killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Oct 23, 2017 8:10 pmThe option without cage is the 'cage' page, so I took it off :P The way its implemented it doesn't really 'send you back' as such, you just press the right word to progress back to your point. I'm ok with this way of doing it - you can do a little bit of time travel, but not enough to be an issue :PShattered wrote: ↑Mon Oct 23, 2017 7:43 pmWell you already have the version of the page with the word Dimension and not Cage. Seems that one was meant for the initial viewing. I suggest you use that one for the start and also replace the word Edge with something random so it behaves like the others. The other problem is that when you are after the succubus point and click something wrong (such as Submit, Whore, Button) it sends you back instead of just saying "No that's wrong" (or something like that) and remaining on the same selection menu as is done at other places. And also when you click Edge the wrong choices again return you to the beginning instead of just saying that they are wrong. And also you can again click Edge, which doesn't make sense. Those are of course nitpicks nothing major at all. Loving this so far btw. And about the missed it option. When you click it before even clicking succubus shouldn't it send you to just the next page and not the end?killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Oct 23, 2017 7:32 pm
For some of them I have all the words appearing at once, since its possible that you just miss one but see the next. So even though you /should/ click succubus first, I left the option there. Can technically make you go backwards, but eh, I'm fine with that. And what weird stuff for wrong words of missing it? It looks normal for me, could you be more specific?
And missed it is more if you got to the end so there are no more blue words left, clarified that a bit. More of a back up than a button you are supposed to press, y'know
And added the restart button to pages missing it. Lets you get back if you missed the blue
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I knew there was one important thing I missed. Fixed now, thank you. I checked greed and it seemed to be ok?
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Yeah there. Can you say what was supposed to happen, cuz I don't want to do the whole thing up to there again. I mean that specific interaction. I did it again and answered differently. Also added a minor bug in the same reply.
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killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Oct 23, 2017 10:07 pmYeah there. Can you say what was supposed to happen, cuz I don't want to do the whole thing up to there again. I mean that specific interaction. I did it again and answered differently. Also added a minor bug in the same reply.
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Ah, right. I did a ctrl+f for start# but didnt show up?killer1243 wrote: ↑Mon Oct 23, 2017 10:17 pmNo sorry, not on that page.
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I do find it interesting how this tease already has 5k views more than the other one. Like, I thought since Teased by Sin can be played standalone it should have more, but nope 5k less! Very curious :P
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