Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
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Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
I decided to publish a longer preview of the new fantasy/adventure tease I've been working on for weeks now. You can view it here - https://milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=30545
I'm going to be breaking it up into three parts, because it's turning out to be much longer than I had originally planned. What you're seeing here is a little less than half of the first part and I'd like to hear everyone's opinions on the content so far. There are likely a couple of typos here and there, but those will be corrected when part one goes live at the end of this month.
For the tease, you'll want to have lube, a cock ring, and an optional fleshlight for certain scenes. The collar is also optional, but may add to the immersion...
Update: Fixed a broken timer/button and the glitch during the session with Ellyria that prevents you from moving forward. Should work perfectly now.
I'm going to be breaking it up into three parts, because it's turning out to be much longer than I had originally planned. What you're seeing here is a little less than half of the first part and I'd like to hear everyone's opinions on the content so far. There are likely a couple of typos here and there, but those will be corrected when part one goes live at the end of this month.
For the tease, you'll want to have lube, a cock ring, and an optional fleshlight for certain scenes. The collar is also optional, but may add to the immersion...
Update: Fixed a broken timer/button and the glitch during the session with Ellyria that prevents you from moving forward. Should work perfectly now.
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
Sorry man, I wanna do part 1 as a whole...
Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
This tease has great promise. Fantasy: check, story-based: check, high production values: check. Wish you luck in completing it!
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I liked the preview as well! Looking forward for the first part! :) I am glad it has the fleshlight-friendly aspects!!
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
Thats awesome! can't wait the full tease. When would it be availbe? o.O
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
It would have been done this weekend, but work had other ideas. I'll be on vacation between the 7th and the 21st, so that should give me plenty of time to finish up part one.rosasolmu wrote:Thats awesome! can't wait the full tease. When would it be availbe? o.O
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
Thanks for making this. By far the best tease I have found here. Your story is quite compelling.
Thanks again and hope to see more of it soon.
Cheers.
Thanks again and hope to see more of it soon.
Cheers.
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Is the full tease available?
Did I miss it?
Did I miss it?
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
This story is wonderful and the tease is beautifully designed. Take your time but I want to see more!
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I'm curious to know if there's going to be an update to this tease. I loved the preview, can't wait to see how far it goes. Any updates ?
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
Are we still waiting on part 1 or did I miss it?
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Hey r0nin47,
Are you there? I hope you will release the full version of the tease and it is not already dead. Would be sad.
best wishes,
tom
Are you there? I hope you will release the full version of the tease and it is not already dead. Would be sad.
best wishes,
tom
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
Great tease, hopefully it gets completed soon.
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
This is definitely one of my favorite teases....will there ever be another part to this??
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Re: Feedback - The Mystical Realm of Myrewood Isle
I have news, finally! I've gone and given the tease an overhaul, along with a much longer, and hopefully more memorable cliffhanger ending to prepare you for part two, which should be done within the week.
I appreciate all the great feedback people have given me, and I apologize for disappearing for so long. Real life threw some unfortunate things my way, but I've bounced back.
I appreciate all the great feedback people have given me, and I apologize for disappearing for so long. Real life threw some unfortunate things my way, but I've bounced back.
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