FB: The Blondes' Anal Trials (B.A.T.)

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Hello everyone,

Even though I've been on Milovana a while and have played through many teases myself, The B.A.T. is my first tease and I would love to hear any feedback! So please leave feedback for both The B.A.T. and B.A.T. Part 2 in this thread.

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-Batman
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I realize that there are a lot of very specific toys called for in the tease. I wrote it based on my own toys and, while improvising can still be fun, it is much more fun with the specified toys. So if you are looking to buy a new toy, this can be your excuse! Here are some of the more specific toys that the tease is based off of:

For the textured toy:
Master Series Obsession 11 Ribbed 7" Butt Plug (standard option)
Master Cock Mighty Screw Dildo 9.5 inch (MUCH larger, but more fun option)

For the plug:
Doc Johnson Anal Plug Large

For the largest dildo:
California Exotics The Czar Dildo (My Favorite Dildo/Highly Recommend)
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Amazing!!
HD Version for Guide Me, Please :-)
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Very well written and nicely paced. I haven't managed to complete it yet (had to give up at the interns because it became painful), but I will try again with a bit smaller toys soon :innocent:
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Awesome tease what a way to spend 3 hours. :w00t:
I love the way that the humiliation side is very minimal and it was possible to skip parts that I was not interested in trying. :no:
The girls were perfectly chosen and I could almost hear them saying the written text as the picture match was that good.
My favourite section was the vibration part but I couldn't have done it without all the prep work done by the previous girls.
I was wondering how you can follow that. maybe a training school or something similar.
The merging of the 2 parts was quite novel but a bit fiddly to setup and might not look so good on a laptop screen.
This has become my favourite tease and I even signed up to milovana just to let you know how great It is.
Are you working on another?
I hope so :-)
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Absolutely fantastic, loved every minute of it! I need more!
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by far the best webtease here. please make more I played it at least 20 times and I still enjoy it.

Such a gem.
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Marth85 wrote: Fri Dec 14, 2018 11:27 pm by far the best webtease here. please make more I played it at least 20 times and I still enjoy it.

Such a gem.
Thanks Marth85! :-D

I'm actually writing another anal only tease now! I got really frustrated with the Nyx editor and gave up on writing a few months ago :weep: , but I'm really excited about this new tease after working on it for about a week now ;-) .

Its been interesting because, even though I'm the one who wrote it haha, I also really enjoy playing through my BAT tease,
and there is some dialogue in the BAT that I'm really fond of because it still turns me on even though it's my own tease. So I'm having this dilemma where I want to reuse dialogue from the BAT in my new tease.
An example of one that I really like would be the line, "You are here to be fucked entirely and fully, and we are here to make sure that that happens."
Like, I just think some of the one liners like that are so awesome that its pretty much impossible for me to come up with better dialogue... :lol:

So I guess my point is:
Do you think its OK to reuse a few lines of dialogue in a new tease? Are some lines so awesome that they should be used again? Or would seeing a line you've already seen take away from the tease?

Anyone's thoughts would be appreciated!

Thanks,

Batman
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Batman314 wrote: Sat Dec 15, 2018 6:23 am
Marth85 wrote: Fri Dec 14, 2018 11:27 pm by far the best webtease here. please make more I played it at least 20 times and I still enjoy it.

Such a gem.
Do you think its OK to reuse a few lines of dialogue in a new tease? Are some lines so awesome that they should be used again? Or would seeing a line you've already seen take away from the tease?

Anyone's thoughts would be appreciated!

Thanks,

Batman
I think re-using a couple of strong one liners like the one you mentioned is a good thing, as it can make it feel familiar/part of a series.

However, it shouldn't be overdone.
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Thanks for the feedback Unnamed_007!

Now that I've gotten past the intro section dialogue, I am finding it easier to write unique dialogue. The introductory part is really the only section where I am repeating a lot of old stuff, which I think is fine.

-Batman
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Cant wait for your new tease. You and Soddasol have made my favorite anal teases thus far. :love:
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This is probably the best anal tease on milovana,The only thing i would add is changing positions by mistress choice and maybe some cum play.
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This is a masterpiece, no doubt about that.
I can't wait for a new tease like this and to know all the toys you used in this tease and that the other users used to play it.
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