Just a normal school

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Just a normal school

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Please tell me your opinion on my new flash-tease. I hope everything is working :)
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I like it. Not sure why the rating is so low right off the bat, as you have a beat meter going in the first couple of slides. I do find the story progression to be on the slow side. It is long enough that being able to jump to a part would be good. I'm looking forward to running it to the end soon (ran out of time on my initial walk thru)
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tckt78 wrote: Fri Feb 16, 2018 1:19 am I like it. Not sure why the rating is so low right off the bat, as you have a beat meter going in the first couple of slides. I do find the story progression to be on the slow side. It is long enough that being able to jump to a part would be good. I'm looking forward to running it to the end soon (ran out of time on my initial walk thru)
I'm glad you liked it. Not sure why the rating is so low either. That's why i need to find out what ppl didn't like about it.
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I like it too, very good play!
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Re: Just a normal school

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hey, i haven't tried it yet but i downloaded it through teaseme and there appears to be a bug with page431 not existing. in the downloaded xml file, the code for page431 is contained within the code for page430 so i could restore it. it might still work in the flash viewer, i have no idea
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Re: Just a normal school

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it says part two... can you link part one since Milovana no longer lets us just click your name to get all the teases you made. (fix that)
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Re: Just a normal school

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scarlett wrote: Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:30 pm it says part two... can you link part one since Milovana no longer lets us just click your name to get all the teases you made. (fix that)
You mean this one https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=36472 ?
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Re: Just a normal school

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lestrian wrote: Fri Feb 16, 2018 2:35 pm hey, i haven't tried it yet but i downloaded it through teaseme and there appears to be a bug with page431 not existing. in the downloaded xml file, the code for page431 is contained within the code for page430 so i could restore it. it might still work in the flash viewer, i have no idea
I know there was a special program for downloading teases from the webside not just through teaseme. Some teases may cause some problems when downloaded with just teaseme.

I downloaded it through teaseme program and at the end it wrote that there are some errors so i wouldnt reccomend do the same.

Try this viewtopic.php?f=2&t=12944&start=780#p225772
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Re: Just a normal school

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there was just one error and i could fix it. i just wanted to give you a heads up that there might be a bug in the flashtease and to check it out
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Re: Just a normal school

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I backed out of this tease immediately because the "middle schools" graphic implied to me there could be underage content. If you're wondering why this tease has low ratings, that could be part of the problem.
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Re: Just a normal school

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ekralathugu wrote: Sat Feb 17, 2018 4:19 am I backed out of this tease immediately because the "middle schools" graphic implied to me there could be underage content. If you're wondering why this tease has low ratings, that could be part of the problem.
The theme of the middle school has nothing to do with the evaluation.
Tease on this topic is more ... bullying and and have a high rating.
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Re: Just a normal school

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Hey,
played the Webtease several times.
Here my review:

Positive:
- Very good choice of female actors, I enjoyed exploring every path of the game
- Metronome and moaning sounds very much appreciated! Love it
- Texts were mostly free of mistakes and easy to read
- Really loved the tries of the ladies making me cum ;) Tempting sometimes!

Negative:
- 30 seconds for each slide is a little bit long for about 70% of the images & texts
- Some overdrives were not timed with the slide (The metronome finished about 2-3 seconds before the timer ran out)


Overall I really enjoyed playing the tease! For your first Flashtease I salute you to your work.
Thank you! I'm looking forward to your upcoming work.
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Re: Just a normal school

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Liquidorus wrote: Mon Feb 19, 2018 9:44 pm Hey,
played the Webtease several times.
Here my review:

Positive:
- Very good choice of female actors, I enjoyed exploring every path of the game
- Metronome and moaning sounds very much appreciated! Love it
- Texts were mostly free of mistakes and easy to read
- Really loved the tries of the ladies making me cum ;) Tempting sometimes!

Negative:
- 30 seconds for each slide is a little bit long for about 70% of the images & texts
- Some overdrives were not timed with the slide (The metronome finished about 2-3 seconds before the timer ran out)


Overall I really enjoyed playing the tease! For your first Flashtease I salute you to your work.
Thank you! I'm looking forward to your upcoming work.
Thank you for your opinion. I noticed about those overdrives but couldn't repair them all as i can see. I'm really glad you shared your negative notes. I will try to avoid these. Thanks for your support. I appreciate it.
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Re: Just a normal school

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Possible timer missing on page Riadpage191 ... girl on the elevator?
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Re: Just a normal school

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Another possible timer missing on page RIDEpage465 ?
Also one on page431?
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