[Feedback] Alignment Stroker Adventure

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Mickey_Rourke_87
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[Feedback] Alignment Stroker Adventure

Post by Mickey_Rourke_87 »

Hello,

So I did, my first (actually second - the first is the state: work in progress :-) ) webtease.
I enjoy RPG and fantasy elements so, here there are.

I was missing new webteases of such kind, so decided to create one myself.
If you need to have something done, the best way is to do it yourself :-) .

I am really excited for it to be published, as it consumed few days to complete it.

Really looking forward to hear about your favourite characters.
I would also like to hear the characters that made you end your journey... :-D
I mean from the desinger's point of view it is actually quite handful.

Enough text from me, looking for feedback from you!

Great Adventure!
My teases:
Alignment Stroker Adventure
Alignment Stroker Adventure II: Celestial Intervention

If you like my tease, consider a coffee!
https://ko-fi.com/mickey_rourke_87#
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Re: [Feedback] Alignment Stroker Adventure

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Hi

So I am working on part II right now. I got first level completed.
The thing is about first part balancing:
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1st game played it I came to Merfolk Wizard (2/3) - I played Hard mode, Neutral alignment - level 2
2nd game I came to Queen of Nymphs - I played Standard then, Neutral alignment - level 3
3rd game I managed to get to First Chamion and ended there, Standard mode, Neutral alignment, level 4

So I actually never get to the end of a tease, so I would appriciate the feedback for the mechanics.
For example: the number of strokes after the edge - to narrow the crucial moments when the game gets unbalanced.
My teases:
Alignment Stroker Adventure
Alignment Stroker Adventure II: Celestial Intervention

If you like my tease, consider a coffee!
https://ko-fi.com/mickey_rourke_87#
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Re: [Feedback] Alignment Stroker Adventure

Post by pepez »

That was nice tease!
Nice pictures, nice amount strokes,. Maybe more edging.

I like how you did different rules, Good/neutral/evil, they could be more variable, and more different between them..

I like Little round game, like that you have to edge 3 times. So make more like that.. Different style.

And of course there would be more "cheating" Like you have to challenge two different "champion". first there is 1 champ.. after that there coming 2 girls, and they both give you separately instructions, but still counted as one champion.. Thats more hotter, more difficult and maybe more players have to quit. :)

But still 10/10
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Re: [Feedback] Alignment Stroker Adventure

Post by Mickey_Rourke_87 »

The second part is playable.
I need some feedback to finish it and polish.

Please write who want to help with testing so I can privately share it.
My teases:
Alignment Stroker Adventure
Alignment Stroker Adventure II: Celestial Intervention

If you like my tease, consider a coffee!
https://ko-fi.com/mickey_rourke_87#
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