[Feedback] EdgeQuiz 2

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[Feedback] EdgeQuiz 2

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Hey everyone,

Link to tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=37887

I need some feedback of you guys/girls so I can make better teases is in the future.
Could you write me:
- if you liked it (what you liked most/ least)
- if you found some errors
- if it was too hard or too easy
- which was your first ending
- what was your favorite model
- and what should be the "topic" of the next episode

You can write it directly under this post or write me a pm.
Thanks for your support and enjoy the second episode of EdgeQuiz. :-D

Cheers
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Re: [Feedback] EdgeQuiz 2

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So I will now start my journey and pm you later I have a few questions about an idea

For everyone else If you want to play it offline in guideme or teaseme and the downloader doesn't download the audiofiles for the metronome
As attachmend a chnaged xml for teasme or guidme so no audio files are needed
updated xml 3 metronomes were missing for the author between solar12 and 20
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Re: [Feedback] EdgeQuiz 2

Post by ktom0099 »

Awesome tease!

Took 3 tries to get to an ending at 90%.

Favorite quizmistress was celeste! So far anyway.....plan to try the different endings and also go for different levels of scores to see what else you have in store 🙂

Thanks for all the hard work!
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Well that was quite something! :w00t: The choice of quizmistresses was really great, and I think the way you are increasing difficulty is very good. The 'telling' or 'story writing' lacks a bit compared to the first part, but is still good. You did pay a lot of attention to detail, as for example to make sure the player always knows when an edge is leading into 'holding the edge'. I also like that you at least give the player a chance to figure out which mistress will reward what. Great work, can't wait to see your next!
For me this quiz is a solid 4.7 (compared to part 1, which was 5).

For the next part, the first thing that came to my mind was redheads. Of course you could also go for 'big breasts' or 'silicone', but that would be too easy (since you just did 'small tits'). I would personally love to see 'thigh gap', don't know if that is doable (but please please please).

Now for some (hopefully helpful) critics:
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For me, that quiz was too long. Maybe I'm just not used to it, not experienced enough, dunno. Also, I hated Riley (well the personality you gave her). So just removing Riley from the game would make it more 'replayable' for me. Totally subjective, of course.
Some of the questions seemed a bit unfair (at least on the first playthrough), which is generally fine, since it encourages playing again. I'm not talking about knowing stuff, but for example Celeste's question if I actually want to see her. Of course I wanted to, she is hot! Also I didn't know Riley's last name, I don't know anything about porn actresses. Well, that somehow also counts to knowledge so that's ok. On the other hand, I finished with 55 points, which means I was just one bad question away from a 'better ending'. It felt a bit strange finishing the knowledge-questions-round with nearly perfect score but loosing so much in the 'final round'.

BUGS:
There was one page that was missing the metronome, it was one of Riley's going once every three seconds in the final round (before reward rounds).
There is also a possible bug/problem in the first race with Piper. It was a really fast timer (20 seconds?) with 75 strokes. I failed (and accepted the minus points) although I did it. The problem is, I have to read quickly what to do, have a glimpse at the timer, do as instructed, then pick my mouse and click on the button. On the first playthrough, I managed to do the strokes but couldn't click on the button in time. The second time I went for 60 strokes and enough time to click. I guess that is an inherent problem with those races. Somehow you did that better in the first quiz while still being really difficult (I remember I failed that twice, partly because I focused on the girl too much). Maybe go for double the time with double the strokes, that's still a challenge, but easier to take the time to grab the mouse.
I will totally play it again, just need some time to recover... ;-)
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Re: [Feedback] EdgeQuiz 2

Post by anonymister »

I love the small tit models !

Suggestions

1) More chest pics, fewer crotch close-ups....It is a small tit tease, right ?
2) Such a long tease, would be great to be able to stop part way, and pick up later. Such as a button to start at each woman ?

I rarely get enough free time to go start to finish on long teases.

Otherwise, great tease, and would love more small tit teases. Plenty of beautiful models to choose from.
I prefer these flash teases too.
Non flash bore me for some reason.
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Re: [Feedback] EdgeQuiz 2

Post by lez »

I loved this tease. Fantastically well done, I really appreciate all the hard work and effort.

I liked how the mistresses felt like they had individualized personalities, and that they were mostly positive and upbeat rather than bitchy humiliation types featured in other teases.
anonymister wrote: Thu Sep 20, 2018 4:27 pm 1) More chest pics, fewer crotch close-ups....It is a small tit tease, right ?

Counterpoint from my own personal taste, I felt like those shots flowed reasonably well. It felt like the mistress was building me up to a fever pitch, then showing off her pussy as a 'bet you'd love to be in here' type tease.


Overall, I found the tease difficult but fair and acheivable. By the time I got to the end, I felt like I'd really accomplished something.
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My first ending was the 30-60 point range ruined orgasm with Piper. I feel like the actual "ruined orgasm" part of this could be improved in future teases. To me, ruining an orgasm is really about giving over control in a very firm 'she controls every motion I take' kind of way. When the tease simply says 'now ruin your orgasm!', it feels like something is lacking there. Especially since Piper was all about controling with strict time limits and races. Maybe it could have been something like:
-- Now get super close. Closer! Get so close that you can barely stroke without sliding over.
-- Now get even closer. I want you so hot that you can cum at a single moment's notice
-- NOW GIVE ME THREE SECONDS OF HARD FAST FIRM STROKES!
-- Hands off! Feel yourself tip over and ruin that orgasm.
I'd cast a vote for next tease's topic as models from different ethnicities. Your two teases so far have featured all winner models in my eyes, so I'm sure whatever you choose will be great. I hope your creative juices are still flowing, thanks a lot for sharing this with us!
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