FB: Level Competition

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FB: Level Competition

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Hey guys! I have been around on this site for some time, but this is my first time making and publishing a tease. Please post any feedback and suggestions on this thread. I will be sure to look at them and implement any changes and fixes as soon as possible. Thanks for reading this and have fun with the tease. :-)

As for the moderators, if there are any pictures that you believe shouldn't be used, please pm me as soon as possible. I don't want to bring trouble to you guys.

Description: This tease features rooms and decisions that YOU get to make. So make those decisions wisely.....

LINK: https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=34845
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Re: FB: Level Competition

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Welcome and happy to see you here
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Re: FB: Level Competition

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imtoosexy wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:24 am says you joined 2 weeks ago, the first page looks like a commercial ..

have no idea what this site is about
Yeah, I joined two weeks ago, but I was playing with the webteases and cockhero videos ever since 2015 as a guest.
As for the first page, I got the picture from google images, and it is about the fleshlight. If I remember correctly, two other teases have similar pictures. However, perhaps I should have chosen a better one. As for the fleshlight, during the development of the second and third teases, I will incorporate the fleshlight into the next two teases and optimize the speeds for both fleshlight and hand users. Also, sorry if this question sounds dumb, but what do you mean by "have no idea what this site is about"?
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imtoosexy wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:24 am It says you joined 2 weeks ago.

The first page looks like a commercial ..

You have no idea what this site is about

Go use a flashlight
Funny thing is you should check out Uberman's "The Awesome Competition". My tease is inspired by his. Not to mention his tease also recommended the fleshlight although there is no need for it. Another one that I saw is "Pressure II" which is open to both. Also, it is *fleshlight* not flashlight. :-) Plus, I thought this community is open to many styles rather than exclude one type or am I mistaken? I guess the community changed a lot. :-|
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Eh, don't be discouraged.. one person jumped to conclusions, that doesn't say anything about the community.

I haven't done your tease properly.. I checked the start, seemed all right - if a bit simplistic in its "storytelling" or "immersion" however you wanna put it.. I might play it properly later, but I haven't been really into teases lately thou, so, no promises.

Just wanted to balance that weird "you don't belong here" a bit, keep at it, you'll get there :)

EDIT:
I started the tease in the background while typing this, and I think I might have run into an erroneous ending ... when I tabbed back into it, oh, spoilers:
Spoiler: show
when I tabbed back into it, the section Crazy had timed into an end page with the couple moaning with white text "As you were watching, you were deciding if you should go at your own pace or not"... didn't see how it got there, could be intentional, but that doesn't sound like an end page to me :)
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Re: FB: Level Competition

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Hi nerdchat

First of all, :hi: to this lovely community and nice to see you introducing yourself with a webtease :-D

Second - I keep running into errors that freeze up the webtease at some pages(for example the "choose a door"-page, the "arrival"-pages etc.) and it bothers me a little bit because the start of the tease seemed actually pretty good but you've made some mistakes while writing your script which needs to corrected - otherwise the tease won't work as you probably wanted it to.

Don't take my criticism negatively but try looking at it as constructive criticism :smile:

KUTGW and I hope to see much more from your creative hands(and mind!) in the future :thumbsup: ;-)
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FCK88 wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:19 pm Hi nerdchat

First of all, :hi: to this lovely community and nice to see you introducing yourself with a webtease :-D

Second - I keep running into errors that freeze up the webtease at some pages(for example the "choose a door"-page, the "arrival"-pages etc.) and it bothers me a little bit because the start of the tease seemed actually pretty good but you've made some mistakes while writing your script which needs to corrected - otherwise the tease won't work as you probably wanted it to.

Don't take my criticism negatively but try looking at it as constructive criticism :smile:

KUTGW and I hope to see much more from your creative hands(and mind!) in the future :thumbsup: ;-)
Hey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome! :-)

*EDIT: Also, can you please tell me which device did you use to play the tease? Thanks in advance!
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some checkpoints would be appreciated!!! hhaha :smile:
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spaisin wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 2:02 pm Eh, don't be discouraged.. one person jumped to conclusions, that doesn't say anything about the community.
True, true.
spaisin wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 2:02 pm I haven't done your tease properly.. I checked the start, seemed all right - if a bit simplistic in its "storytelling" or "immersion" however you wanna put it.. I might play it properly later, but I haven't been really into teases lately thou, so, no promises.

Just wanted to balance that weird "you don't belong here" a bit, keep at it, you'll get there :)
For the story, I hope to make the second and third parts more "plot twisty" (can't spoil too much :-D ) to make things interesting. Also, as for the "you don't belong here", I guess I made the characters sound a bit too aggressive lol. I will be sure to diversify the second and third parts' characters a lot more. As for the error, I will be sure to check it out and fix it. Also, thanks for the feedback!
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candii wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:32 am some checkpoints would be appreciated!!! hhaha :smile:
Hello! Thanks for the feedback and thank you very much for playing my first tease! I will be sure to add them into the next two parts/teases! Once the trilogy is complete, I will be sure to adding in big updates to make the experience more accessible and fun.
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Re: FB: Level Competition

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nerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:31 am
FCK88 wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:19 pm Hi nerdchat

First of all, :hi: to this lovely community and nice to see you introducing yourself with a webtease :-D

Second - I keep running into errors that freeze up the webtease at some pages(for example the "choose a door"-page, the "arrival"-pages etc.) and it bothers me a little bit because the start of the tease seemed actually pretty good but you've made some mistakes while writing your script which needs to corrected - otherwise the tease won't work as you probably wanted it to.

