Shattered Skies [Aborded]

[Sombre]

マスをかく ゆうしゃ : Shattered Skies.

« You are Yellow 13, a fearsome fighter pilot who has vanished from the sky after being shot down in the waning days of a long war. The world believes you are dead, but that is far from the truth. When you regain consciousness, instead of your familiar cockpit, you find yourself surrounded by technology you can't understand. You are seemingly a captive, as if in a sort of purgatory awaiting your final judgment.

It turns out "they" have selected you. You're a very special human. But are you a human worthy of surviving, or are you just another expendable piece of meat, destined to freeze in the vastness of space ...?»

Theme : Science-fiction
Type : Manga
Release : Begin 2017 Approx.
Length : 40 min Approx.
Game Mechanics : Sort of Sci-Fi battle royale with opponents. Each round will have 3 opponents approx. The last survivor win his place in the infinite space, the other will finish in galaxy food plate after a long time in the freezer ...
Objectifs : Becoming the only one.

I hope than the title in japanese will stimulate japanese to make CH games.

Wish me good luck !
Sombre

Credits :

English correction : Zoltan
Pictures used : Byōsoku go senchimētoru

[alchemi183]

Good luck!

I hope that sometime before you release it in 2017 that you will ask a native English speaker to help proofread your text.

[Liquid]

I'm looking forward to that and I second alchemi's notion about proof-reading

[Sombre]

Yeah, my english is bad. If you want to correct it, you're welcome.
But the japanese title is worst. I think than a japanese jump from his chair at this particuly moment.

1000 years of war beetween france and england is a pain in a language's ass.

Anyway, if anyone want to correct my subtitles or this first post, he can send me a message. I will give him chocolat.

I will try to give you all the quality i can make.

I could make it in french. But if i do that, you will have break of 30 minutes and pages of reading to wait the next round. And it will be boring.

[Woogity]

A new story driven cock hero??? I am very interested

[Sombre]

I will try. Not easy to find a space opera hentai without tentacle and eggs....

I have search a long time last month. But i didn't find a really good anime hentai database where you can select exclusively Sci-Fi hentai. To filter just what i want to find.

[book_guy]

Wait, there's something WRONG with tentacles and eggs? Uh ... news to me ...



... just kidding ...

Serious discussion follows.

I'm coming (har har ... doh! didn't stay serious very long!) to understand that "F" in a cock-hero title means "fap" which, oddly, therefore means it has to do with anime, hentai, and other types of cartoons. That's a bit of a strange surprise, the verbal usage of "F" to stand for "cartoon." I don't mind, just pointing it out.

Mild discrepancy exists, though. Fapping can be done to real images too! Like you didn't know. Anyway, because of that useful fact, some titles in my sharing zone (see signature below) may have "fap" in their titles but may NOT necessarily be primarily cartoon creations. In fact, the "Fap Fantastika" videos that I decided to keep are 100% real images of real non-cartoon stuff. There are, in my opinion and according to my own preferences, tons of appealing cartoon (anime, hentai, etc.) videos out there. But generally, for my preferences, I find that the cock-hero-style productions which are entirely cartooned are also rather over-the-top and silly. Lots of high squealing girlie music of non-sexy variety, lots of non-realistic imagery of basically what Hanna Barbera or Looney Tunes would have made a porn girl look like, rather than what Frank Frazetta or Boris Vallejo would have made a porn girl look like (and did!). I personally am REALLY turned on by SOME types of hentai / cartoon / anime, but some types just DON'T do it for me. How do I find the RIGHT types for ME? And when will someone make a cock-hero-style stroke-instruction video solely with that type of imagery? The other stuff for me is a real turn off ... Frazetta and Vallejo would be good, Umemaro good, 3D G Spot good(-ish), but looks-like a Wile E Coyote would be bad, for me, according to my personal preferences.

[zoltan]

マスをかく ゆうしゃ : Shattered Skies.

« You will portrait Yellow 13, a feared fighter pilot who has disappears in the sky, shut down by a brave opponent, at the end of a war between two nations. Disappear? For people from Earth maybe, but for him, really not. As a pilot, you will be awake in a strange place who has a technology than you can't understand. Captive, in a sort of purgatory, waiting for your judgement. They told you than they select human. Human who are worthy of surviving, human who deserve just to became frozen meat for the galaxy ... »

I took a shot at this. Hopefully it's close to what you intended.

マスをかく ゆうしゃ : Shattered Skies.

« You are Yellow 13, a fearsome fighter pilot who has vanished from the sky after being shot down in the waning days of a long war. The world believes you are dead, but that is far from the truth. When you regain consciousness, instead of your familiar cockpit, you find yourself surrounded by technology you can't understand. You are seemingly a captive, as if in a sort of purgatory awaiting your final judgment.

