FB + DL: Russian Invasion

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FB + DL: Russian Invasion

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Hello everyone,

you can use this topic for bug-report, rating, feedback and so on.

Tease AI:
Part 1: https://mega.nz/#!xQYhmC5J!eqYopZ_BKaaP ... Z4QvkCf6Nc
Fix 1.1: https://mega.nz/#!YIAlwZjY!Mo6zTfYlVt5t ... fDkFDKm50A

Part 2: https://mega.nz/#!QdxEkZIY!ybAN4uEvh6_X ... 5Bt8XtQ0JI

Part 3: https://mega.nz/#!4AIVQCAJ!LcpDrf44s55o ... K5i7xb33Fc

Part 4: https://mega.nz/#!JUBHWSKa!d1u0tTK5ErR9 ... VL7xezB4YI

Part 5: https://mega.nz/#!0BJWWCoR!Mj3pI5lWj87r ... QkmyOzXEyE (Recommended Items: Chastity Cage)

Part 6 (FINAL): https://mega.nz/#!EI5XzCCY!HxhLXpVq9ZMJ ... xDKwpLPt2o (Recommended Items: A lot. I can't remember them all. Vibrator, dildo, Chastity cage, cloth pins, shoelace, lube, towels, enema kit (or something similar), ... :unsure: )

Meanwhile, have fun.
RayRay

PS: For feedback please use the download announcement teases online.
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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I read the intro and seems interesting, I'll try it out at some point. Have you got a guideme/teaseme made at all?
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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I just did the tease and I absolutly love it. Great idea and way of writing(didn't notice any mistakes, but I'm not english native as well)
I would be more than happy if you could make a part 2.
Thanks for your effort and time you spend creating this tease.
If you make a part 2 make sure, to inform me ;D
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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HI,

This tease seems really interesting :)
According to pixelated pics, i would like to have teaseme / guideme version, as somebody mentioned above.

Keep up your work.

Good job
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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rebekeplex wrote:HI,

This tease seems really interesting :)
According to pixelated pics, i would like to have teaseme / guideme version, as somebody mentioned above.

Keep up your work.

Good job
If I remember correctly, you can just download it via the teaseme application? Does that give full resolution?
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

Post by jayjaysub »

RayRay,

Outstanding job... one of my favorite teases so far... please definitely continue. I'm a native English speaker and I found very few mistakes, and those that were there were not bad enough to distract me.

If everything else is going to be n teaseme / guideme -- please leave instructions on how to get there and how that works.

Thanks again -- great job

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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

Post by pornadd13 »

Just completed part 1 and looking forward to part 2 and hopefully you decide to continue after that. One of my favorite teases already, the metronome is always a big plus to me. Keep up the good work
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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I agree, this is an excellent tease. My only suggestion is that you have a skip button for the story exposition for those playing it a 2nd or 20th time thru. English seems good to me.

Looking forward to part two!
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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i loved this tease a speak English and never seen any mistakes and I hope this turns out to be a long series keep it up rayray77
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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I really appreciate the positive feedback. Didn't expected that :-)

Part 2 is halfway done, but I will take my time for making it (and future parts). I rather put in a little more work and time to do it better than rushing something.

Skip Button will be done right now. Great idea :thumbsup:
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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jackstock wrote:
rebekeplex wrote:HI,

This tease seems really interesting :)
According to pixelated pics, i would like to have teaseme / guideme version, as somebody mentioned above.

Keep up your work.

Good job
If I remember correctly, you can just download it via the teaseme application? Does that give full resolution?

Bruh, i have do idea how to download it, searched some forums, but found nothing. Can someone tell me how to ?


Well, i managed to download it, but the picures are still pixelated - any clue how to fix this ?
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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Really great work. The story is very nice. I just don't get that part why he lost his consciousness outside and woke up inside again.
There are a few minor mistakes, mainly to and too... but overall I'm really looking forward to part 2.
Oh and there is a timer missing, a few timers in that last but one scene. You can't skip and there is no timer or a very, very long timer...
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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rebekeplex wrote:
jackstock wrote:
rebekeplex wrote:HI,

This tease seems really interesting :)
According to pixelated pics, i would like to have teaseme / guideme version, as somebody mentioned above.

Keep up your work.

Good job
If I remember correctly, you can just download it via the teaseme application? Does that give full resolution?

Bruh, i have do idea how to download it, searched some forums, but found nothing. Can someone tell me how to ?


Well, i managed to download it, but the picures are still pixelated - any clue how to fix this ?
Try fullscreen. Other than that, there is probably no way
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

Post by dragoul »

I really liked it! I would have loved a little more nipple torture though. Looking forward to the next part!
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Re: FB: Russian Invasion (Part 1)

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ThomasKu wrote: Oh and there is a timer missing, a few timers in that last but one scene. You can't skip and there is no timer or a very, very long timer...
Should be fixed now. I don't know why, but Nyx just killed the timers at the transfer.
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