introduction of Kenna too. It's interesting how you had three reward girls, but the true prize was Kenna... but only if you failed the next round. I'm not sure if you were intending for her to be a consolation reward or the secret Easter egg reward. Though that confused me, I'm still glad you put her in. GWA Round - The audio for this must've been challenging, mixing in audible beats on top of music, with a really clear spoken vocal track. Very well done. This was also when the ageplay theme became truly prominent, and I loved every second of it. Lexi, Dani, and the Cupcake Panties - I chose Dani as my reward girl and I'm really glad I didn't cum during this. Great touch including those panties. Ariana Grande - You do a great job finding porn doppelgangers for specific musical artists. The sexiness of this round is nearly up there with your Tove Lo round in 2nd Mix, and the only thing keeping it from being on par is because Tove Lo actually flashes her tits. Really well done. I loved the music video, and I loved the porn accompanying it. Lexi's Reward Round and the Three-Girl BJ - The schoolgirl themed is played up HARD, and I love watching all three in their brightly colored teen outfits. I truly had no idea if I was going to cum this early, but I'm glad you chose Lexi first. Military Girls - I think you wanted to break way from the ageplay, just for a little bit. The shift in focus to bigger tits and harder girls was a welcome step. I'm glad that this Cock Hero isn't like the Island-series, which seems almost exclusively focused on giant boobs. I honestly love thin petite girls who hit my taboo buttons just right. However, variety makes Cock Hero's great, and this helped accomplish that. Cheer, Dance, and Ashlynn's Reward Round - God. Fucking. Dammit. I wanted to cum so bad during this round, and I almost felt FOR SURE that this was going to be Dani's reward round. You focused so much on Dani and I was ready to blow, especially with the juxtaposition of teenage dance squads. Yeah. I was. Yeah. Fuck. I was almost pissed I didn't get to cum. God this made me shiver. Bodybangers Round - Another fantastic edit weaving together a sexy musical artist with a convincing porn doppelganger. Well done! Lure a Girl into your Car for Dani's Reward Round - I love this. I think you know where to hit people psychologically, and when it comes to me, you hit a bullseye. Thank you for your fantastic work, and keeping a pervert like me very happy.
PrimeSwitch wrote: ↑Mon Mar 27, 2017 8:25 am
Zoltan! Truly a job well done. I'm writing an in-depth review, since I want to meta deep dive into each part of this Cock Hero. Apologies in advance if it seems like I'm rambling:
Hoooooly shit thanks for the incredibly detailed feedback. You've given me an excuse to share some of my design philosophy so let's nerd out.
MAJOR SPOILERS ahead for anyone who hasn't seen ALL 3rdMIX content:
PrimeSwitch wrote: ↑Mon Mar 27, 2017 8:25 am
THEMES:
I liked how the video opens with Kenna talking about her career, and how she sets up how she only does certain types of scenes. Great for storytelling purposes. I do find it strange that you open up with this, and only give the payoff at the very VERY end, past 5(ish) release prompts, and that's only if the viewer fails the blind challenge in the middle. I feel that if you introduce the idea of cock entering Kenna James' pussy (a metaphorical Chekhov's Gun), then that should be followed through in the typical play-experience later on.
I was actually thinking of this release as a multi-day experience. The average player will most likely keep his eyes closed the first play, get teased by Kenna "Maybe next time, Cock Hero..." then eagerly return to see what Kenna has in store for him on a different day. My logic is this builds even more anticipation for the great reveal that happens. In that sense it's more like revealing Checkov's Gun on a TV show but not following through until the following week's episode.
PrimeSwitch wrote: ↑Mon Mar 27, 2017 8:25 am
THE REWARD GIRLS AND THE SURPRISE THEME:
I applaud your bravery, sir. I contemplated doing an ageplay-themed Cock Hero for awhile, but decided to go with the University theme on my latest release. You picked reward girls that were petite and cute enough to make the ageplay convincing, especially with the 3-girl blowjob scene. The audio from GWA and the little audio snippets like "You better get out of here before my parents get home" hit me right in the special taboo spot that makes me cum. I'm curious to see how well-received this would be in the general porn-loving community, since its' taboo nature makes it hard to find outside of soundgasm or clips4sale. I love it, and I hope others receive it as well as I do!
I'm not sure if you were intending for her [Kenna] to be a consolation reward or the secret Easter egg reward. Though that confused me, I'm still glad you put her in.
Excellent question - the answer is I was as surprised as you were.
Kenna James was supposed to be a cocktease, and the branching path victim was meant to be forced into a 24-hour denial if he failed to cum using slow beats over two rounds. That's why Round 6A looks so much like a reward round at the end - it was supposed to be the player's last/best chance to cum.
Then Kenna shot her first boy/girl scene. Two weeks before 3rdMIX release. I scrambled. I wasn't sure at first how best to incorporate the new footage, but I now look at Kenna as the "final" reward girl. Many players won't see her final scene until after 3 or more plays, and I like the idea of her teasing them every single game until they finally get to her.
The spooky thing about this is I had a premonition about it. Kenna had done 2 years of exclusively girl/girl scenes at the time I built round 3 but I started fantasizing about if she would go boy/girl during production and started checking her twitter. Sure enough a few weeks ago she starts talking about her new career choice and I couldn't believe it. Bona fide miracle.
