Thank you once again for putting in a lot of time and effort into a great tease. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Sorry these thoughts are so late, but I can't always find the time, especially for such complex teases that support more than one play-through.
I did make more notes than those below, but after doing that many edges I've got a page of completely illegible scrawled writing that I can't make head nor tail of.
Non-spoiler thoughts:
Edge buttons
Some others have already noted this, but I'll mention it again anyway...
There were a few times where the dialogue ended with something like, "Edge for me." but the "Edge" button didn't appear until the message was clicked away; maybe for those occasions where the dialogue is shortish, the button could appear immediately without having to click away the message.
For examples:
[*] 'zpara21' - needs a click before the button shows
[*] 'zpara15' - button shown automatically after a short delay
[*] 'zpara16' - button is shown immediately
XO/Xo
Sometimes she's referred to as "XO" and sometimes as "Xo".
Possible spoiler thoughts:
- Spoiler: show
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It was nice to see Yue again, and I'm glad I got her name right!
Vestria
I liked the occasional interjection from Vestria, although I'd have liked her to be more involved, perhaps a bit like you did with Yue and Pearl. The second time through with XO/Carla could become a whole new challenge. I very much liked the "Lets just go ahead and make her think an hour has passed" interjection though, effectively allowing me to traverse a different path.
Page 'zpara19'
She says: "A woman masturbates to an orgasm, alone, uninstructed, for no purpose other than to fuel his own pleasure."
Should be "...*her* own pleasure."
Page 'zpara26'
She says: "I'm not loosing my cool honest"
Should be: "*losing* my cool honest"
The message also only appears for a very short amount of time, although I accept that might be intentional.
Page 'zpara27'
She says: "Now where did I put that damn script"
But blink and you'll miss the message as the page changes and the message is removed.
Page 'zpara28'
She says: "Aw, you don't think so? Maybe you haven't tried it before? Welll...Tough! You lose a bit of soul with every drop, and we can't afford to let it go to waste. So make sure you eat it all up!"
There's a blank message after this one.
Page 'zpara40'
Choose option: "Hold it for 2 minutes"
Select button: "On the Edge"
She says: "Well...enjoy that edge! It'll only feel like an eternity, more or less!"
I didn't spot that I had to click to continue and start the timer, and ended up holding an edge for about four minutes instead of two. I didn't know I could do that!
She says: "Stay determined!"
Only when you click again...
She says: "And stop stroking..."
Cumming
When there's a real opportunity to cum, I rather like the way that TeaseAI/House of Tease do it, and I think EOS could be good for this too. They effectively say "Get on the edge and be ready to hold it", then you type 'edge' and there's an automatic countdown (with occasional taunts), ending with "Cum for me now!" or something similar. For me, that's always the most explosive of endings, but of course that's my taste.