Under my control - FEEDBACK

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Re: FB: Under my control

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Great job! Thanks for taking the time to make this :) I'll be using this frequently.
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18.10.2010 - UPDATE
- 5 tasks added
- Cum and Ruin chance if you choose "Sometimes" slightly decreased. (for ruin only left the same)
- If you fail to answer her call in time - you still recieve a warning, but it won't start another timer - you'll have to read it and click continue to start a timer again.
- Some improvements were made to the sript to easen further editing.
PLEASE tell me if something stops working (though it should not)
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About the punisment - I didn't think too long when I was writing it - now it's just simply if you fail her 5 times you are denied for a week and have some dayly tasks.
But it's not good. Firstly, I doubt anyone would follow it.
Secondary, I don't think it's too interesting.

So I will rewrite it soon. So, any ideas about what should follow if you didn't stroke when she asked you to?
I was thinking about this:
if you fail her, then a few next sessions she will not let you cum 100% (even if you choose to always cum.) But I can't figure out, what should it be for a person who ALREADY choose never to cum? And if you were doing a draining session (very often stroking and cumming) - your next few times of denial might actually be a bless.
Or maybe make it just a cruel edging and stroking session? But there's people here who will not be able to handle something, that will seem very very easy to others.

So, any ideas? :unsure:
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Hi - very, very good tease, if thats what we're calling it.

Used a few different setting so far, even tried running it in windows at the same time, 1 set to the most frequent and never cum and the other as up to her and always cum. Long frustrating and ultimately sore night and went to bed before I got to come :weep:

Nezhul wrote:Made it so you asked to stroke at the beginning.
How about adding an opening page where it is possible to choose to start a new or resume session, start a new might start with stroking, resume wouldn't (I realise we'll still have to enter all out options again).

Perhaps an extension of this for those opting for the longer periods might be to be able to enter how long since you'd been in "rest time" during you previous session so that this can be accounted for in the timer for the new session - may be thats complicating matters too much. Though if it is possible I don't think time without the tease running should count - only time under her control.


Nezhul wrote:As for long-time hidden timers - well, sorry, that's the idea. You don't know when you are asked to stroke again.
What about an option to see the timer or not? Some would choose not others would choose not to.
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Pretty much all you are asking is too complicated. So sorry - I don't think I'll ever do so. :huh:
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19.10.2010 - UPDATE
- More timers added so waiting time should be more divercive. They vary from 5 minutes to 10 hours, and the step between is 5 minutes, and then 10 minutes after 2 hours line. Total 72 timers to choose from. :look:
- Added Timeframe choosing feature. Now you can set minimum and maximum rest time between sessions. You can custumize it pretty much how you like. Enjoy. It looks a bit ugly, but I had no energy left to make it pretty. =\

todo:
- Redo punishment system (can't quite figure out what should I do for punishment) :blush:

If You find new bugs - please, let me know. ;-)

P.S.
Freaking pain in the ass to do something cool in nyx, given that no variables are avaliable. I'v made 100+ supporting pages and had to do freaking 3686 lines of mustnot() functions only! That's insane! But I did it and I think that means I'm crazy. The previous version was only 660 lines total. This is 5260 - 9 times bigger. Insanity. No, this is madnes... THIS IS SPARTAAAAAAAAA!
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Re: Under my control - FEEDBACK

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Nice alterations.

Out of interest how have you set the up to her option? Is it totally random or have you set up some sort of profile for it to follow? Come to that I suppose that question applies to the other options too.

I noticed whilist reading other threads that you mention Cyber MIstress, this "tease" would work great under Cyber Mistress as it could be stopped and started and could remember settings etc, realise it would be a lot of work for you and I doubt you'd want to do it all over again. I've only written one session for CM before but might be interested in translating this one if you'd be agreeable to that.
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Up to her - is simply any of the 72 timers there is might be chosen. No palettes - that's too complicated for nyx.

You may redo it in CM, I don't care. Personally I don't like this program that much. I'll definitely redo this tease in MIA though, when it comes out, using all the functionality of java and HTML5 including cookies (i hope the possibility will still be there). THEN it'll be much more cool
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Now that I think of it, I probobly should have uploaded only about 20 pictures... It's just that there is over 90 of them, random at all pages, but they look so alike that it seems like there's no more then a dozen. Too bad, by the way. The outfit is sooo sexy, but she shows only breasts and a little of ass, and that's it. They could make this into a great set. Lazy bastards. :closedeyes:
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Re: Under my control - FEEDBACK

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No advice here, just appreciation for a lot of hard work with a terrific result. Thanks!
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22.10.2010 - UPDATE
- 10 new tasks added. Evil and not so much )
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Re: Under my control - FEEDBACK

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Just found your tease and tried a little bit. Great work. Will do it, when I have a whole day :-)

btw: whats the name of the girl? She's awesome :w00t:
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I just tried this tease. The idea is amazing. I let her choose what's coming up and I told her to not let me cum. Really looking forward to the next sound :-)

Thanks for your work and merry christmas
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Re: Under my control - FEEDBACK

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Hope you'll like it. But I must warn that it can be pretty hardcore to let HER choose the time, not setting a special timeframe. And if you happen to be disappointed in this randomness, please, try setting some limits. :smile:
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