Orgentuno wrote: ↑Tue Mar 28, 2017 12:58 am
Just uploaded video to PornHub.
I appreciate the thought but I have a Pornhub video up on my channel. It's a special edit that includes instructions for Pornhub users to post their scores.
I would appreciate it if you could make yours private or remove it so the version with the instructions is the one that shows up in search results.
After 67 days of waiting, I was more than eager to test my mettle against your game after I saw you had posted it up. 67 days is the absolute longest I have ever gone and coming from a 2-cum a day kind of guy, it's definitely a colossal achievement for me. I had the entire place to myself for a few nights so I decided to make kind of a thing of it, threw it on the 60 inch tv in the living room with some wireless earphones and laid back relaxing with a quick joint to get my mind in the right place.
The intro was a nice and slow start and i enjoyed watching the rollerblading interspersed with scenes of the two girls rubbing and grinding against each other, especially the lighter haired one. Was rock hard and dripping precum already by the time I was supposed to pick a reward girl. I of course opted for Lexi Belle but the other girls were both excellent and I'm definitely looking forward to future play throughs.
Then the next round starts and it's Aidra Fox and I remember thinking 'uh oh, this isn't good'. By the time she showed up rubbing herself very briefly in between the double-time fucking scenes I had already gotten close to the edge but had been saved by the rest periods. My cock was absolutely thrumming and ready to cum.
The next round was something special, and something that definitely surprised me. I listen to GWA quite often and the use of forcing the player to use their imagination while teasing them with something they might be missing is a very powerful tool and now one of my favorite cock hero mechanics. It played ESPECIALLY well with being high and watching the taunting light dance across the inside of my eyelids while the incredibly sexy audio played over the music was more than enough to get me to burst.
Lasted until 17:15 and exploded right when she told me to, with my eyes closed. My cock erupted and my body must have shook for a good minute and a half riding the waves of pleasure. After 67 days, I can safely say it was one of the most powerful orgasms I've had watching a cock hero, and I wasn't even technically watching it when it got me XD
Can't wait to play through again and hopefully make it to Lexi once and for all.
Honestly, it was like you were in my head with the placement of the various rests and slower beat changes. There were a few times I was at the absolute edge and thinking I was moments away from losing, and getting saved by one. That plus the relatively slowish start and ramp up in scenes definitely helped me along. But once the throat noises from the 'eyes closed' round came up, I wasn't lasting much longer after that.
After 67 days of waiting, I was more than eager to test my mettle against your game after I saw you had posted it up. 67 days is the absolute longest I have ever gone and coming from a 2-cum a day kind of guy, it's definitely a colossal achievement for me. I had the entire place to myself for a few nights so I decided to make kind of a thing of it, threw it on the 60 inch tv in the living room with some wireless earphones and laid back relaxing with a quick joint to get my mind in the right place.
The intro was a nice and slow start and i enjoyed watching the rollerblading interspersed with scenes of the two girls rubbing and grinding against each other, especially the lighter haired one. Was rock hard and dripping precum already by the time I was supposed to pick a reward girl. I of course opted for Lexi Belle but the other girls were both excellent and I'm definitely looking forward to future play throughs.
Then the next round starts and it's Aidra Fox and I remember thinking 'uh oh, this isn't good'. By the time she showed up rubbing herself very briefly in between the double-time fucking scenes I had already gotten close to the edge but had been saved by the rest periods. My cock was absolutely thrumming and ready to cum.
The next round was something special, and something that definitely surprised me. I listen to GWA quite often and the use of forcing the player to use their imagination while teasing them with something they might be missing is a very powerful tool and now one of my favorite cock hero mechanics. It played ESPECIALLY well with being high and watching the taunting light dance across the inside of my eyelids while the incredibly sexy audio played over the music was more than enough to get me to burst.
Lasted until 17:15 and exploded right when she told me to, with my eyes closed. My cock erupted and my body must have shook for a good minute and a half riding the waves of pleasure. After 67 days, I can safely say it was one of the most powerful orgasms I've had watching a cock hero, and I wasn't even technically watching it when it got me XD
Can't wait to play through again and hopefully make it to Lexi once and for all.
Well if you are not lying or cheating and you were trying to just last as long as possible. According to the score system we talked about earlier in this thread. Your score would be 4,143,347. That's way OVER 9,000!
Orgentuno wrote: ↑Tue Mar 28, 2017 12:58 am
Just uploaded video to PornHub.
I appreciate the thought but I have a Pornhub video up on my channel. It's a special edit that includes instructions for Pornhub users to post their scores.
I would appreciate it if you could make yours private or remove it so the version with the instructions is the one that shows up in search results.
The one from very early on, where Aidra Fox is running down the street in those ridiculously tiny shorts and the sports bra. She's the hottest woman on the planet, and that particular scene is better than most of the stuff I've seen her in, so I'd love to source the original video.
The one from very early on, where Aidra Fox is running down the street in those ridiculously tiny shorts and the sports bra. She's the hottest woman on the planet, and that particular scene is better than most of the stuff I've seen her in, so I'd love to source the original video.
Amazing. Out did yourself. I thought I was going to lose with the "close your eyes" segment but then no one would see your stats unless you peeked. Will have to check that part out and see if I can win the other ways.
I was really looking forward to your report and it didn't disappoint. Thank you for the detail, that was very rewarding to read.
