Hi everyone, i have just made a new tease, please check it out and tell me what you think. If there is any problems with it just tell me and i will fix them.
Here's the link. https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=38542
Thanks guys.
The Queen's tease
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The Queen's tease
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Re: The Queen's tease
I logged in to my account to rate this, as a generic "use sounding/anal play if you want" doesn't count as actual sounding or anal play imo but was unable to rate it. It just said "Thanks for rating" which is impossible since it just came out and I literally just logged in.
So since I can't rate it: if you don't have ACTUAL instructions for categories, please do not include them in your tags for a tease.
Additionally, from what I saw from the tease, it involved a lot of "stroke 'this many' of times" which is akin to a non-flash tease. From the few minutes I played it, it did not utilize its tags and was more/less a non-flash tease.
So since I can't rate it: if you don't have ACTUAL instructions for categories, please do not include them in your tags for a tease.
Additionally, from what I saw from the tease, it involved a lot of "stroke 'this many' of times" which is akin to a non-flash tease. From the few minutes I played it, it did not utilize its tags and was more/less a non-flash tease.
Re: The Queen's tease
First I do not agree with nik8813, this tease uses lost of flash tease provided feature. Like multi select, I do not tested all the routes, but there were pages that implicated that your choice has an effect at least to the next page. Or do x stroke under y sec or metronome. Also there is at lease one instruction for anal play but it's optional and I think this is a plus, mandatory anal play is a big no from me.
I loved the base setup of the tease, these type of teases are my favorites, so this could have been really good, but..
And there is a big but. After the setup, the plot is just none existent and the reactions of the characters are really extreme without telling the "player", why. If this is not your first tease you probably get the idea, but I think this is not the right way to handle things. I do not really liked how you made this "extremely long" and it pretty much ruined the tease for me.
(But this is more of my personal preference, so I refrained myself from down voting it.)
So I didn't get to the end, but I played I think a fair bit (and probably there is more to it, so it could be extremely long without the annoying thing under the spoiler).
Under the spoiler there are my reasons, why I couldn't like this tease.
I hope you will get some more feedback, you can improve on that and we can see something new from you in the future.
I loved the base setup of the tease, these type of teases are my favorites, so this could have been really good, but..
And there is a big but. After the setup, the plot is just none existent and the reactions of the characters are really extreme without telling the "player", why. If this is not your first tease you probably get the idea, but I think this is not the right way to handle things. I do not really liked how you made this "extremely long" and it pretty much ruined the tease for me.
(But this is more of my personal preference, so I refrained myself from down voting it.)
So I didn't get to the end, but I played I think a fair bit (and probably there is more to it, so it could be extremely long without the annoying thing under the spoiler).
Under the spoiler there are my reasons, why I couldn't like this tease.
- Spoiler: show
I hope you will get some more feedback, you can improve on that and we can see something new from you in the future.
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Re: The Queen's tease
I have removed the urethral sounding tag. But there are instructions in the later stages for anal. Thanks for the feedback.nik8813 wrote: ↑Mon Oct 01, 2018 6:49 am I logged in to my account to rate this, as a generic "use sounding/anal play if you want" doesn't count as actual sounding or anal play imo but was unable to rate it. It just said "Thanks for rating" which is impossible since it just came out and I literally just logged in.
So since I can't rate it: if you don't have ACTUAL instructions for categories, please do not include them in your tags for a tease.
Additionally, from what I saw from the tease, it involved a lot of "stroke 'this many' of times" which is akin to a non-flash tease. From the few minutes I played it, it did not utilize its tags and was more/less a non-flash tease.
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Re: The Queen's tease
Firstly thank you so much for the feedback, this is exactly what i needed. And i completely agree with you the story is non existent. And the 3,000, 2,000 then 1,000 strokes. I never looked at it that way but now i see. I will be changing the tease and upgrading it (making it easier). I will shorten some of the faster metronomes as well. Same with holding the edge.Ghingis wrote: ↑Mon Oct 01, 2018 10:00 am First I do not agree with nik8813, this tease uses lost of flash tease provided feature. Like multi select, I do not tested all the routes, but there were pages that implicated that your choice has an effect at least to the next page. Or do x stroke under y sec or metronome. Also there is at lease one instruction for anal play but it's optional and I think this is a plus, mandatory anal play is a big no from me.
I loved the base setup of the tease, these type of teases are my favorites, so this could have been really good, but..
And there is a big but. After the setup, the plot is just none existent and the reactions of the characters are really extreme without telling the "player", why. If this is not your first tease you probably get the idea, but I think this is not the right way to handle things. I do not really liked how you made this "extremely long" and it pretty much ruined the tease for me.
(But this is more of my personal preference, so I refrained myself from down voting it.)
So I didn't get to the end, but I played I think a fair bit (and probably there is more to it, so it could be extremely long without the annoying thing under the spoiler).
Under the spoiler there are my reasons, why I couldn't like this tease.I appreciate your work and time that you put into it, but it has some serious flaws in my eyes.
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I hope you will get some more feedback, you can improve on that and we can see something new from you in the future.
But overall thanks so much for the time and effort to write the review, i really appreciate it.
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Re: The Queen's tease
Re-worked the tease. Made it much easier and gave it a story. Please let me know what you think!
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