It turns out "they" have selected you. You're a very special human. But are you a human worthy of surviving, or are you just another expendable piece of meat, destined to freeze in the vastness of space ...?»

[Sombre]

At the beginning of this project, i was thinking to put nothing before the title.

I don't have a answer to your note book_guy. I just see than 90% of the video related to manga style are named Fap Hero. Cock Hero seem to be more for Porn video with real models and pornstar on it.

But it's just a feeling. And i have also noted than people here prefer Porn video than Hentai and Ecchi video. So, better to earn them time with a good "category" name.

Anyway, it's a good debate. I think, like my first idea. I will put nothing at the beginning.

But i wait the Japanese guy who will come to say : We don't write that in Japanese !

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Thanks Zoltan ! Your correction is really better than mine ! For the end, i was thinking more about cannibalism in a space empire because i was thinking about a slavery carnivorous people but i love the end than you have write.

Again, i'm very sorry for my bad english. You have different type of tense in English than in French. Different philosophy of grammar & spelling too... so, it's very hard for me. I really do my best.

[zoltan]

Thanks Zoltan ! Your correction is really better than mine ! For the end, i was thinking more about cannibalism in a space empire because i was thinking about a slavery carnivorous people but i love the end than you have write.

Again, i'm very sorry for my bad english. You have different type of tense in English than in French. Different philosophy of grammar & spelling too... so, it's very hard for me. I really do my best.

Aha! Interesting bit about the cannibalism. I'm glad you enjoyed my interpretation.

You have nothing to be sorry about. Your English is way better than my French.

If you like I'll be happy to review & clean up any text you come up with for your project.

[Eriol]

I will try. Not easy to find a space opera hentai without tentacle and eggs....

I have search a long time last month. But i didn't find a really good anime hentai database where you can select exclusively Sci-Fi hentai. To filter just what i want to find.

Register a user to http://anidb.net so you can unlock their adult db. Login and at search go for the tags.
Set Content indicators - Sex to *+ (star, plus)
Set Elements - Science fiction to + (plus)
Set Fetishes - Tentacle to Exclude.
I also recommend using the tag Technical aspects - TV censoring - Uncensored version available
At the result page on the right I suggest you to filter down the result with Misc - Hide Synonyms.

You will get about 25 title, most of them with several episodes.

Btw I think its just easier to look for some quality, uncensored sci-fi hentai and don't include the tentacle parts in your video.
If you leave the tentacle exclude out of the equation you will get about 31 titles.

Cheers!

[Sombre]

I will try. Not easy to find a space opera hentai without tentacle and eggs....

I have search a long time last month. But i didn't find a really good anime hentai database where you can select exclusively Sci-Fi hentai. To filter just what i want to find.

Register a user to http://anidb.net so you can unlock their adult db. Login and at search go for the tags.
Set Content indicators - Sex to *+ (star, plus)
Set Elements - Science fiction to + (plus)
Set Fetishes - Tentacle to Exclude.
I also recommend using the tag Technical aspects - TV censoring - Uncensored version available
At the result page on the right I suggest you to filter down the result with Misc - Hide Synonyms.

You will get about 25 title, most of them with several episodes.

Btw I think its just easier to look for some quality, uncensored sci-fi hentai and don't include the tentacle parts in your video.
If you leave the tentacle exclude out of the equation you will get about 31 titles.

Cheers!

Really thanks. This information is really important for people who make video. I will try it.
The quality is not important when you search. Because, you search scene than you like in the hentai sea planet. When you have find a scene, you know the title of the movie, so you can try to find a quality version after !

Aha! Interesting bit about the cannibalism. I'm glad you enjoyed my interpretation.

You have nothing to be sorry about. Your English is way better than my French.

If you like I'll be happy to review & clean up any text you come up with for your project.

Really thanks. I will try my best to not send you too much work to do. ^^

[Eriol]

The quality is not important when you search. Because, you search scene than you like in the hentai sea planet. When you have find a scene, you know the title of the movie, so you can try to find a quality version after !

By quality I meant hentai with good graphic and scenes. :)

[Sombre]

Haaa, yes, of course. There are some old hentaï with bad quality... the drawing have really change since ten years...

[Sombre]

Hello. Project Aborted.

After a long search, there are not enough space animated manga to make this FP.
It seem than nobody care about space hentaï... and nobody make hentaï in this theme. Maybe 50 entry in 30 years in AnyDB. And it's so sad.

And i don't want to make an hentaï video with scene already seen 10 times in all Fap Hero project.

I go back listening black metal and stroke on 220 BPM songs... *joke*

Thanks Zoltan anyway for the help.