[Feedback thread] Bailey Jay's Tease & Denial

[poptart]

Hi everyone,

I've been a lurker around this site for years now and I finally had to write my own tease. I was hoping to get some feedback:

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=38407

Now it's not for everyone, as it does contain a lot of male pornography, but if you're interested... please let me know what you think!

I've been a lurker around this site for years now and I finally had to write my own tease.

[androgyme]

I like it so far, but I just had to come and let you know that it's not "transgendered", it's just transgender.

Edit: Just finished it. I thought it was good. I love how teasing and mean she is, love the verbal humiliation and the denial at the end, however I do think the dick sections went on a little too long without any imput from her. It got a little tedious, especially during that last one. I found myself wishing it would end a bit, wanting to get back to her and her commentary/instructions/teasing. But overall I did like it and I hope you continue to make teases like this. It was really well written as well, which is always a good thing. Well done.

[RyRy]

Great tease!

Only complaint is similar, that the domme's commentary was very good, and the long sections without it could have been broken up a bit more.

Thanks and really hope you make more!