Don't take my criticism negatively but try looking at it as constructive criticism :smile:

KUTGW and I hope to see much more from your creative hands(and mind!) in the future :thumbsup: ;-)
Hey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome! :-)

*EDIT: Also, can you please tell me which device did you use to play the tease? Thanks in advance!
You're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my side :smile:

I used my hands as my "play toys" (nothing beats THE MIGHTY HANDS! Bwahaha :lol: :lol: )
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FCK88 wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:13 am
nerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:31 am
FCK88 wrote: Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:19 pm Hi nerdchat

First of all, :hi: to this lovely community and nice to see you introducing yourself with a webtease :-D

Second - I keep running into errors that freeze up the webtease at some pages(for example the "choose a door"-page, the "arrival"-pages etc.) and it bothers me a little bit because the start of the tease seemed actually pretty good but you've made some mistakes while writing your script which needs to corrected - otherwise the tease won't work as you probably wanted it to.

Don't take my criticism negatively but try looking at it as constructive criticism :smile:

KUTGW and I hope to see much more from your creative hands(and mind!) in the future :thumbsup: ;-)
Hey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome! :-)

*EDIT: Also, can you please tell me which device did you use to play the tease? Thanks in advance!
You're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my side :smile:

I used my hands as my "play toys" (nothing beats THE MIGHTY HANDS! Bwahaha :lol: :lol: )
:lol: , but on a more serious note, what I meant was the device you used to see the tease like a tablet or laptop or something. Sorry for being very vague!
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Re: FB: Level Competition

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nerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 5:15 am
FCK88 wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:13 am
nerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:31 am

Hey! Thank you very much for trying out the tease, and don't worry about criticizing. I created this thread to receive constructive criticism and feedback like yours, not comments like imtoosexy's. I will be sure to look into the errors and fix them as soon as possible. Also, thanks for the welcome! :-)

*EDIT: Also, can you please tell me which device did you use to play the tease? Thanks in advance!
You're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my side :smile:

I used my hands as my "play toys" (nothing beats THE MIGHTY HANDS! Bwahaha :lol: :lol: )
:lol: , but on a more serious note, what I meant was the device you used to see the tease like a tablet or laptop or something. Sorry for being very vague!
I used my laptop and ran it using the TeaseMe-program - that's where I encountered the many errors :)
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FCK88 wrote: Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:55 pm
nerdchat wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 5:15 am
FCK88 wrote: Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:13 am

You're very welcome - I just didn't want to be misunderstood about what and how I wrote in my post but I'm glad you're looking at it the way it was meant to be from my side :smile:

I used my hands as my "play toys" (nothing beats THE MIGHTY HANDS! Bwahaha :lol: :lol: )
:lol: , but on a more serious note, what I meant was the device you used to see the tease like a tablet or laptop or something. Sorry for being very vague!
I used my laptop and ran it using the TeaseMe-program - that's where I encountered the many errors :)
I think it must be the TeaseMe program since I already tried this tease out on both my tablet and laptop, and it worked fine on both devices. In addition, if the TeaseMe program required optimization, then that must be the reason why you are experiencing errors since I don't know much about it and never optimized this tease. I will look more into that program for more info.
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Re: FB: Level Competition

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Hey guys! I just wanted to say that I am very grateful for your feedback and thank you very much for trying out my tease. I have fixed these listed errors that were in the tease:
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1. The first break after the first edge of Room 2 was 35 minutes. *Fixed to 35 seconds.
2. The very first picture of Room 3's girl wasn't there (at least on my laptop). *Fixed
3. One of the scenes of the room "Crazy" immediately ended the tease. *Fixed
4. p*** *Fixed to "porn"
5. Room 2's dialog regarding an edge. *Fixed
WIP

1. TeaseMe optimization is needed; however, I don't know much about it. So, I will have to do research on it. For now, just don't use the program. I will make a post to announce if I am able to optimize the tease or not (hopefully I am able to).
*UPDATE*: Sorry guys, but unfortunately, for some reason, I can't run the GuideMe program for some reason despite downloading the Java Runtime Engine, and the TeaseMe program seems to not upload recent teases. So, for you TeaseMe and GuideMe users, sorry about that. :-(


Ones that can't be fixed

1. Some of the pictures are heavily blurry. I tried to fix it, but I can't due to how the pictures were taken. So, I am extremely sorry about that. For the next tease, I will be sure to find way better ones.

*IF YOU SEE ANY MORE ERRORS, BUGS, OR WEIRD S***, SHOOT ME A PM OR MAKE A POST ON THIS THREAD!
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