Feedback- The true hero challenge
Feedback- The true hero challenge
How did you like my new tease?
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Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
really frustrated that it took like 15 minutes to complete .... or did i miss something
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Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
It's very good but short. We want a solid adventure.
Your teases are quality and you have a similar mind as I am.
Your teases are quality and you have a similar mind as I am.
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Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
Hi! im sure that you commited some mistake, because after the fight with the wolf and the blonde girl, the tease ends. If that is the end, its a very short tease, if not, im sure it will be a very good tease ;) Thanks for make this kind of adventurous teases.
Sorry if I have some grammar mistake, english isnt my first language.
Sorry if I have some grammar mistake, english isnt my first language.
Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
Thank you a lot you were right! No wonder it has so low rating. I can promise that the story is much, much longer. I fixed it but not sure how long it takes before it update the tease.Petrelli wrote: ↑Mon Oct 22, 2018 8:04 pm Hi! im sure that you commited some mistake, because after the fight with the wolf and the blonde girl, the tease ends. If that is the end, its a very short tease, if not, im sure it will be a very good tease ;) Thanks for make this kind of adventurous teases.
Sorry if I have some grammar mistake, english isnt my first language.
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Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
Hi there, I just ran through this tease. Got through the fight with the wolf, no problem, got back home, etc. But then on the page where someone says "You are not going anywhere!!!" the continue button doesn't seem to be working. Other than that, great job so far!
Four Floors, Four Doors (Normal)
Floor: 1 | Points: 0 | Pool Points: 62 (2600) | Doors Opened: 3 | Gambles: 4
Last Ruin: 11/16 | Last Cum: 11/13 | Edges So Far: 211
Floor: 1 | Points: 0 | Pool Points: 62 (2600) | Doors Opened: 3 | Gambles: 4
Last Ruin: 11/16 | Last Cum: 11/13 | Edges So Far: 211
Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
There are so many error after that as well almost every fight has som bug and there are tons of unreachable and undefined pages :/rabbithole wrote: ↑Mon Oct 22, 2018 9:50 pm Hi there, I just ran through this tease. Got through the fight with the wolf, no problem, got back home, etc. But then on the page where someone says "You are not going anywhere!!!" the continue button doesn't seem to be working. Other than that, great job so far!
But it would be great, if we could play it through.
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Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
Despite the bugs I gave 4 points. I know to appreciate a good idea and details such as music, etc.
Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
Alright, i was too much focused on the storyline that i forgot the check the fights. I will take the tease away until i fix the problems. Consider this as demo gameplay It should be matters of day or two. I hope i will give you the adventure you are looking for!
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Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
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Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
Hey, first of all I want to say great work on this tease. I can tell that there was a lot of thought put into all the elements of the "adventure game." My only suggestion would be to make better use of the code system. As far as I can tell, there is currently only one code that can be used. Why not give the player a new code whenever they reach a turning point in the story? That way we could exit the tease at any point and come back to where we left off.
Also, I've encountered a few stubborn bugs. There may very well be more, but here's what I've found so far:
Also, I've encountered a few stubborn bugs. There may very well be more, but here's what I've found so far:
- The first button on page152 has no target; page150 would be a suitable one.
- The last button on page178 also has no target; it should be a "hit."
- kpage203 redirects to the start, instead of to page300 as expected.
- None of the buttons on page369 have targets. This means that if you block all attacks from the gladiator, and miss all your attacks, the game effectively soft-locks and you cannot advance.
Four Floors, Four Doors (Normal)
Floor: 1 | Points: 0 | Pool Points: 62 (2600) | Doors Opened: 3 | Gambles: 4
Last Ruin: 11/16 | Last Cum: 11/13 | Edges So Far: 211
Floor: 1 | Points: 0 | Pool Points: 62 (2600) | Doors Opened: 3 | Gambles: 4
Last Ruin: 11/16 | Last Cum: 11/13 | Edges So Far: 211
Re: Feedback- The true hero challenge
Thanks for your feedback. It helps a lot.rabbithole wrote: ↑Fri Oct 26, 2018 6:36 am Hey, first of all I want to say great work on this tease. I can tell that there was a lot of thought put into all the elements of the "adventure game." My only suggestion would be to make better use of the code system. As far as I can tell, there is currently only one code that can be used. Why not give the player a new code whenever they reach a turning point in the story? That way we could exit the tease at any point and come back to where we left off.
Also, I've encountered a few stubborn bugs. There may very well be more, but here's what I've found so far:As a side note, why is it that you can still deal a killing blow even when you have 0 endurance left? This seems counterintuitive to me. At first I thought it was a bug, but given that this is consistently true, I realize now it was probably your intention.
- The first button on page152 has no target; page150 would be a suitable one.
- The last button on page178 also has no target; it should be a "hit."
- kpage203 redirects to the start, instead of to page300 as expected.
- None of the buttons on page369 have targets. This means that if you block all attacks from the gladiator, and miss all your attacks, the game effectively soft-locks and you cannot advance.
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