Bokki Tease Club - feedback thread

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You are just great! Hours and hours of fun, nobody tells stories like you do.

Btw: When my girlfriend and I watched the new Black Mirror, I had to tell her that a certain tease author already did this. If I could, I would give you the budget of Black Mirror - imagine how awesome that would be.
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Ryuteka wrote: Tue Dec 11, 2018 10:15 pm that was a great tease! really well done.
i would like to play more of it, and maybe with more tasks!
Must have missed your comment before, thanks! Bokki is firmly closed for now, but there is something coming soon :)
dousque wrote: Fri Jan 25, 2019 2:02 pm You are just great! Hours and hours of fun, nobody tells stories like you do.

Btw: When my girlfriend and I watched the new Black Mirror, I had to tell her that a certain tease author already did this. If I could, I would give you the budget of Black Mirror - imagine how awesome that would be.
Thanks, I try, although I definately feel I put too much emphasis as opposed to teasing at times...

And you mean Bandersnatch? Care to elaborate? This came out before Bandersnatch ofc, but was inspired by Doki Doki Literature Club :-) I can see a few similarities now that you point it out though...

And yeah, get Netflix to hire me, make some interactive porn with moving models...sign me up :lol:
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Seems an amazing tease so far.

I tend to give teases a little "test run" to see if they look interesting. I'll play a little of the teases and if the stuff seems interesting, I'll return to it when I have the opportunity and I'm in the mood. All I can say is, I'm wowed. It feels like I'm actually playing a visual novel, and I'm invested. Hell, it's giving me feels. I reached up till the chastity introduction and while I want to lock myself up, I'm conflicted cuz I don't want to make Hailey sad. And really that's a huge compliment, although I don't typically want to have the feels when I play teases :P

I'll post more as I progress when I can
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forbiddendesire wrote: Sun Jan 27, 2019 4:28 am Seems an amazing tease so far.

I tend to give teases a little "test run" to see if they look interesting. I'll play a little of the teases and if the stuff seems interesting, I'll return to it when I have the opportunity and I'm in the mood. All I can say is, I'm wowed. It feels like I'm actually playing a visual novel, and I'm invested. Hell, it's giving me feels. I reached up till the chastity introduction and while I want to lock myself up, I'm conflicted cuz I don't want to make Hailey sad. And really that's a huge compliment, although I don't typically want to have the feels when I play teases :P

I'll post more as I progress when I can
I hope you enjoy it :) Especially for this one the visual novel feel is quite apt and I'm happy to hear it. And yeah...most of my teases I at least make an attempt to incorporate the feels in one way or another, so see how this one makes you feel then judge if its worth looking at the rest I suppose! :innocent:
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Hey uh, just letting you know that the colours stopped working.
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Yea you're right, all text in the tease is now just white
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killer1243 wrote: Mon Jan 28, 2019 2:52 pm Hey uh, just letting you know that the colours stopped working.
Thanks for the spot, made a post but forgot to thank you ;)

Sera has fixed it though! Just need to reload the viewer if you viewed the white text. I'll leave the note in black about the glitch in, in case anyone does stumble upon it :)
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I know this is super late (I've been a long-time lurker and just finally decided to get an invite code for an account) but I just wanted to say that I love your teases, Shattered. You're one of the few authors who develops amazing and creative storylines that help immerse the user in the tease. Thank you so much for your hard work and for sharing with the community!
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chual99 wrote: Thu Jan 31, 2019 6:49 pm I know this is super late (I've been a long-time lurker and just finally decided to get an invite code for an account) but I just wanted to say that I love your teases, Shattered. You're one of the few authors who develops amazing and creative storylines that help immerse the user in the tease. Thank you so much for your hard work and for sharing with the community!
And I'll say again, no such thing as late - I very much like to see people still enjoying my stuff and commenting on it when its passed the front page. I enjoy a welcome reception to a release but hearing things every now and then is nice.

