Tease Feedback : Your brain is a machine

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Tease Feedback : Your brain is a machine

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Hi, SpiritualMigrant here.
Here is the link to my brand new tease : https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=37806

This is not an usual tease. Please read all instructions carefully.
If you leave feedback here, make sure you use the spoiler option !

DON'T READ THIS IF YOU DIDN'T PLAY THE TEASE
Like, really. Leave now and play it
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So yeah I was totally tired, I had just played Doki Doki Literature Club and in that mood to write some weird stuff, what's more I'm a bit worried about the new HTML feature coming, I don't want to start my big project on Nyx right now for this season. So here is some short but intense stuff !
I hope you enjoy the tease. Could definitely do a second episode if people like it
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Post by hosenguy »

I played this through and found the concept quite intriguing. (The tease could have been edited by someone with better language skill, but this is just a detail.)
The concept is so basic to standard fare on the internet that it is effective.

I will be watching to see how you manage the final implementation!
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Post by Takenaga »

Interesting tease, something new. I liked it.

Thank you for your effort! Keep them coming...
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It really gave me a emotional lift it was something new good work

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Thanks for feedback !
Hosenguy, what are the sentences that don't look good ? Please let me know, I'd be glad to change them.
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I loved it. It gave me a philosophical hard-on. I really like the "water in a bottle" metaphor. The real horror of it was you breaking patterns and then calling attention to that; maybe it was just me, but that was a little unsettling. I don't have any complaints or anything.
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Man you gave yourself the perfect chance to use some sexy fanart of Manga Chitoge (18 in the Nisekoi manga) And you didn't! At least blonde is close enough to make me think of it...

I like that you justified the changing of model 'in-world' at least. The lack of variety or proper context does generally turn me off hentai content.
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Thanks for feedback !
I don't know Chitoge. Definitely going to check.
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Post by NexusClown »

I loved this tease.
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I loved the whole slave to your lust aspect to it and being punished for looking for the gorilla :-P .
I hope you make more like this, especially a HTML5 tease.
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Slight anime spoilers (Decent anime if you like romance where nothing happens anyway)
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One character constantly taunts her as being a gorilla
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Loved the pictures, awesome text, something fresh and cool, each slide kept me on edge :lol:
Well done man.
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This tease captured the essence of Domination! This is the kind of psychological play that I have been trying and expecting. Thank you for this:D
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I really loved this tease!! Hoping for a follow up soon. I loved everything about it.
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