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New Tease - Simple Edging Challenge

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Hi all, this is my first ever challenge. I was just hoping to get some feedback on it.

The link is - https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=38347

All spelling mistakes fixed!

Thanks guys! :wave: :wave:
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Played it yesterday, it looked pretty good. But it is unfinished isn't it? I got through an intruduction of the 4 horsewomen and as soon as it started with the first of them the tease ended apruptly. There were 2 options available, both of them didn't continue the tease.
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Sexless Dummy wrote: Wed Aug 22, 2018 7:12 pm Played it yesterday, it looked pretty good. But it is unfinished isn't it? I got through an intruduction of the 4 horsewomen and as soon as it started with the first of them the tease ended apruptly. There were 2 options available, both of them didn't continue the tease.
hi, no it is fully done. I just have to iron out some errors. Is it possible to get a screen shot of the problem page? As i have tried it but can't find any problems with it. cheers!
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Re: New Tease - Simple Edging Challenge

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Two things I have found,
1) Page 26 delay points to nowhere
2) Page 62 choice 1-14 points to nowhere, should it point to page 63?

Maybe these have already been fixed?
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slavejack wrote: Thu Aug 23, 2018 10:29 am Two things I have found,
1) Page 26 delay points to nowhere
2) Page 62 choice 1-14 points to nowhere, should it point to page 63?

Maybe these have already been fixed?
Page 26, Couldn't find a problem with it. Page 62 points 1 - 14 fixed. Was meant to point to page 63, wrote the wrong thing in :lol:

Any other problem pages just let me know please. Appreciate you helping out! :-D
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CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Thu Aug 23, 2018 4:48 pm
Page 26, Couldn't find a problem with it. Page 62 points 1 - 14 fixed. Was meant to point to page 63, wrote the wrong thing in :lol:

Any other problem pages just let me know please. Appreciate you helping out! :-D
The 5 minute timer on page 26 has no target, best I could tell.
Thanks for a fun tease!
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slavejack wrote: Fri Aug 24, 2018 11:02 am
CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Thu Aug 23, 2018 4:48 pm
Page 26, Couldn't find a problem with it. Page 62 points 1 - 14 fixed. Was meant to point to page 63, wrote the wrong thing in :lol:

Any other problem pages just let me know please. Appreciate you helping out! :-D
The 5 minute timer on page 26 has no target, best I could tell.
Thanks for a fun tease!
FIXED, thanks bud and glad you enjoyed the tease. :-D :-D
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CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Wed Aug 22, 2018 9:57 pm
Sexless Dummy wrote: Wed Aug 22, 2018 7:12 pm Played it yesterday, it looked pretty good. But it is unfinished isn't it? I got through an intruduction of the 4 horsewomen and as soon as it started with the first of them the tease ended apruptly. There were 2 options available, both of them didn't continue the tease.
hi, no it is fully done. I just have to iron out some errors. Is it possible to get a screen shot of the problem page? As i have tried it but can't find any problems with it. cheers!
I tried again and got to finish it this time. I will tell you what i did the last time as i got the aprupt end. When i got to the first horsewoman after the intruduction, she asks if she should go easy on you with yes or no as possible answers. I choosed no and it took me back to a few pages. I thought to myself that this was your intended Hard-mode which just meant doing the sequence again before i was back on the page with the same question: easy or not...i choosed easy this time of course and right after that i got sent to a page thanking me for playing the tease. Now at my second playthrough i choosed the easy part right away and it continued normaly to the end without any issues.
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Sexless Dummy wrote: Fri Aug 24, 2018 10:00 pm
CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Wed Aug 22, 2018 9:57 pm
Sexless Dummy wrote: Wed Aug 22, 2018 7:12 pm Played it yesterday, it looked pretty good. But it is unfinished isn't it? I got through an intruduction of the 4 horsewomen and as soon as it started with the first of them the tease ended apruptly. There were 2 options available, both of them didn't continue the tease.
hi, no it is fully done. I just have to iron out some errors. Is it possible to get a screen shot of the problem page? As i have tried it but can't find any problems with it. cheers!
I tried again and got to finish it this time. I will tell you what i did the last time as i got the aprupt end. When i got to the first horsewoman after the intruduction, she asks if she should go easy on you with yes or no as possible answers. I choosed no and it took me back to a few pages. I thought to myself that this was your intended Hard-mode which just meant doing the sequence again before i was back on the page with the same question: easy or not...i choosed easy this time of course and right after that i got sent to a page thanking me for playing the tease. Now at my second playthrough i choosed the easy part right away and it continued normaly to the end without any issues.
Yeah i see where you're coming from, When i get back from work i will try to make a hard mode for it. But i am glad the easy path worked for you.
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Hard mode added now for one of the horsewomen. let me know if there are any problems with it please guys, have fun!
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CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Tue Aug 21, 2018 9:43 am Hi all, this is my first ever challenge.
Just noted to small issues: on page 26 you refer to page27## with two #. This causes a parse error in my html5 viewer, it would be appreciated if you could fix that.

Further page98 is unreachable, that's possibly a bug.
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kerkersklave wrote: Thu Aug 30, 2018 6:27 pm
CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Tue Aug 21, 2018 9:43 am Hi all, this is my first ever challenge.
Just noted to small issues: on page 26 you refer to page27## with two #. This causes a parse error in my html5 viewer, it would be appreciated if you could fix that.

Further page98 is unreachable, that's possibly a bug.
FIXED!. Couldn't find a problem with page 26 and the two hashtags. Must have already fixed them or i missed them. And you can now reach page 98! Thanks bud.
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CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Fri Aug 31, 2018 6:54 pm Couldn't find a problem with page 26 and the two hashtags. Must have already fixed them or i missed them. And you can now reach page 98! Thanks bud. :-D
It is still there:

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page26#page(text:'<TEXTFORMAT LEADING="2"><P ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT FACE="FontSans" SIZE="18" COLOR="#FFFFFF" LETTERSPACING="0" KERNING="0">Put the dildo all the way into your ass and leave it there until i say take it out. Start stroking slowly 200 times. Do it before the time runs out.</FONT></P></TEXTFORMAT>',media:pic(id:"pic5.jpg"),action:vert(e0:yn(yes:page27#,no:start#),e1:delay(time:5min,target:page27##)))
Just look at the end of the line.
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kerkersklave wrote: Fri Aug 31, 2018 7:30 pm
CockHeroChampion12 wrote: Fri Aug 31, 2018 6:54 pm Couldn't find a problem with page 26 and the two hashtags. Must have already fixed them or i missed them. And you can now reach page 98! Thanks bud. :-D
It is still there:

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page26#page(text:'<TEXTFORMAT LEADING="2"><P ALIGN="CENTER"><FONT FACE="FontSans" SIZE="18" COLOR="#FFFFFF" LETTERSPACING="0" KERNING="0">Put the dildo all the way into your ass and leave it there until i say take it out. Start stroking slowly 200 times. Do it before the time runs out.</FONT></P></TEXTFORMAT>',media:pic(id:"pic5.jpg"),action:vert(e0:yn(yes:page27#,no:start#),e1:delay(time:5min,target:page27##)))
Just look at the end of the line.
Sorted, i was thinking it was the answers not the timer haha! :lol:
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