FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
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FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
I've just published my first tease here, so any kind of feedback is very welcome. So, how was your Goddess' mood today ?
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Re: FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
You have to make the change in the Eos editor and then just follow the same steps as when you originally published the tease. That will update the published tease then.
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Re: FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
Ok, thanks. I may make some minor changes tonight.
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Re: FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
Just a small update. I made the first introductory page skippable. I also gave the option
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Re: FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
Hey,
Just want to leave a feedback that I really love the tease (put it in my favorite set). I think the text itself and the consistency in the "personality" in the Goddess character is a really big turn on for me. I also thought the fact that the tease is largely automatic is nice and for the most part the tease is well-timed.
The thing is that I actually play the tease once when you first posted it, and once again tonight. On my first playthrough, I got the Cum ending and just earlier I got the Denial ending. Based on your previous comment, I assume these are the two "main" endings? I would like to know the exact mechanic behind what influence these two endings (is it just pure luck, and if so, what are the chances for each of those ending?)
I'm actually into ruined orgasms too, so I'm thinking of checking out the other "cum early" endings. Just also wonder how many are there? Whenever I play a tease, I usually play to check out all the endings available
Just want to leave a feedback that I really love the tease (put it in my favorite set). I think the text itself and the consistency in the "personality" in the Goddess character is a really big turn on for me. I also thought the fact that the tease is largely automatic is nice and for the most part the tease is well-timed.
The thing is that I actually play the tease once when you first posted it, and once again tonight. On my first playthrough, I got the Cum ending and just earlier I got the Denial ending. Based on your previous comment, I assume these are the two "main" endings? I would like to know the exact mechanic behind what influence these two endings (is it just pure luck, and if so, what are the chances for each of those ending?)
I'm actually into ruined orgasms too, so I'm thinking of checking out the other "cum early" endings. Just also wonder how many are there? Whenever I play a tease, I usually play to check out all the endings available
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Re: FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
Hey, thanks for your kind words, I'm very glad you liked it
So I'll put the answers to your questions in a spoiler tag, just to avoid ruining someone's experience:
So I'll put the answers to your questions in a spoiler tag, just to avoid ruining someone's experience:
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Re: FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
Despite not being super into feet, I thought this tease was really hot. Like everyone else said, the writing and personality was top-notch, and I really enjoyed how you have the player act out the images.
Personally, I would have also enjoyed the option for a metronome, as when I'm watching a tease I don't like counting much. However this played into the dominant tone of the tease.
Also, I was pretty happy to see that you put a gif in the tease! I really liked how well it flowed with the progression of the events and felt natural. My only critique about it was that the speed seemed a bit off. The first few frames looked fine, but when the
All in all, excellent work on this tease! I'm excited to see what you do next, and I can't wait to play this one again soon
Personally, I would have also enjoyed the option for a metronome, as when I'm watching a tease I don't like counting much. However this played into the dominant tone of the tease.
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Also, I was pretty happy to see that you put a gif in the tease! I really liked how well it flowed with the progression of the events and felt natural. My only critique about it was that the speed seemed a bit off. The first few frames looked fine, but when the
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All in all, excellent work on this tease! I'm excited to see what you do next, and I can't wait to play this one again soon
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Re: FB: The Goddess with the thousand feet
I'm really happy you liked it, especially if you are not very much into feet
About the metronome, if a lot of people prefer it, I may think of putting it at some point. I just find it unnatural in a way. Your Goddess wouldn't come and tell you to listen to some beat, she would just command you to stroke at a certain speed.
I did split up the pages some more, so I hope most of the not scrolling problems are fixed.
About the gif, it did trouble me a bit. I had begun making it before the showcase tease you posted, and it helped me to finalize it. I do think that the version I put wasn't the best. I made some modifications now, and I hope it flows even better. I was thinking of using more gifs during the tease, because I had found some great ones. My main problem was how to put the text that progresses as the gif plays. I didn't want to put it in notification as you showed, because the sentences were quite big. In the end I decided to leave just this one gif, to check how it will work, and maybe try experimenting more with gifs in following teases.
The truth is I am not sure when I'm going to make another tease, if I find an idea that intrigues me, it will happen. At the moment I'm still upgrading this one. In the new version I also added some more lines of script and
About the metronome, if a lot of people prefer it, I may think of putting it at some point. I just find it unnatural in a way. Your Goddess wouldn't come and tell you to listen to some beat, she would just command you to stroke at a certain speed.
I did split up the pages some more, so I hope most of the not scrolling problems are fixed.
About the gif, it did trouble me a bit. I had begun making it before the showcase tease you posted, and it helped me to finalize it. I do think that the version I put wasn't the best. I made some modifications now, and I hope it flows even better. I was thinking of using more gifs during the tease, because I had found some great ones. My main problem was how to put the text that progresses as the gif plays. I didn't want to put it in notification as you showed, because the sentences were quite big. In the end I decided to leave just this one gif, to check how it will work, and maybe try experimenting more with gifs in following teases.
The truth is I am not sure when I'm going to make another tease, if I find an idea that intrigues me, it will happen. At the moment I'm still upgrading this one. In the new version I also added some more lines of script and
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My soul is a desert, but this doesn't mean it's empty. It just indicates there is a place for everything inside.
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