Venus in Summer - Parts 1-5

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Venus in Summer - Parts 1-5

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Hi good people! So i have written a few series of stories and i thought i would share the latest one here.

I used Blogspot as it's easier to post the pictures and gifs so it flows a little better, for me personally anyway.

Let me know if you like it...i always appriciate comments.

I have a style where i use slow build up in my writing. Things always escalte as the story goes on.

http://willcmmstories.blogspot.com/2019 ... r-one.html
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I really enjoyed the story and can't wait to read more. I really enjoyed the teasing, it felt very natural. The images also worked very well in the story. There were just enough but not too many to break up the flow of the story itself.
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Wow! I really loved both the story and the teasing. It's very well written and I can't stop reading it.
Too bad that there are just 5 chapters because you left me with blue balls too! :\'-(
I'm looking forward to read the next chapters!
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Super hot teasing! I really liked the photos in between!
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Wow! :w00t:
It was an amazing read for sure. The story was so addictive, I had to read it all! Really enjoyed it, hope you release another chapter soon!
I feel as teased as Ethan :blush:
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