Thanks! Hopefully my next tease will live up to it.
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Shattered wrote: Thu Jan 31, 2019 8:49 pm Thanks! Hopefully my next tease will live up to it.
Any estimates when your next tease will be up? *impatient* :-P
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chual99 wrote: Fri Feb 01, 2019 3:53 am
Shattered wrote: Thu Jan 31, 2019 8:49 pm Thanks! Hopefully my next tease will live up to it.
Any estimates when your next tease will be up? *impatient* :-P
90% chance its this month.
50% chance its within the next week
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I'm only after day two but I have to ask...
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Is this somehow loosely based or inspired by the doki doki literature club? I see some similarities...
I will however not read the answer to the question until I have seen the end, since that might be a major spoiler. Somehow, I am a bit afraid since that thought crossed my mind :lol:
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onlytropics wrote: Mon Feb 18, 2019 3:40 pm I'm only after day two but I have to ask...
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Is this somehow loosely based or inspired by the doki doki literature club? I see some similarities...
I will however not read the answer to the question until I have seen the end, since that might be a major spoiler. Somehow, I am a bit afraid since that thought crossed my mind :lol:
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More than a little :) Started off as a lot more, but I think I diverged a decent amount although of course some of the main themes stick around. Starting out in my mind Fran was Monica, Hailey was Sayori, Xia was Natsuki and Caprice was Yue, but as soon as I actually put my personas for them into motion that ended pretty quickly...
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Shattered wrote: Mon Feb 18, 2019 6:05 pm
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More than a little :) Started off as a lot more, but I think I diverged a decent amount although of course some of the main themes stick around. Starting out in my mind Fran was Monica, Hailey was Sayori, Xia was Natsuki and Caprice was Yue, but as soon as I actually put my personas for them into motion that ended pretty quickly...
I catched that pretty early in the game I think. It was just after day two when I got a bit angry at the tease for...
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...only allowing me to see two girls on the weekend. I mean, it is two hole days, I can visit more than two people!
And somehow I remembered I have been confused/angry about the same thing before... I couldn't pin it down for hours. I kept asking myself if I played the tease before and have somehow forgotten? Then finally 18 hours later I remembered it was the same way in the literature club. And at that moment I saw more similarities, like the girls fighting, one kept asking crazy questions...

After day 5 (I believe?) - monday evening - it was crystal clear the whole story was blatantly copied :lol:

Oh btw I am mad at you for deleting the total hotness Caprice is first, not that evil bitch Xia :-P
Nice work, I love to read an interesting story. The story for me is the difference between a 5-star and a 3-star rating. :-)
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onlytropics wrote: Tue Feb 26, 2019 6:45 pm
Shattered wrote: Mon Feb 18, 2019 6:05 pm
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More than a little :) Started off as a lot more, but I think I diverged a decent amount although of course some of the main themes stick around. Starting out in my mind Fran was Monica, Hailey was Sayori, Xia was Natsuki and Caprice was Yue, but as soon as I actually put my personas for them into motion that ended pretty quickly...
I catched that pretty early in the game I think. It was just after day two when I got a bit angry at the tease for...
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...only allowing me to see two girls on the weekend. I mean, it is two hole days, I can visit more than two people!
And somehow I remembered I have been confused/angry about the same thing before... I couldn't pin it down for hours. I kept asking myself if I played the tease before and have somehow forgotten? Then finally 18 hours later I remembered it was the same way in the literature club. And at that moment I saw more similarities, like the girls fighting, one kept asking crazy questions...

After day 5 (I believe?) - monday evening - it was crystal clear the whole story was blatantly copied :lol:

Oh btw I am mad at you for deleting the total hotness Caprice is first, not that evil bitch Xia :-P
Nice work, I love to read an interesting story. The story for me is the difference between a 5-star and a 3-star rating. :-)
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Y'know, I'm not entirely sure that was even an intentional link! I remember wanting to do something like that where you have to not see someone for a while, but I don't know that Doki made me do that...but it might have. Odd coincidence if not though :)
And hey, I only copied like, 90, maybe 95% of the story! :P I felt by the end it was more heavily inspired than the copy it had started out as though. Multiple endings, for one!
And Xia takes offense at that 8-)
Glad you enjoyed it though, it was an interesting one to make for sure
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