[FEEDBACK] Chastity Lynn's little Sissy Slut

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bunnie_1975
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Chastity Lynn's little Sissy Slut

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It was great I Liked it a lot hope to see more from you :love:
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Chastity Lynn's little Sissy Slut

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Hi,

Firstly I really loved this tease - right up my street so to speak.

You wanted some feedback. So I loved the whole - you are a girl, here is your name bit. But maybe make the reader use it, write it down, say it out loud etc. The tease was great but short, feel there is more the reader should do to earn a cum. Love the choice of images - but again maybe make us earn the look.

Fab work - keep it up!

Sissy Henry :love:
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Chastity Lynn's little Sissy Slut

Post by shaedey »

It was pretty damn good. It could have been a bit longer though. Keep up the great work :love:
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