Emily's toy feedback

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maniliv
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Emily's toy feedback

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https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=35655

As this is my first ever tease I'd love some feedback. It's not complete though, you can end it but if you're an obedient sub in the beginning the tease is a lot shorter. I figured I'd publish it already so I can get some feedback and maybe improve what I already made. Hopefully I can finish it later today or tomorow.

So please let me know what you think and don't hold back. I appreciate honesty. Typos or spelling corrections are also very welcome.


Also, anyone know how to fix that thumbnail?
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Re: Emily's toy feedback

Post by elvisomar »

I like the premise, and that model is one of the sexiest working today, in my opinion. The tease itself has some good ideas, but for my taste it is far too short. I prefer a tease that lasts 30 minutes at least, and much longer sometimes. I also prefer a slow build up, and definitely some teasing. Don't give up. I don't mean to sound too negative, I'd love it if you took some feedback and made new, even better teases to share. Thank you for your work!
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