Just a normal family

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Longplay1
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Just a normal family

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Please let me know how you liked my tease. It was my first one so i would like to know everything you think about it.
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Re: Just a normal family

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I'm glad you wrote so good a tease that has a story.
Good idea with different choice.
Almost no one here these not write. It's rare in teases sex or cum.
I recommend my similar tease: GLADIATOR - be careful there is more exercise there
https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=35828

OR Adventurous Wife ACT2 - The degree of desire

I have only 4 points - maybe more edge , cumming only at the end or only 2x , little femdom ( it does not have to be painful )
stroking or sex you have to earn as a reward but that's just my opinion.
Certainly continue writing - I will rejoice.
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Re: Just a normal family

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FATALES wrote: Sun Dec 31, 2017 5:13 am I'm glad you wrote so good a tease that has a story.
Good idea with different choice.
Almost no one here these not write. It's rare in teases sex or cum.
I recommend my similar tease: GLADIATOR - be careful there is more exercise there
https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=35828

OR Adventurous Wife ACT2 - The degree of desire

I have only 4 points - maybe more edge , cumming only at the end or only 2x , little femdom ( it does not have to be painful )
stroking or sex you have to earn as a reward but that's just my opinion.
Certainly continue writing - I will rejoice.
Thank you for your comment. I have already tried these two you reccomended :)
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Re: Just a normal family

Post by DancingWithMadness »

That was interesting, thanks for all the work.

Some feedback, you might have someone proofread it before you release it in the future. There were a few spelling and grammatical issues.

Again, it was great, thanks!
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