Frozen88 wrote:- Spoiler: show
jhorny10493 wrote:
Have you finished the tease?
No, was already very horny, when I started your tease.
But couldn't restrain myself to overview part 1-3 of the tease and because of this thread also the last few pages
Did you get through it in one sitting?
No
If not, where do you lose it? Or where did you give up?
Because of me already being very sensitive, i struggled soon after the beginning.
But when I met Michelle, my Cock surrendered very fast.
- stunning redhead
- As Angel of Lust a mysterios beeing
- is mean and wants me to ruin my orgasm.
A love-hate relationship, which gets me very horny and weak. Page 191 and following were too much for me.
What was your favorite part?
Michelle and more overall the godesses and angels. It was a pity I didn't see one of them in the later acts.
What was your least favorite part?
Every Part I saw, was great! Part 2 and 3 weren't that creative and somehow similar, but still great.
Arguing at a high level
What do you think of the direction for my next tease?
I can't wait.
Maybe more of Michelle, Kaydn and the others
Stroking, Edging, Fanatsy/Magic, great girls, great style, ruined orgasm as punishment. Sign me in!
Is the series boring/over done or would you actually like to see more?
The easiest question: more!
Was the metronome alright? Did it lag at a certain pace?
Liked it
Did it not load at all at some parts?
Loaded everything
Let me know!
Thanks!
Other Information:
Special Thanks Explanation:
I can finally go deeper with the information on this.
With the special thanks being accessed at the beginning I did not want to put the information in there and ruin it.
The section ariareflection gave me an idea for was the stroke mechanics with the Angel of Time.
I thought Act I was dragging on a little long and decided not to make an Angel for the Goddess of Time.
I felt that the wash, rinse, repeat cycle of the Goddess section would make people feel bored.
Then he reminded me about the "Do a number of strokes before time runs out." which made perfect sense for an Angel of Time.
One of the best teases so far!
Will try it again tomorrow
I love the Goddess parts the best as well.
The next tease is going to move to ALL goddess/angels/other beings.
That's where my creativity strives the most because I can create, basically, anything.
I originally planned to have a more in depth Part I.
I originally planned for Part I to be twice as long.
But i thought the story and creativity would work better in a separate tease.
I also did not want people to get numb or tired of the Goddess concept that was mixed in with reality.
As far as my creativity of Part II & III.
I agree, it could have been more creative.
However, i was somewhat limited with imagination.
It would have been even less creative if I did not have a random idea of throwing some futuristic technology in there.
I thought of that idea halfway through Part II.
Thank you for your honesty and feedback!