Ecchi Joip
- thedarknessintheworld
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Ecchi Joip
hi, today i published my first tease, any feedback would be appreciated
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Re: Ecchi Joip
It was great! Though I wish there was more feet pics for the foot fetishists. Oh and maybe a bit of genital bondage instructions could be nice
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Yes! More foot pictures. You should have multiple ending pages depending on how far you get.
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I love foot pictures too, but i tried to make something less specific as it was my first one, ill add multiple endings on the next one and more fetishes. Thanks for the feedback ^^. Would you like to see any tease based around a spwcific character?
Re: Ecchi Joip
Whoever has nice looking feet!
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Re: Ecchi Joip
If you can find a character that is well drawn (no really bad, tacky drawings) with feet, shoes, heels, nylons, sock etc and make the tease based around them, that'd be great. I often find a tease with a consistent character is better than one where the characters constantly change. Perhaps a succubus character?
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I started working on something like you guys said, i dont know when i will have it finished but it will not take long
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You don't need 100's of pages to make a great Webtease, people don't have hours to sit on.
I would pull all your texts through a grammar checker. This is not absolutely necessary but it would make the tease feel more polished.
You made a great choice on the thumbnail, I hope that continues. I'd also like to see a guided ruined orgasm as well should we fail.
I would pull all your texts through a grammar checker. This is not absolutely necessary but it would make the tease feel more polished.
You made a great choice on the thumbnail, I hope that continues. I'd also like to see a guided ruined orgasm as well should we fail.
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Re: Ecchi Joip
Agree with most of these. More feet please! Just tried the new tease, and it captured all of these requests well. I'd personally like less pain, and more feet related. But everyone has their own fetish. It was still a lot of fun. Edging and denial is always good too, especially as a punishment!
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